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Published: 2006-03-16 22:16:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 60; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Made of plastic.His innards a tangled mess of wires.
Body showing wear with age
and rust from time.
A beating heart
would be helpful
a soul
would be wishful,
and blood instead of oil
would make him happy.
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Comments: 6
i like the seperated detached feeling conveyed; seperate but wishing to be connected
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twas the basic idea i started with
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ok so here's the deal, this is one revision for this poem. not sure where else i'm going with it. i want to extend it more, but am unsure how. let me know what you guys think.
-john
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Digital Boy
Encased within
a rusty frame.
His innards a mess
of tangled wires.
A beating heart
would be helpful
to feel anything
must be a sin.
Tired of reasoning
found in a push of a button.
And a connection
no one can feel.
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Glad to see your posting. Nice piece. Lots of visual imagery
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hey yeah thanks...it's been a while since i've come up with anything.
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