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TheDviousOne [2020-04-28 00:09:51 +0000 UTC]

Hello, I'm from here to give your artwork a constructive comment. ^^

This is really cute, and I like how accurately you created the folds of the sweater, and how you chose to separate each shade of color, instead of blending them. The block shading gives it a bit of a comic looking style. However, next time be sure to go over your art for any uncolored spots. I see quite a few white spots here and there. I'm also not sure about the shading around the scarf. It's hard to tell if the reddish coloring there is actually the color of the scarf or if you chose that as the shade. If it's being used as a shade, then I'm not sure if that really makes sense considering the cooler shading used for the jacket. There's also the shading in the face. The colors used there are good, but it's a bit too dark around the eyes. The shading on the clothes look nice and crisp, but the shading on the face looks looks blotchy. I would suggest either refining the colors there, or actually blending the colors together.

The line-work looks a tad crooked up close, but as someone with worse lineart, it's fairly easy to look over when you take in the whole image from a distance. The curves making up the folds of the clothing are also clean and smooth, which can be difficult to accomplish when doing curved lines. But try incorporating that same method into the tail, as it looks rather crooked and uneven.

And finally the drawing of the face. I think the only criticism i have is the lack of lips on the person, and the eyes having no shine. Even if they are shadowed by the hood, there would still be a faint glimmer to them.

And that's the end of my comment. I hope that it is useful to you and helps you with any future images. Keep up the good work

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