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GalaxicalPhoenix [2020-04-19 05:03:07 +0000 UTC]

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I really like this piece overall. The color, style, and design choices all lend to an atmosphere that is warm and light but also inspires mystery, wonder, and magic. The details and textures are all nicely fit in and balanced, but not rigidly. Everything fits together and works harmoniously to create a pleasant environment.

What I’m here to critique is the use of perspective in the artwork. Of course, my method may not line up with the style or feel you’re going for, and I by no means intend to take away from that. :>

Basically, I’m having trouble determining where I, as the viewer, am in and viewing this scene. I did say everything fit together and worked harmoniously, but I’ll have to take that back perspective-wise. The view of the shelf on the far left implies that I’m viewing it a bit from the right, the center table/desk implies that I’m viewing it a bit from the left, etc.

Now, if we’re viewing the shop straight on (well, mainly viewing the back wall straight on), a useful technique may be one point perspective. This is the part where I go overboard

I have a visual here because I have no self control so I’ll have my rant on One Point Perspective there if you want to read it ;w;

Forgive me

Sorry for the wall of text, and thanks for reading TwT

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Axic0n [2020-04-17 11:47:06 +0000 UTC]

The interior is really cosy! I like the palette, colours and combination of forms! I like the textures of a wood! There are few lines but the texture is understandable.
I think that the features described below are OK for simplified style.
I don't understand what happened with the left closet? Is it declinated or it must stand straight? The middle closet evokesame questions. I can't understand, how the watcher looks to the middle closet: from above, from below or straight?
I think that adding shadows shall improve the mystic atmosphere.
The floor is slanted but it is not a mistake for old buildings.

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DesenhoExperiment [2020-04-17 00:53:59 +0000 UTC]

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Not gonna lie, this looks like the background for a cartoon show, everything here is very stylish and I funny looking, the warm and welcoming colors mixed with the feeling of wonder caused by the supposed mystical artifacts within this store make me think of something like an extremely quirky fantasy series with a light-hearted tone, but at the same time lore and a few serious moments. I am impressed with the level of detail here, the potions, the wooden walls, seriously everything here is so detailed that I can't help but feel like I am nitpicking this drawing for any mistakes that would normally pass unnoticed, I think my only complaint would be that the book side in front of the balcony is a little bent, but that is just some nitpick of mine being honest. The colors give me a somewhat warm feeling, being welcome and even quirky because of how funny the objects look this background does belong in a fun fantasy themed cartoon, and I hope that was the idea you got behind this fantastic drawing because in this case, you succeeded! I just hope that if you ever made characters for this background that they fit just as good as everything else in this picture.

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PrincessKingForever [2020-04-13 17:21:02 +0000 UTC]

"I got three of these dragon horns. Would you be willingly to trade anything for them? They're starting to burn my hands."

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Gogogadgethat [2020-04-09 18:44:35 +0000 UTC]

"Hello? Do you have any potions? I'm looking for one to turn someone into a bear."

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