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Published: 2014-10-10 19:17:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 1938; Favourites: 61; Downloads: 21
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Description The actual title was suppose to be:
Ah heard ya want to dat muh sister...
but Ruhisu had to have his stupid rule about naming all contest entries the same way...

Anyway, my humble picture for his contest

So... what's going on? Well, according to his character's lore (and a fanfic that he's allegedly writing) his Brave Wing has a bit of a crush on Applejack. Well, I'd imagine a talk like this one might have happened. I don't think BM would be all too restrictive, but hey, a big brother gotta do what a big brother gotta do and having a good, heart to heart talk of the "Ah like ya and ah hope AJ'll be happy with ya, but if ah see one tear in her eye 'cause of ya, Ah'll swear to Celestia and Luna 'ere ain't a hole in Equestria too deep for ya to hide." variety

well, I hope 
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Comments: 12

western-dragon7 [2014-10-10 20:56:29 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


Vision-To start off, being a pegasister, I love this :3, with that out of the way, I like the Idea of the picture, but it would be even better if the dialog that was in the description was on the actual art itself, but that doesn't really matter to me too much, but back to the idea, I like the Idea about how he's keeping his younger sister safe and at the same time making sure that she is happy about it.

Originality-Due to it being about someone else's show, that will bring it down a little bit, but not that much, besides that, it is a nice thing to see this kind of artwork, it's been a while since I've seen this kind of artwork associated with mlp, the approach is excellent, and it did surprise me a little bit e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>.

Technique-The artwork was, in fact, was very skillfully put together, I love how that it shows that the main focus was the two ponies, not to mention the nice depth perception, it is well crafted.

Impact- The picture makes me think about how the feelings of both the characters, and including Applejack, will end up being and how the well the decisions will turn out to help the situation, and yes, it blows my mind.... *pssshhhhh...BOOM!*

Over all, this is an amazing work of art and should be overflowing with comments and favs, the creator definitely has something to be proud of, and in my opinion, is one of the best pictures I have seen today.
-Charmander out~

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Adalbertus In reply to western-dragon7 [2014-10-11 08:56:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the critique, I really appreciate it. 
And I'm glad you like this picture  

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western-dragon7 In reply to Adalbertus [2014-10-11 15:40:01 +0000 UTC]

oh, no problem! ^_^

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just-agu [2014-10-13 19:36:12 +0000 UTC]

Świetne!!!
IMO powinno wygrać

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Adalbertus In reply to just-agu [2014-10-14 06:41:32 +0000 UTC]

nah, ta animacja co wygrała była o wiele fajniejsza

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just-agu In reply to Adalbertus [2014-10-14 09:04:26 +0000 UTC]

Nope. Była po prostu animacją. Sam fakt, że ktoś się postarał i spędził nad tym czas jest godny szacunku, ale... nie była lepsza.

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Adalbertus In reply to just-agu [2014-10-16 08:01:48 +0000 UTC]

heh... tak czy inaczej poszło w to pewnie więcej czasu niż na mój obrazek  

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just-agu In reply to Adalbertus [2014-10-17 13:00:38 +0000 UTC]

Możliwe ^^

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Dgs-Krieger [2014-10-10 22:51:53 +0000 UTC]

It's good, but I feel like Macintish should be larger.

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Adalbertus In reply to Dgs-Krieger [2014-10-11 08:49:15 +0000 UTC]

the other pony is pretty tall too (I got a size comparison chart from the owner) and BM is lowering his head a bit to have his eyes on the same level as Brave. 

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Dgs-Krieger In reply to Adalbertus [2014-10-11 09:23:45 +0000 UTC]

Oh so that's vhy.

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Adalbertus In reply to Dgs-Krieger [2014-10-11 09:50:53 +0000 UTC]

yup

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