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Published: 2017-12-30 18:59:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 847; Favourites: 87; Downloads: 0
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This is actually my first time animating, so if you have any tips or tricks for animations, please tell me, so thatΒ I can improve my next animations!Related content
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Cute and pretty.
I hope you have a happy new yearΒ Β
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Thank you!
I also wish you a happy new year!Β Β
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Hi there from ProjectComment!
This is a really great job, I honestly can't believe it's your first try. The linework and colouring are mostly flawless, the mouth movements are adorable as well as the tiny stars in the background! <3 I don't know this character so I'll only comment on general things like the animation, although I'm not an animator myself so take my advice with a grain of salt.
One thing I can say is that in general you could try to keep sizes of some elements consistent, I think someone's already mentioned the pupils but I noticed the bow shrinks a little as well. It doesn't affect things majorly but particularly with the loop it can be a little distracting. I don't know what software you use but you might be able to find a thing kind of like "onion skin" in Adobe Animate where you can see through to the next layer?
The only other thing I can think of to point out is to try and find ways to make it more dynamic, especially as it's a kind of static pose and she only moves her facial features. Animators often do this by making hair move a little out (almost like it "fluffs up") and then back in. You've sort of done this already with the bow but you can push it a little further. Try utilizing the eyebrows to push the expression as well maybe but that might make it look funny
Great job on your first animation! I'm just gonna go and die from how adorable this is now
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Thank you very much for taking the time to give me such detailed feedback! The tips you gave me are very helpful, especially the ones about using the hair and the eyebrows in order to make the animation more dynamic. I will try that for my next animation ^^
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Adorable! By the way, I have her shimeji and it's SO ADORABLE! :3 Very well done!
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Awww thats cute ^^
and thanksΒ
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This is great for your first time <3 she's so cuuute
Quick recommendation for the eyes, the top eyelid should close more than the bottom. Top should close about 3/4 the way down (I think, not 100% sure about that number.
The stars are a nice touch, they're cute tooΒ
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Thank you so much for the advice and the positive feedback!Β ^^
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This is pretty OK for your first time. Though the eyeballs shouldn't shrink when the eyelids close. Also, it would look a bit better if you added just a bit of weight behind the parts that are noticeably more animated, such as the eyes, mouth and bow. This is done by having less frames at the start of the motion, and more at the end.
Still pretty good for your first try though. I like how you re-drew every frame; with a lot off accuracy might I add!
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Thank you very much for the feedback! ^^
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well it looks pretty good to me and thats your first wow
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Thank you very much for the feedback! ^^
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