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Zerion — Im not used to humans (Shino Intro) P01
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Published: 2015-10-20 06:22:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 9764; Favourites: 87; Downloads: 0
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The results of today's stream!I planned to get all 5-6 pages done, but this is all I got
I'm really not used to drawing manga, but I hope it reads well (sorry for that wall of text, I was hoping for a blahblahblahBOOM effect)
comicking advice very welcome
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You're only supposed to blow the bloody doors off!
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I didn't even have to see the title or the relevant part of the teacher's warning; the crack in the wall gave all the context needed. lol
It looks as good as I'd expect from you--very clean/sharp, and easy on the eyes.
There is just one thing: manga (like all typical Japanese text media) typically reads from right to left. This one appears to read from left to right. It threw me off for a moment, so if you intend to have it read from left to right, you might want to inform your audience--that is, if they expect all aspects of a manga's style.
That being said, I'm looking forward to the next installments.
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Oh yeah, I thought you guys preferred it the other way
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This is a very good drawing.
Why do I think with the big boom "Wrecking Ball" from Miley Cyrus?!
That will mostly cost a lot to the school now with Shino..
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Quite an entrance indeed.It is read from left to right,right?The little panel which the teacher is coughing should at least,place on the right side so the people who rarely read comics won't feel "lost" trying to read this.Minor panel placement aside,this is still well worth the times and efforts.
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Shino LOL She knows how to make an entrance lol
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"WHO IS GONNA HAVE TO CLEAN THIS MESS? THE JANITOR" -janitor
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