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Nameless Stranger
Published: 2011-06-21 18:56:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 21549; Favourites: 403; Downloads: 167
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My newest MOC, a mystrious Makuta, who wears a golden armor and a black hood. He roams through the world and slaughters all who dare to attack him with his sword Hells Nail.The sword and his name are refered to this sword ^^ [link]
I tried to use the darth vader helmet as a hood. I hope looks good xD
Yeah, I don't have a better story for him yet, so anyone who has an idea, just tell me. Basically, none of my MOCs has good backgroundstory yet, so just feel free to think of something xD
Thanks for the DD
I'm very proud of it and I'm gonna try to keep up my good work ^^
Here's a poem, which was inspired by my nameless stranger, hope you'll like it, I really liked it
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He happens to remind me a lot of Seigfreid from Soulcalibur 3, carrying a quite uniquely congealed blade in secrecy like this character. The neon orange buzzsaws are evocative in Bionicle's own way of the Soul Edge's eye since that color is the color of evil.
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You mean out of some cloth?
I usually don't like to use non-lego materials on a MOC and at that time I wanted to use the vader helmet in some way.
Maybe I'm gonna to a new version of the nameless stranger someday, but it's not my prime objective right now
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I love the use of the Vezon capes, the Onua claws, and the Whenua Hordika heads. Oh heck, I love it all!
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Nice to hear that ^^
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No suprise, most people realize what that part is xD
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Yeah he does resemble alex mercer for some strange reado
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Why does this guy remind me of Alex Mercer from Prototype?
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I don't know xD
Maybe because he has a hood and his blade also has similarities with Alex' transformed arm?
And the creator of this work has the name Alex Melcher? (I always thought that my name sounded like a german Alex Mercer xD)
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this is crazy.. I'd love to make it a digital character if you want..
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Could you explain to me what you mean by digital character?
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oh, I mean a digital artwork..
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Oh, of course, just go ahead
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This is an awesome character! That sword is epic, and... is that... okay, call me nuts, but is his "hood" the Darth Vader helmet from a Mr. Potato Head?
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Nah, it's the Darth Vader helmet from the darth vader set ^^ [link]
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man, the blade is great! what piece do you use to make the cape?
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Oh, nice you noticed that it's intended to be a cape
Some people have pointed out that it looks like wings, so was not to sure what the general impression is ...
The cape is from the Vezon & Fenrakk set.
Ohhh .... Auf halben Weg beim schreiben hab ich germerkt, dass du auch Deutscher bist xD Machen wirs also zu einem zweisprachigen Kommentar
Das ist jedenfalls das 'Teil' das ich fΓΌrs Cape benutzt hab [link] Auf der Seite hab ich die beiden auch gekauft. Das Set selbst hab ich nie besessen xD
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hahaha, Deutscher bin ich nicht, aber ich studiere jetzt in Karlsruhe. achso, von Vezon & Fenrakk, habe ich nicht gemerkt. Das Set ist gut, ich habe das in ein Dinosaur umgewandelt, lade ich das Photo vielleicht irgendwann mal hoch
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Oh, du studierst hier bei uns in Deutschland? Das ist ja cool xD
Von wo bist du eigentlich her?
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jop,ich studiere Bauingenieurwesen an der Uni, komme ursprΓΌnglich aus Indonesien
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Wow, krass, was nicht alles mΓΆglich ist >.>"
Ich habe vor Architektur zu studieren und warte momentan auf die Antworten von den Unis bei denen ich mich beworben hab ^^"
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dann wΓΌnsche ich dir viel GlΓΌck beim Bewerben. hehe, eine Frage, wo kann man in Deutschland einzel LEGO teilen kaufen? ich bin noch neu in MOC making.
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In Deutschland? Versuch einfach [link] , such dir die Teile raus die du brauchst und schau ob es dazu HΓ€ndler in Deutschland gibt. Ansonsten wΓΌsste ich nichts. Ich habe da aber auch schon oft bestellt.
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Thanks, nice to hear that xD
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lol, no probs, I love hoodie
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Interesting. Wearing gold armour, a hood & cape, & carrying what looks like a demonic sword...
You had to ask for ideas, now my brain is spinning to life...
Perhaps a once proud warrior who could never find armour or a weapon "worthy" of him. Traveling to find such items, he eventually found a choice of equipment, a suit of strong but relatively common looking armour & mighty sword, or a suit of golden armour & a beautiful, powerful sword, but with warnings of being cursed. Ignoring the warnings, he puts the armour on, then reaches for the sword...
As soon as he touches the grip the sword changes, twisting into a demonic looking blade. Trying to drop the blade, he finds he can not let go, & a demonic voice laughs at him...
"Until ye learn to take off thy golden armour, I shall be bound to thee till the end of time..."
Now searching for a way to end the curse, he wanders the world, depressed, but unwilling to remove the beautiful golden armour...
That something close to what you were looking for?
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Your concept is really good
Because this character would be part of the bionicle universe, there also as be used bionicle logic to creat his storry. You know, if you talk about light and darkness in the bionicle world, you talk about Toa/Matoran of light and the makuta. The tricky thing was, if a makuta comes in contact with a mask of light (the golden mask + armor in this case), then he just gets powerless like superman with kryptonite and there is no reason fpr any warrior of light to accept dark makuta powers.
Now your concept solves the problem: A toa of light found the sword of a makuta, but he didn't knew that beforehand. So he fought various battles with that sword and slowly got corrupted by the dark makuta powers. But the powers couldn't take complete control of him because of the powers of his mask and armor of light. So now he wanders the world with a chaotic battle between light and darkness in his soul.
I think this should work out ^^
Any further suggestions or improvements?
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Naa, sounds good. I gotta admit, I don't know too much about them, but I'm glad the story is something you can use...
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I don't know much about bionicle story myself, which is why it's difficult for me to create background stories for my characters
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Glad to help...
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My creation in a game would be amazing anyways xD
Especially in such a game as SC
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*Super Bionicle Flashback* those were the days...
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I have the sudden urge to get all my bionicles out of storage.
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Then I accomplished my mission xD
Otherwise, if you find no use for the parts; give them to me xP
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"he wanders the desert, alone and unafraid
Searching for someone to cleanse
The darkness inside him, pursuing his raid.
Though he fights all he's never alone,
A voice in his head, thirsting for more
the blade of power, of the evil throne."
Yeah poems aren't my strong suit, but i liked this alot so i tried :3
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This is beautiful o.o
Despite english not being my native language, I still think it sounds really good.
Would you mind making it a deviation? Then I'll link it to my nameless stranger
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Sure thing! I didn't know poems could be deviated... but i'll do it!
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ok, all done, it's "The Golden Shadow"
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that sword reminds me of soul Edge from Soul Calibur.
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