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Published: 2016-05-12 22:40:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 1003; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 0
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My, I've been posting an awful lot of couple pictures lately, haven't I? Well, this is the last one for now, I think. After all, I don't want people to start thinking I actually have a heart or something.
Well, here are Kalas and Madeen, enjoying some of their scarce time in intimate togetherness. They see each other only once a year and it's always special for them. For Mad I think, because each year takes him closer to his freedom, and for Kalas, because he knows that every year could be his last. And because they happen to love each other, of course. Even though they're both so shy to admit it.
Madeen is 's OC.
Kalas is my OC.
They're both from our original RPG.
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I'll start with how much I really enjoy the flow of the piece! I can see the emotion and feeling in the drawing and I think you portrayed that very well. You attention to detail is well on it's way to being awesome!
The only thing I could suggest is working on the anatomy and trying to work on the details.
Anatomy
As Yuukon has said, the one with the blonde hair has too high of a forehead, or at least the eyes could certainly be lowered towards the nose. To add, the brunette should have the jaws a little less protruding,as of right now, it looks a little like a muzzle, especially if she is licking(?) him, it looks more animal like >~<
Details
You're on a good start to adding details to the hair, but I think you can add more highlights and strands of hair to the actual locks of hair. You did that a little to the both, but maybe try to use a thinner brush, to make them pop out more, especially on top of the heads, again, great start to the hair! The last thing I want to cover is the skin, you've made them extremely smooth and silky, the only thing I think can be changed is the shading, although it's not black, the shading could use a lighter shade in different areas, the lighting is extremely bright, and therefore should have more shading in certain areas such as the hair (you added a little bit but it's not drastic enough). You can also add darker shading to the brunette since it is seen that he is behind the blonde.
I think you have amazing talent and you really did an amazing job! I really hope this helps you in the slightest bit and you continue to draw just as well as now! Good luck! Can't wait to see more! 
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Thank you for your feedback, it is helpful.
I have to put one little misconception aside first: Madeen and Kalas are both men. ^^
I see your points about the facial anatomy. I really need to practise different facial perspectives. I'll also keep in mind you're advice on details and shading.
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Ahaha yeah I realized after I typed that up and I totally forgot to change it! I'm sorry >~<
I hope I was of any help to you! Keep up the amazing work!
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Don't worry, mistakes like that happen to me, too. XD
Thanks, I'll certainly do my best.
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I'm glad I'm not the only one then! XD
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This is a very lovely drawing! I very much enjoy the colours, and the hair looks very good, almost realistic! Though, the forehead of the blonde person seems a little too short for normal human proportions, if that is what you were going for. I think that, if you lenghten the forehead a bit, or move the eyes down a little, the human proportions look a bit more human
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Thank you!
You're right about the forehead, it's definitely too short. I'm still struggling with perspective, need to practise some more, I guess. ^^
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