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LucyLumine [2016-10-15 12:12:59 +0000 UTC]

It may sound weird, but I prefer the before one! But don't worry! Both are really cool!

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TinyCherry [2015-10-27 04:11:21 +0000 UTC]

I love LOVE the after one. The expression is priceless! <3

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Kaatcat [2015-05-02 07:34:08 +0000 UTC]

Both are really awesome, love it!

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marviiee [2014-09-28 18:14:12 +0000 UTC]

wow, they are both really good! i love the atmosphere and the mood in the second. amazing work ♥

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Foretune [2014-09-22 03:25:31 +0000 UTC]

The first one is still really good, it's adorable. But I love the spookiness of your newer one

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rymslm [2014-08-31 00:34:39 +0000 UTC]

Wow just wow, this really goes to show 
that if you keep on practicing Even I can reach that level one day

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Adeshark In reply to rymslm [2014-09-02 18:05:29 +0000 UTC]

Exactly! I've even seen cases where a guy couldn't draw to save his life, but a few months he drew better than me.
But to tell you the truth, it doesn't always means constant practice everyday. Sure it's the best sure-fire way, but I've find that as long as you do your next drawing better than the previous ones, you'll improve as well.
So it's either lots of small progressions or less but bigger ones. The choice is yours!

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rymslm In reply to Adeshark [2015-02-01 02:38:59 +0000 UTC]

I think I shall try the less but bigger progressions route, gives me time to learn 
more on how to improve and better myself, btw sorry for the late reply, doubt you'd
remember though

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procrastinator175 [2014-08-27 21:42:48 +0000 UTC]

Before has a more cute look to it, especially with those little waves  but I prefer After, still. BECAUSE THOSE EYES, MAN.

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Adeshark In reply to procrastinator175 [2014-09-02 18:07:36 +0000 UTC]

There's nothing like a the looks of a cute, frightened children I always say
....that made me sound like a horrible person.

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procrastinator175 In reply to Adeshark [2014-09-03 06:31:49 +0000 UTC]

We're all horrible people in one way or another.

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Journieer [2014-08-24 21:49:01 +0000 UTC]

your improvement is just mind blowing 

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Adeshark In reply to Journieer [2014-09-02 18:08:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! It's good to know there are people who appreciates your effort.

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Journieer In reply to Adeshark [2014-09-02 18:14:28 +0000 UTC]

your welcome  

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JuRom [2014-08-23 16:46:19 +0000 UTC]

I like both but I prefer the second version. It has some uhm dark touch for me

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Adeshark In reply to JuRom [2014-09-02 18:09:40 +0000 UTC]

Yup, I agree. The first one felt..lifeless.
The blank stare reminds me of a doll. It's the expressions that made her look more human

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xxnillyxx [2014-08-23 10:38:26 +0000 UTC]

they are both really pretty
although the first one has more of a babydoll look about it   
the second one lloks like she could be related to L in death note XD

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Adeshark In reply to xxnillyxx [2014-09-02 18:11:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!
Now I'm imagining what L's family would look like. Father, mother, brother, sister all crouching on top of a chair, doing their own thing.

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xxnillyxx In reply to Adeshark [2014-09-03 20:23:09 +0000 UTC]

yeah, hey im watching this new anime and she could also be related to Tomoki or Tomoko in Watamote...

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JasperDrawsCartoons [2014-08-23 07:56:10 +0000 UTC]

I like both, both are awesome.

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Adeshark In reply to JasperDrawsCartoons [2014-09-02 18:12:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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MaraJadeEH [2014-08-21 18:14:46 +0000 UTC]

Different style but both awesome

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Adeshark In reply to MaraJadeEH [2014-09-02 18:15:28 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I think they look too different to be compared with each other, but what can I do?
Thank you for the compliments by the way

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MaraJadeEH In reply to Adeshark [2014-09-05 16:46:21 +0000 UTC]

It's not a problem they look diffrent! They awesome as they are

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CrispyLettuce [2014-08-21 08:06:55 +0000 UTC]

I love both of these for different reasons. Really cool!

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Adeshark In reply to CrispyLettuce [2014-09-02 18:19:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Silver2012 [2014-08-21 05:27:23 +0000 UTC]

Nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Adeshark In reply to Silver2012 [2014-09-02 18:19:28 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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HavickArt [2014-08-20 19:51:57 +0000 UTC]

like both

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Adeshark In reply to HavickArt [2014-09-02 18:19:38 +0000 UTC]

Glad you liked them!

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Smiter19 [2014-08-20 05:49:55 +0000 UTC]

I really like the After version! It seems to have a lot more of a haunted/sleep deprived/whats with all this mist, effect to it haha It's really sweet. They are both awesome none-the-less!

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Adeshark In reply to Smiter19 [2014-09-02 18:12:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!.
For the first one I was still unsure what the genre was going to be, but when I made the 2nd one it was already set.

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Smiter19 In reply to Adeshark [2014-09-10 14:02:24 +0000 UTC]

Hehe I remember where I got the creepy setting from. She reminds me of Elizabeth (from BioShock Infinite) turned 8-12, to be a little sister in the other bioshocks haha Nothing but awesome!!!! ^.^

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Fainalotea [2014-08-20 00:33:28 +0000 UTC]

The old one is actually the one I prefer XD It looks more realistic and has a soft look to it that I really like.

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Adeshark In reply to Fainalotea [2014-08-20 05:35:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!
The reason I changed to a new look was because the first one has a rather lifeless look in her face.
It's hard to do expressions with that kind of face. And with the kind of story she's in, she'd need to cry and scream a lot.

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josegoncalo [2014-08-19 19:57:26 +0000 UTC]

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Adeshark In reply to josegoncalo [2014-08-20 05:36:38 +0000 UTC]

 

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Yamiga [2014-08-18 22:11:38 +0000 UTC]

The old one seems more realistic. 

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Adeshark In reply to Yamiga [2014-08-20 05:39:14 +0000 UTC]

Aww... is that right?
I have to improve the new one's realism up a notch then.

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Yamiga In reply to Adeshark [2014-08-20 23:03:39 +0000 UTC]

Don't get me wrong, both versions are very good. You're a far better artist then I'll ever hope to be, I just personally like the original better. But they're both amazing. 

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luidyTV In reply to Yamiga [2014-08-19 01:08:16 +0000 UTC]

Emmm bro, Idk why you say that, but, the size of the head, the size of the body compared with the size of the head, the lips and the nose and the eyes form are really more realistic in the new version compared with the old version, and one of the more big anatomic problems in the old drawing, is really obvious, one half of the head are only hair, actually more than the half, only hair, and the other half is really little compared with the other half.
And by the way, the hair is much better in the new version. for me, the artist had a great improvement in a year.
Sorry if my message isn't much understandable but i'm only learning english.
Well... good bye .

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ShiroShototsu [2014-08-18 22:06:42 +0000 UTC]

OMG there should be a story behind the second picture~ So awesome!

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Adeshark In reply to ShiroShototsu [2014-08-20 05:41:43 +0000 UTC]

Well if you're going to think about it seriously, it would be something along the lines of her seeing things that aren't supposed to be there.
but I prefer that she heard things like "We ran out of cookies."

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ShiroShototsu In reply to Adeshark [2014-08-20 12:24:51 +0000 UTC]

That still sounds pretty cool~

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Luneartic In reply to ShiroShototsu [2014-08-21 01:19:51 +0000 UTC]

What would be even cooler is if she had heard:
"we are out of cookies"
but there's no one there.

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ShiroShototsu In reply to Luneartic [2014-08-21 14:58:35 +0000 UTC]

DUN

DUN

DUNNNNNNN

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Luneartic In reply to ShiroShototsu [2014-08-21 15:05:44 +0000 UTC]

Yessssss xD

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DigbyTheGoat In reply to ShiroShototsu [2014-08-18 23:38:47 +0000 UTC]

The young girl looked around, confused and startled. People had always told her that she had her head in the clouds. It seemed that they were more than right.

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ShiroShototsu In reply to DigbyTheGoat [2014-08-18 23:40:56 +0000 UTC]

oooh~ cool~

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lyhnspirit [2014-08-18 21:30:39 +0000 UTC]

I really like the old one. Maybe it's a style, color, tone preference thing? Great job on what is an improvement. 

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