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Your love pulses through my veins – Soft, always gentleExtremes in revitalising from your touch
Sensitivity rumbles through the air
A slight breeze, reaching your heart filled with sadness, remorse and longing
Longing for a better place, a better time, a better world, someone better
But all I want is you, to be able to feel your heart beating in perfect harmony with mine, enabling us to escape from our lives, maybe if we just closed our eyes, we could enter each other, the utmost in love, an aura of content and satisfaction.
Keep this, just for one moment, before it is gone, as afterwards, the only joy will be the memories, and what good are memories, if they have no basis, and are non-existent?
Your love pulses through my veins. I can feel it, growing inside me, reaching my soul and clasping on tight, to never let go
The touch of your cold hands on a warm day, shivers of appreciation ring through my spine, as the shock of impulse enters my brain and buries itself deeply.
A twisting sequential maze of the finest golden hairs rippling gently through my fingers, smoother than silk, fine as the sun setting softly over a pool of darkness and shadow, preserving forever a calm evening in late spring in its utmost tranquillity, flowing on, over your shoulders, cut evenly far below, farther than the eye can see, more precise than a surgeon’s insection.
Oct. ‘02
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Comments: 5
shadowswillshine [2005-01-11 01:05:59 +0000 UTC]
Oh, this is beautiful! the last line, with the surgeon, is a little jarring, but not enough to take away from the whole piece. The adoration and detail of a love that goes beyond the brain's mere capacity to admire, and straight into the wonder of something almost spiritual, is... breathtaking. Cheers to that!
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zephyrus7 In reply to shadowswillshine [2005-01-11 23:35:24 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for leaving such a marvellously complimentary and insightful comment!
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DanielMellor [2004-05-02 12:25:47 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful imagery; the cold in the warmth is a nice one.
My favorite partof this poem is without question the phrase 'Your love pulses through my veins'. It suggests to me the feeling is preading through your whole body, comsuming and possessing it. The term pulsing makes it seem even more powerful. Very nice!
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zephyrus7 In reply to DanielMellor [2004-05-02 21:04:42 +0000 UTC]
Thankee kindly, lovely to hear such praise. Might go have a look at your work now actually.
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