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-Designing is the key element of drawing. It helps expressing the meaning of the idea, a message and the character's personnality.

Even though I do art for therapy and fun, which I don't have an artistic goal, analyse artworks help to express my thought better.

Thus, after thinking a lot about the Ayyk92's comic, I have never understand the appeal of the Bowsette's lazy design toward easly-influenced viewers. Heck, even the name is lazy (it's not Toadette turned into Bowser). Ayyk92 lacks imagination as he is a comic artist, telling jokes is his domain. If he has many ressources and the understanding of Bowser's design, Bowsette's will be better.

I will explain why Bowsette's design is lazy. Let's take a look on a psychanalyse aspect.

I deduce it is a spontaneous idea. It is relevant on the publishing date after the new trailer but as I am judging the design, this factor is excluded.

The other relevant and poignant detail for an art critic is the color: Black was the first color that come in mind but is a lazy choice for a villain. Who need the black color to be a villain? Bowser's prominent color is orange (previously green) and he is the villain of the serie.

And that's not it, there is a particular detail that I would like to points out. In automatic drawing, the artist use every ressources he has in mind or close to them. Guess which source Ayyk92 has used to design Bowsette? Peach wedding outfit.

Peach represents the purity, the virtue chastity and an angel identity (Striker Charged Football reference ). Bowsette is the opposite, representing impurity, the vice lust and the demon identity. No doubt most of you took him (Bowsette is still male) as an objectify material while ignoring his true identity. He is an illusion, a facade. This is the effect that Ayyk92 didn't notice but did work on audience.

It is a black/white spectrum, the Yin and the Yang, the basic of Good versus Evil. Notice that both dresses look similar.

The 1st and 4th case accentued this point. We first begin with a proposal scene, as chastity is being virgin until marriage, and then on an everyday scene, here at the tennis court, alias before marriage.

It is why this 4-cases comic has a bad message. Mario and Bowser are so desasperate for Peach that Bowser, the king koopa himself, transform himself into a Peach copy to fulfill the couple essence. It's not with flowers you can get someone heart!

Au passage, adding texts help to understand the case in comics. Due to a lack of text, that describe their thought, it is up to the reader interpretation. As I used to analyse books, popular genre is focused on action, character's thinking rarely interfere. Consequence, Bowser is using the super crown without thinking!

And to make think worst, popular genre is putting the readers first, much like fan-service. One reason I hate this genre, it is badly used (and is a result of degrading education).

Now, we turn on Bowsette's overall look. It is hard to regonize Bowser in this Super Crown form. Peachette , with her innoncent and perkiness, make her regonizable while having Peach features. So, why Bowser, a koopa king that capture the princess on regular basis, turned into a litteral carbon copy of Peach? I can take the previous point. Bowser, even wearing a princess transforming item, can hardly ressemble her, both mentality and physically.

This is what I notice when I redesign Bowsette to make it more canon. (Which unfortunaly bring me to the human version of Bowser.) Bowsette doesn't look like an intimidating character that minions admired and that Toads fear. It is what hapenned when we don't study the character that help holding the design correctly.

Ayyk92, if you are reading, don't take this as an offense. I know that you are doing comics for fun. This is an artistic designer's point of view. It hapenned to have an art with a bad message. Same goes with some of my previous art. I also don't mind that my writing work has them. When they spot it, it proofs that readers are not fooled and resist to this influence.

I hope this critic help you and many artists around.

Good luck and happy drawing.

Made with GIMP

Mario, Luigi, Peach, Bowser and the Super Crown from the Mario serie by Nintendo

Super Crown Comic and Bowsette by ayyk92

Description

-Designing is the key element of drawing. It helps expressing the meaning of the idea, a message and the character's personnality.

Even though I do art for therapy and fun, which I don't have an artistic goal, analyse artworks help to express my thought better.

Thus, after thinking a lot about the Ayyk92's comic, I have never understand the appeal of the Bowsette's lazy design toward easly-influenced viewers. Heck, even the name is lazy (it's not Toadette turned into Bowser). Ayyk92 lacks imagination as he is a comic artist, telling jokes is his domain. If he has many ressources and the understanding of Bowser's design, Bowsette's will be better.

I will explain why Bowsette's design is lazy. Let's take a look on a psychanalyse aspect.

I deduce it is a spontaneous idea. It is relevant on the publishing date after the new trailer but as I am judging the design, this factor is excluded.

The other relevant and poignant detail for an art critic is the color: Black was the first color that come in mind but is a lazy choice for a villain. Who need the black color to be a villain? Bowser's prominent color is orange (previously green) and he is the villain of the serie.

And that's not it, there is a particular detail that I would like to points out. In automatic drawing, the artist use every ressources he has in mind or close to them. Guess which source Ayyk92 has used to design Bowsette? Peach wedding outfit.

Peach represents the purity, the virtue chastity and an angel identity (Striker Charged Football reference ). Bowsette is the opposite, representing impurity, the vice lust and the demon identity. No doubt most of you took him (Bowsette is still male) as an objectify material while ignoring his true identity. He is an illusion, a facade. This is the effect that Ayyk92 didn't notice but did work on audience.

It is a black/white spectrum, the Yin and the Yang, the basic of Good versus Evil. Notice that both dresses look similar.

The 1st and 4th case accentued this point. We first begin with a proposal scene, as chastity is being virgin until marriage, and then on an everyday scene, here at the tennis court, alias before marriage.

It is why this 4-cases comic has a bad message. Mario and Bowser are so desasperate for Peach that Bowser, the king koopa himself, transform himself into a Peach copy to fulfill the couple essence. It's not with flowers you can get someone heart!

Au passage, adding texts help to understand the case in comics. Due to a lack of text, that describe their thought, it is up to the reader interpretation. As I used to analyse books, popular genre is focused on action, character's thinking rarely interfere. Consequence, Bowser is using the super crown without thinking!

And to make think worst, popular genre is putting the readers first, much like fan-service. One reason I hate this genre, it is badly used (and is a result of degrading education).

Now, we turn on Bowsette's overall look. It is hard to regonize Bowser in this Super Crown form. Peachette , with her innoncent and perkiness, make her regonizable while having Peach features. So, why Bowser, a koopa king that capture the princess on regular basis, turned into a litteral carbon copy of Peach? I can take the previous point. Bowser, even wearing a princess transforming item, can hardly ressemble her, both mentality and physically.

This is what I notice when I redesign Bowsette to make it more canon. (Which unfortunaly bring me to the human version of Bowser.) Bowsette doesn't look like an intimidating character that minions admired and that Toads fear. It is what hapenned when we don't study the character that help holding the design correctly.

Ayyk92, if you are reading, don't take this as an offense. I know that you are doing comics for fun. This is an artistic designer's point of view. It hapenned to have an art with a bad message. Same goes with some of my previous art. I also don't mind that my writing work has them. When they spot it, it proofs that readers are not fooled and resist to this influence.

I hope this critic help you and many artists around.

Good luck and happy drawing.

Made with GIMP

Mario, Luigi, Peach, Bowser and the Super Crown from the Mario serie by Nintendo

Super Crown Comic and Bowsette by ayyk92