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A young lioness was walking towards Sawannah. The day was coming to an end. She knew she should be heading home by now, but for some reason she didn't.Zira supposed she's old enough to find a mate for life, but everytime someone wandered around her he got scared by her character. She was attractive in some way, but with very difficult personality. We don't choose ourselves, right? It wasn't her fault.
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Suddenly, she heard a sound. She turned around and saw young lion with black mane sitting in amuzement. One more? She knew he's gonna run away, like everyone before him. But hey, while he's still here she can play with him. She half-closed her eyes, smiled a little and acted like she didn't see him,
She heard something more and suddenly the lion was walking next to her.
- Err... Hi - he said. She could easly tell he was very nervous.
- Hello.
- Err... I'm Scar - he tried to behave more self-confidence, but it was rather poor than impressive.
Scar? Strange name. But he had a scar on his eye,so that's why...
- And how about your real name? - she asked.
- Taka.
- Taka? Are you from the Pride Lands? - she knew there was the Prode Lands king, Ahadi, who had two sons - Mufasa and Taka. But how did he got this scar?
- Yes, but I don't want to talk about this. So, err...
- Are you ever supposed to be king?
Scar looked at her with suprise, but she didn't care. She has to know. And if he would be a king... Than she can't let him go.
- I WOULD if not my brother.
Brother... It's easy to get rid of a brother.
- You should become the king. You seem so... strong. And smart. I bet you're smart - she smiled. That's right. Make him think he really is all of that. And one day... Become a queen!
The day was changing into night when they walked towards Sawannah, still talking.
Oh, Zira wanted to become a queen. A great plan appeared in her mind. What if the kill Mufasa...?
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Entry for the 's contest.
I think Zira was the one who wanted power and kingdom. She could totally brainwash her children, then why not to make your housband kill his brother?
Sorry for the mistakes in the story, I'm not the best in writing in English. Just hope you understand my general idea.
And well... Wish me luck in the contest
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Comments: 52
AnzaTheLioness [2012-08-15 04:45:49 +0000 UTC]
Please check out my 1000 points contest contest [link] !
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agoonia1 In reply to Riordanfan13 [2012-03-10 19:05:25 +0000 UTC]
Acctually, the contest ended and I did not win... But thanks anyways
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Riordanfan13 In reply to agoonia1 [2012-03-10 22:13:41 +0000 UTC]
Oh. lol, sorry.
But you're welcome
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agoonia1 In reply to Riordanfan13 [2012-03-10 22:26:24 +0000 UTC]
Haha, no need to be sorry
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agoonia1 In reply to MisterJohnGeiger [2011-01-03 21:15:30 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the kind words
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MisterJohnGeiger In reply to agoonia1 [2011-01-03 21:20:34 +0000 UTC]
You`re welcome. Hope to see more of you!
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KumikoKumi [2011-01-03 16:23:14 +0000 UTC]
A ja powiem coΕ oryginalniejszego. Ten serial wymiata! xD
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Chotara [2010-12-27 16:14:42 +0000 UTC]
Skaza ma fajnΔ
minΔ Zira wyszΕa przeΕwietnie
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agoonia1 In reply to Chotara [2010-12-27 16:56:10 +0000 UTC]
(nie wysilΔ siΔ na nic lepszego, wybacz XD)
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angeltiger777 [2010-12-07 01:43:50 +0000 UTC]
A good artist knows when she been beat by the best, Its okay though I only did this for fun, hope you win.
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agoonia1 In reply to angeltiger777 [2010-12-07 11:12:34 +0000 UTC]
you're propably right. thanks
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agoonia1 In reply to faqundo [2010-12-06 15:50:51 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I love to see my progress and even more to hear about it
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agoonia1 In reply to PenofGold [2010-12-06 15:51:40 +0000 UTC]
Yup, they did. But you know... They live in you and all of that
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agoonia1 In reply to tlkfan66 [2010-12-06 15:51:18 +0000 UTC]
Thanks Thought I know I don't have any chance in the contest
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TopSpinbby [2010-12-05 19:55:44 +0000 UTC]
I like this But how does everyone know his real name is Taka?
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agoonia1 In reply to TopSpinbby [2010-12-05 20:06:59 +0000 UTC]
It was in some TLK books I didn't read them, but that's where the name came from.
Thanks
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lionkingnala [2010-12-05 17:18:31 +0000 UTC]
Scar looks adorable in this picture! I love the BG too, and zira Great job!
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agoonia1 In reply to lionkingnala [2010-12-05 17:29:57 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, I tried to make him look less evil and a bit younger
Thanks
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lionkingnala In reply to agoonia1 [2010-12-05 17:32:45 +0000 UTC]
You did an awesome job and your welcome
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SJArt117 [2010-12-05 17:07:45 +0000 UTC]
You dont need luck! I do! My entry is rubbish...no, DIRT compared to this! Im gonna come like, last, ha! Not even that!
Well done
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agoonia1 In reply to SJArt117 [2010-12-05 17:11:37 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, but I don't think I'm gonna win. So many better artists will take part in this contest.
And you have a story, while my story sucks D:
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SJArt117 In reply to agoonia1 [2010-12-05 17:18:37 +0000 UTC]
Yours is great!
Does mine make sence? Its sad i think
I KNOW im not gonna win!
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agoonia1 In reply to SJArt117 [2010-12-05 17:30:27 +0000 UTC]
It's sad, but really awesome!
I know I'm not gonna win either
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SJArt117 In reply to agoonia1 [2010-12-05 17:35:22 +0000 UTC]
You have a great chance! Thanks!
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