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Mountain Stormrobot
Published: 2010-03-09 07:17:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 15989; Favourites: 650; Downloads: 352
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Special Robot drones storm a position on a mountain.It's my first robot ^^
5-6 hrs worktime
Photoshop, Wacom, Coffee and Subway xD
yay, painting is so much fun >.< I can't stop it...
WOW, thanks for the DD
Here is a other snow painting:
[link] [link]
I hope you like it
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Is it just me, or does something about those drones resemble the Aperture Science turrets in the game Portal?
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Haha, yeah, I thought that too!
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was ich dir noch "sagen" wollte!(lol kΓΆnnt ich auch am do in der schule machen..) ich finds hammer wie du dich immer mehr perfektionierst und trotzdem so eine tolle person bleibst wie du bist! echt klasse arbeit! ich bin stolz auf dich
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wow, vielen vielen dank fΓΌr die super netten worte...
ich bin echt glΓΌcklich dich kennen gelernt zu haben und bin auch froh das es dich gibt. DU magst es nicht glauben, aber du einer der wichtigsten personen in meinem Umfeld und stolz drauf dich zu kennen
Klinkt zwar kitchig, aber ich will dich nie mehr missen und selbst in nΓΌrnberg will ich dich weiterhin regelmΓ€Γig sehen
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Really excellent! 
Wow,, coffee and subway... was there a lot of people?
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hey, thanks a lot
I want to edit the snow tomorrow I think
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reminds me of the geth armatures from mass effect.
very nice
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The missile and smoke trail does not look convincing at all. There is a lot of smoke but no fire? Also the design of the missile looks more like a super captivating torpedo than a missile. It got no fins nor any guidance system.
Furthermore the snow looks more like rain than snow. The only way snow gets motion blurred like that is if it is a strong wind, and then the snow is blowing from the side.
Also it looks like it is just one layer of snow, for example the atmospheric perspective is supposed to make it whiter the further away it goes due to the massive amounts of snow in the air. Right now there are just 2 sizes of flakes in the air, there are supposed to be a lot of smaller ones in the back.
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thanks a lot dude for your critique, you say the right...
I don't know why I'm not adding fins or what ever ^^
so, I think the snow looks like snow, but a little bit to massive and a little bit to correctly, snow has different sizes a shapes and my snow has different sizes but not different shapes >.<
so, thanks a lot dude
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Thank you for taking the critique into consideration, the fact that you actually read and considered my critique signifies that you are a good artist that will make it far in your art career. Too many people take critique as personal insults and discard it or lash back, they do not possess the artist mind set and will never push themselves to new levels.
You however can take critique as an artist is supposed to, and even if you choose to discard the advice - you have read it and considered it. That is a sign of a promising artist that always pushes himself to new and higher levels. My hat is off to you.
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thanks a lot dude
Yeah, I want to be a good artist and I do that what I can do to getting better and better...
A powerful is more helpful than a good feedback "dude, your are is so amazing" (so, it's very cool if other say that to my art) but it doesn't help me to getting better...
I've in other communities sktechbooks and so on, but nobody want to answer some critique to my art.
So that is it, why I'm so happy about your critique and it was very constructive
thanks a lot again
so for my english, but I want to do it better too
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Looks like something designed by Aperture Science
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hmm... nooooo, it is designed by meeeee 
I don't know what aperture science is...
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It's the corporation from the game Portal, it has a very similar aesthetic to their robots.
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Is it just me or do these robots remind anyone else of apeture science?
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really? I don't know apeture science ^^
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this somehow reminds me of those enormous black robots on the sandstorm planet level on Star Fox 64...i miss that game, i played it day in and day out
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Wow! What is the story behind them, if any? I love robots and like to know about them.
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haha, thanks
so the story behind the robot is:
A spider-robot storm a mountain alliance base at 2.386 meters. You see here a some robots that storm a base because the environment is the bad
and the high for soldiers. the robots are more a pilotless drone and has a intelligent computer inside.
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So the robots are invading? Or are they protecting the base?
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he storm/invading this mountain base
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Wow. I'm blown away.
Though, you may want to fix some things.
The missle looks like a firework. Or a needle with a huge point. The missle would look a little more..realistic...If you made it sort of roundish with fins.
Based on the size of the mech, that hook thingy is just way too small. Unless it has a super motor or something. May wanna increase the size whenever you do another robot.
For the most part, it's really good for a first robot.
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hey dude,
yeah, you say the right, the missle isn't the best example for a fast missle, but yeah,
it looks like a little bit a needle >.< *bing bing* xD So, I've a new idea of a new robot, haha, so I think I
want to paint it tomorrow
thanks a lot for your critique,
it helps me a lot to make the next robot better than this one
thanks and all the best
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I likes it. The design is sorta retro and I like the landscape.
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I think it's cool
Death and destruction all round
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Die sehen ziemlich so aus wie die "Testaments" aus dem Manga Needles ;3
Umwerfendes Bild! Gut gemacht!
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vielen dank
habsch noch nie gesehn den Manga
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Ich warne vor: Der Manga ist eigentlich grottenbillig ^^
Ich hab den mir nur angetan, weil ein Bekannter von mir den unheimlich witzig fand und mir in den Ohren gehangen hat, ich soll ihn mir ansehen ^^
Der hat in der Tat einige, lustige Stellen ^^ einige
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schaffst du noch, da bin ich der festen ΓΌberzeugung
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Excellent composition and use of colors! i am stunned by this piece!
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wow, thanks a lot
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I love the scenic background and the upwards angle. Even though they are small, these robots look like they can endure any type of weather
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hehe, yeah, the spider robot attacking a mountain base at 2100 m
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thanks dude
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