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Published: 2019-02-15 17:23:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 1242; Favourites: 97; Downloads: 0
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I've been listening to a lot rinlen songs lately~ Β(made this drawing for valentines day, but I'm too late oops ^^)
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Though, I do t ship them because I see them as siblings, this is done really well!
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It's alright, some people see rin and len as mirror images, some as siblings and some as a couple ^^ I do ship them in certain songs like seasonal feathers and suki kirai~ Β But then I don't see them as siblings, else I wouldn't ship them
Thank you very much <33 Β Β
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That makes perfect sense!
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This is a pretty good pic you've got here. I have a tendency to remark about line art not being bold enough, but in this case, it really suits the image. The lines you use have a pretty gentle and soft touch, which gives a sort of shoujo and even romantic feel to the picture, so good job on that. Colors are also pretty good, being warm and even peaceful. It strikes out, but in a way that makes you feel good. So basically, it's really good!
Now, I do have a few things that I noticed. These particular critiques don't ruin the image in any way, and you most won't really notice them, unless they actually try looking for something to point out. Rin's leg seems to be a tad slimmer or smaller than her left one, while her torso doesn't really match the rest of her upper body. Looking at the flow of her shirt, it seems that it's supposed to be loose and flowing. That's fine, but the thing is that with the area around that is revealing the stomach. It seems to drift off, and look as if it slightly bends to connect with the rest of the body.Β
Regardless, this is still a pretty good piece you've done!Β
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Hello! Thank you so much for your comment! I really appreciate it
I agree that the lineart could be bolder, but I'm glad to hear the thin lineart works in this piece. I was actually going for a shojo-vibe, so that's great to hear!
Anatomy is something I am still learning, so thank you for pointing out where I made mistakes. It helps me learn faster
Once again thank you for your feedback and sorry I took this long to reply <3
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You have a very lovely piece here. Your soft shading works well together with your delicate line art. The image has a nice smooth but sketchy feel to it and you have really done well with the colour palette. Itβs nice pastelly yet has lovely dark tones to balance all the sweetness and that lovely blue eye colour to draw gaze to her face. The layout is nice and the details on the background works well to frame the characters. The general mood feels happy and light β color placement and balance are also both spot on. Some more texture on the clothing would be a nice addition to better define the cloth material.
Few things to consider ... Both of the characters have rather long torsos even though rest of the anatomy mostly looks fine. It feels a bit like the image could use some flattening on the centre area. Generally the elbows should be on the same level with the bellybutton to keep the torso the right length. Their hands are also a tad too small. Otherwise nothing much to complain here. Though I gotta admit Iβm not quite sure is the other character girl or a boy ^^β
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Hello! Thank you so much for your comment, I really appreciate it <3
I was actually a bit worried about the colours, but I'm glad to hear it's fine ^^ Rendering clothing is still something I need to work on, so I'll study some cloth textures
Now that you mention the long torsos, I noticed that it looks slightly off, too. I will try changing the position of the belly button according to the elbows. Thank you for telling me this little detail because I never noticed how close the belly button is to the elbow o.o (I learned something newΒ Β )
About the other character: It's a boy actually, but he looks rather girly...I struggle quite a lot drawing manly looking men, but I guess it all comes down to studying anatomy, muscles and using more blocky shapes Β
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Only happy to help! >u< and your colors look great!
There are some easy tips to make someone look manly - such as thic eyebrows, broader jaw and broader shoulders
- boy would have been my guess too though.
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Lovely character art you have here, and I love to listen their musicΒ
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Thank you! ^^ I like their music a lot too, Electric Angel is my favourite xD
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Dude that's my favorite one too ^^
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How cute!! Rin's eyes are so beautiful β‘
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