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Published: 2014-04-26 21:45:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 11967; Favourites: 140; Downloads: 14
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Description My reimagining of the Ben 10 fake alien, Unitaur.

Hero Name: Uniburn

Species Name: Monocerian

Powers/Abilities: Using the sphere at its hoof, it moves at 150 mph, Using his lower body/leg he can spring himself up 30 feet

Weaknesses: His horn

Additional Information: Uniburn's horn generates power that goes to his visor and his sphere. Uniburn can land from a high falls safely because his leg has natural shocker absorbers to soften his impact. Before Monocerians used spheres to get around, they used to hop from place to place.
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Comments: 72

SeleneTlk [2018-01-10 03:17:34 +0000 UTC]

So this is where shadow for the idea for the fanfic

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Zigwolf In reply to SeleneTlk [2018-01-11 05:22:13 +0000 UTC]

Huh ?

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Shadow-DJ [2017-03-02 23:41:08 +0000 UTC]

Also...it cool if I do some...slight edits to my take on Slamstrike and Uniburn? ;;

I'll sayI got he idea from you, but I had my own idea for powers for Uniburn and Slamstrike

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Zigwolf In reply to Shadow-DJ [2017-03-04 02:02:34 +0000 UTC]

Sure, they're not my aliens, just my take on those fake ones. So feel free to do what you want.

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Shadow-DJ In reply to Zigwolf [2017-03-04 02:05:40 +0000 UTC]

Okay XP

Thinking that Uniburn for example could have Kinetic energy absorbing power? Basically the wheel can store energy to fire it out in out.

While Slamstrike could pull a Z Move

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Zigwolf In reply to Shadow-DJ [2017-03-06 19:27:10 +0000 UTC]

Maybe, that power does seem possible but you'd need to go into detail how that power works for this particular alien.

I know what a Z move is but I'm not getting what you're saying here.

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Shadow-DJ In reply to Zigwolf [2017-03-06 19:54:10 +0000 UTC]

Thinking that his wheel could store it up into his horn via absorbing the energy from it's spinning and it fires out like small orane orbs of energy (Or big ones if he charges it up)

And I mean like this:

www.youtube.com/watch?v=NYFLiw…

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Zigwolf In reply to Shadow-DJ [2017-03-11 07:40:40 +0000 UTC]

That first idea sounds plausible, energy orbs sound a bit iffy.

So, do you mean the Uniburn would get a huge burst of energy needed for a particular attack ?

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Shadow-DJ In reply to Zigwolf [2017-03-11 13:02:39 +0000 UTC]

The horn hires it out based on those "golden oranges" that unitaur fires ;;

Not really. ;; the clip is for Slamstrike ;;

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Zigwolf In reply to Shadow-DJ [2017-03-12 00:25:38 +0000 UTC]

Ok, I see how that works, but have you thought of how his body makes that happen ?

Ok, I'm still not getting the whole Z-Move angle.

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Shadow-DJ In reply to Zigwolf [2017-03-12 00:30:32 +0000 UTC]

Yes I have. His 'Wheel' is more like a small pearl-like orb that allows for him to move around (kinda like XLR8's wheel but much bigger and more transulcent)  and transfers the energy from it and into his horn, (Which is the same material as the sphere under him but less transulucent) and it can absorb kinetic energy. His hooves on his hands are also made out of the same material as his horns, thus allowing him to absorb kinetic energy from attacks.

And what I mean is that SLamstrike is able to create concusive bursts of energy form his palms ;; Similar to how the All out Pummeling works, it's how it comes out; palm striking the air releases bursts of enrgy.

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Zigwolf In reply to Shadow-DJ [2017-03-13 06:56:08 +0000 UTC]

Ok, that makes sense and sounds plausible. Good work

I get what your going for, but energy bursts from the hands sounds a little out of nowhere since energy control isn't in Slamstrike's powerset

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Shadow-DJ In reply to Zigwolf [2017-03-13 13:09:45 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

My take. ;; plus the energy comes from the bulbs on its arms ;;

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Zigwolf In reply to Shadow-DJ [2017-03-13 21:10:14 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

Ok, I guess that makes sense.

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Shadow-DJ In reply to Zigwolf [2017-03-13 21:32:25 +0000 UTC]

I am giving them some actual purpose instead of them just being...well, there. ;; As you said, something about the biology needs to make sense with the powers. SO basically his bulbs store up energy and can release them from his palms.

Though a downside is that his above-average hands aren't exactly...well, delicate as you can imagine

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Zigwolf In reply to Shadow-DJ [2017-03-15 06:07:31 +0000 UTC]

Ok, good work.

Yeah, it's nearly impossible for him to pick up small objects.

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Shadow-DJ In reply to Zigwolf [2017-03-15 06:09:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanks XP

Eyeah. WHICH can maybe lead to funny moments later on when using hat form for...well, certain tasks. (Heck, maybe trying to dial a phone would be nigh-impossible with htose meaty fingers)

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Zigwolf In reply to Shadow-DJ [2017-03-15 18:30:00 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

Now that would be funny

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Shadow-DJ In reply to Zigwolf [2017-03-15 19:34:06 +0000 UTC]

xP also had a funny idea for my current episode where Ben finds what (likely most dno't believe) is a rotten piece of Amber Ogia...and it basically turns into a piece of glue in his hand, basically making him get into a sort of sticky spot.

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Zigwolf In reply to Shadow-DJ [2017-03-15 21:37:52 +0000 UTC]

I'm digging that situation as well

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Shadow-DJ In reply to Zigwolf [2017-03-15 21:42:07 +0000 UTC]

XP Thanks

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NeosTH2001 [2017-02-20 16:31:30 +0000 UTC]

I can see one of Ben's aliens being like a Symbiote, but with this for the alien design:


img11.deviantart.net/cb4c/i/20…


Description:
Symbiotes are like Galvanic Mechamorphs, except they can control living beings and not machines. They originate from Planet Symbios in the Marvel Sector, which is the same sector that Planet Earth of the main series originates from, except in a parallel timeline known as The 10. When Ben enters The 10's timeline, he discovers that The 10 is his Marvel counterpart, and lands on Planet Symbios, fighting an alien similar to Carnage, and getting a Symbiote sample.
An alternate, alien name for a Symbiote could be a Galvanic Suitmorph.

Name Possibilities:
Galvaniote or Suitbiote

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Zigwolf In reply to NeosTH2001 [2017-02-21 23:53:23 +0000 UTC]

Yup, I made one of those already.

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Shadow-DJ [2016-08-22 19:27:24 +0000 UTC]

I am gonna guess this alien is better for scouting than full on combat, yes? Unless he can get a god speeding start and rams into someone rom behind. Because he doesn't seem to be the most physically strong alien ;;

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Zigwolf In reply to Shadow-DJ [2016-08-23 00:38:27 +0000 UTC]

While this is a quick alien suited for scouting it can use its sphere for offensive capabilities like getting on top of large enemies and quickly spinning his sphere in one spot causing burns underneath it.

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Shadow-DJ In reply to Zigwolf [2016-08-23 04:17:06 +0000 UTC]

Ah, that works XP

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Demon653 [2015-11-12 02:15:28 +0000 UTC]

I like this version better than the one in the show. Great job.

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Zigwolf In reply to Demon653 [2015-11-14 20:25:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Holycrap1992 [2015-01-13 06:02:29 +0000 UTC]

Perfect for high-speed parkour.

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Zigwolf In reply to Holycrap1992 [2015-01-13 07:16:09 +0000 UTC]

Couldn't of said it better myself, and if you want to know how he looks when he moves, when he's moving it's a lot like how the Arcee sisters move during the beginning chase scene of Transformers: Revenge of the Fallen.

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Holycrap1992 In reply to Zigwolf [2015-01-13 07:50:28 +0000 UTC]

Oh, God-fucking-damnit, that movie sucked rancid balls!!!

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Zigwolf In reply to Holycrap1992 [2015-01-13 07:59:13 +0000 UTC]

Oooh yeah, that movie (and the other sequels) needs to be wiped away from existence.

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Holycrap1992 In reply to Zigwolf [2015-01-13 08:56:30 +0000 UTC]

Thankfully, Michael Bay is supposedly(keyword: supposedly) retiring from the Transformers franchise. Hopefully, this means that someone with actual vision and/or passion(outside of just explosions, bad acting, offensive "humor," and American patriot-porn) will be able to take the reigns and we can get a truely great Transformers movie franchise(also, actually focus on the Transformers this time, damnit!!!).

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Zigwolf In reply to Holycrap1992 [2015-01-13 20:40:15 +0000 UTC]

I heard that too but unfortunately even if it is true, he's now ruining another childhood favorite of mine, TMNT. He was only the producer of the movie but it had the stink of his "Bayism" all over it. I say reboot Transformers, I hate how a lot of movies are getting rebooted but I think that Bay has run Transformers into the ground too much and it needs a proper start again.

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Holycrap1992 In reply to Zigwolf [2015-01-13 21:19:18 +0000 UTC]

Agreed on both points. Megan Fox as April, the turtles being enormous hulks with shells, the Foot Clan being military soldiers with guns, Shredder being a rich business man inside a giant Ironman suit with spikes all over it... yeeeaah, I think I'll pass.

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Zigwolf In reply to Holycrap1992 [2015-01-14 02:52:47 +0000 UTC]

She didn't even look or act close to any kind of April O'Neil we've ever seen. I thought of them as Shreks with Shells when I first saw them. The whole Foot Clan with guns never made sense, I mean they have guns while their master has blades and I hated the reason they explained to being named the Foot Clan. OH!! The Shredder thing really made me PO'd, you could tell they made reshoots because Shredder wasn't even that big of a deal in this movie and the rich white guy was more important. So somehow the rich white guy being Shredder was their start and in trying to fix it they made it way worse. I don't mind the suit used in the movie because it was kinda cool, though mask made it look like a mini Megatron and the whole switching Shredder thing made me not like it as much.

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Holycrap1992 In reply to Zigwolf [2015-01-14 03:39:16 +0000 UTC]

The movie was doomed to be God-awful the second they revealed that Michael Bay was attached to it...

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Zigwolf In reply to Holycrap1992 [2015-01-14 04:34:47 +0000 UTC]

It didn't stand a chance. I bet in the next movie we're gonna get Bebop and Rocksteady and they're going to be as racist as Mudflap and Skids were. We're gonna get more ass shots of Megan Fox.  Mikey is going to up the dirty jokes towards April. More unnecessary slow motion. More shameless product placing. And finally, like Transformers and the first TMNT, we're going to less of the titular characters because they're CGI and no one wants to shell out the extra cash to have them throughout the entire movie, so most of it will be the less liked live action characters.

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Holycrap1992 In reply to Zigwolf [2015-01-14 06:09:53 +0000 UTC]

... The fact that this sounds even the slightest bit likely depresses me to no end.

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Zigwolf In reply to Holycrap1992 [2015-01-14 20:32:52 +0000 UTC]

Same here, I'm not even gonna go pay to see that movie and support that garbage getting another sequel. If I was curious about it the I'd see if it was anywhere online or see the plot summary on themoviespoiler.com, but I won't ever give out even the smallest amount of money to go see another Michael Bay movie.

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Holycrap1992 In reply to Zigwolf [2015-01-14 21:36:16 +0000 UTC]

I quit giving him money since RoTF.

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Zigwolf In reply to Holycrap1992 [2015-01-15 01:17:54 +0000 UTC]

Lucky you.

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Holycrap1992 In reply to Zigwolf [2015-01-15 01:20:11 +0000 UTC]

Indeed... though, sadly, that doesn't seem to stop him from making insulting amounts of money.

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Zigwolf In reply to Holycrap1992 [2015-01-15 01:37:47 +0000 UTC]

and it doesn't stop Argit from coming around a lot to try and scam Ra'ad out of money with "business proposals"

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Holycrap1992 In reply to Zigwolf [2015-01-15 04:21:49 +0000 UTC]

True... though, I have a feeling that Ra'ad would figure-out, pretty quickly, what kind of person Argit is(since he's far from stupid and seems quite reluctant to trust others).

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Zigwolf In reply to Holycrap1992 [2015-01-15 04:55:25 +0000 UTC]

Yeah he doesn't trust Argit all that much because like you said he would see through him easily. But Argit's very annoying to be around so to get him to go away Ra'ad gives into Argit's deal. What Argit doesn't know is that Ra'ad messed with the crystals that he gave so that after a few hours they end up sapping energy around them instead of expelling it. Leaving ships "dead in the water" and leaving Argit with a lot of very angry customers that he sold them to.

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Holycrap1992 In reply to Zigwolf [2015-01-15 21:40:06 +0000 UTC]

Thus, expertly scamming the scammer... like a baws.

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Zigwolf In reply to Holycrap1992 [2015-01-16 04:26:58 +0000 UTC]

Lol.

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DisneyBrony2025 [2014-12-13 03:52:34 +0000 UTC]

You turned that fake alien into a worthy alien form Ben oughta have! I love it!

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Zigwolf In reply to DisneyBrony2025 [2014-12-16 03:59:34 +0000 UTC]

Glad you do. I always see potential for good ideas in everything including fake aliens.

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