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Published: 2014-08-31 14:08:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 8465; Favourites: 72; Downloads: 0
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I hope you can spot the two trainers and one of thers pokemon and in the first part? I got a little background crazy there and I hope it not become too dark colors in the first few parts for some of you.
And yeah I know... I didn't get that weird thing from steven to make the kelecton thing no invisible, but Bobbie (who is back again ) fix that for me
And Wiona, Winona, Winora... The BIRD Gym leader...! What is wrong with her outfit? I did just realised that it was her hair who pops out from her helmet.
And yay!!! it was so fun to do the Swellow and Springs evolving!!! And NOT Buckets face from front........
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Alex-namn In reply to ??? [2014-09-02 10:41:06 +0000 UTC]
just came out of your pokeball and then realize that you are high up in a tree. and then realise again that you have not the shape for it too
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osarumon In reply to ??? [2014-08-31 14:50:15 +0000 UTC]
I don't know what I love more: Bobbie kicking the kecleon's ass or Eric's reaction to evolved spring. Good show, good show.
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Alex-namn In reply to osarumon [2014-08-31 14:59:09 +0000 UTC]
Haha thanks and yeah hard to choose which is best
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InfiniteRiver In reply to ??? [2014-08-31 14:39:17 +0000 UTC]
ALL OF THE SHIPPING IS HURTING MY BRAIN!!!! Let's try to make sense of it. Mark and Alex like each other, Eric is jelly of Mark, Spring likes Eric, Angry likes Spring. Right?
Let's hope to Arceus you can cover that Altaria. Wingull can learn Ice Beam via TM, but the TM is only found on the Abandoned Ship, or the Mauville Game Corner, and I don't think you've been to either.
ENGLISH STUFFS: Last line is I've BEEN waiting on this moment. I have being present tense along with waiting, so you need been (past participle) to make the sentence past tense.
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Alex-namn In reply to InfiniteRiver [2014-08-31 14:47:41 +0000 UTC]
oh haha I can say that it is no shipping between Angry and Spring (I have already do more shipping than I have expected) but that doesn't mean that he not like her new look
yeah that Altaria... cute but deadly
and fix that been as soon as possible thanks
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InfiniteRiver In reply to Alex-namn [2014-08-31 15:19:44 +0000 UTC]
Oh, so Spring likes Eric, but he's oblivious pretty much.
Good luck.
You're welcome
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Alex-namn In reply to InfiniteRiver [2014-08-31 15:37:42 +0000 UTC]
It gonna be hard for Spring to get his attention when he focus on Alex and Mark all the time
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Angel-Nuzlockes In reply to ??? [2014-08-31 14:20:48 +0000 UTC]
I see peanut!
Nice page, btw! Can't wait to see the rest of the battle, especially Altaria u.u
If bucket would had been and Ice type and would challenge you.. will accept the Ice bucket challenge? *shot*
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Alex-namn In reply to Angel-Nuzlockes [2014-08-31 14:27:34 +0000 UTC]
And the battle would become awesome!
Haha omg, the Ice bucket challenge!!! Haha perfectly
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Grusnoid In reply to ??? [2014-08-31 14:14:13 +0000 UTC]
Oh shit. Erik you are in deep, and I mean deep. Your only chance is to run, because Spring is going to be very, very vindictive.
ALSO SPRING EVOLVED!!!! She looks so beautiful. Too bad she's going to kill Erik.
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Alex-namn In reply to Grusnoid [2014-08-31 14:21:16 +0000 UTC]
Erik have his focus on wrong person haha yeah Spring is gonna kill him
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Grusnoid In reply to Alex-namn [2014-08-31 17:10:08 +0000 UTC]
That look, is the look all straight men fear most. It means they are well past the point of no return, and only oblivion awaits them. There's a reason the old saying goes: 'Hell hath no fury, like a woman scorned.'
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Alex-namn In reply to Grusnoid [2014-08-31 17:23:50 +0000 UTC]
haha that means that Erik is in serious trouble if he not play his cards right
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Grusnoid In reply to Alex-namn [2014-08-31 17:58:20 +0000 UTC]
He's doomed. I doubt he could find his ass with both hands, let alone defuse Spring's wrath. Like I said before, his best chance is to run. Run far and fast.
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Alex-namn In reply to Grusnoid [2014-08-31 18:35:20 +0000 UTC]
yeah it's the only thing he can do now! run Erik run!!! A psycho Spring is after you!
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Grusnoid In reply to Alex-namn [2014-08-31 19:57:57 +0000 UTC]
Sad thing is, I don't even think that will help. It's merely his best option, in an ocean of hopelessness. Spring not only has type advantage, but, she can find Erik anywhere, and she can create black holes out of thin air. She has the power of a god, and she is vengeful right now.
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Alex-namn In reply to Grusnoid [2014-08-31 20:14:27 +0000 UTC]
haha omg Spring is really dangerous now I'm feling bad for Erik...
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Grusnoid In reply to Alex-namn [2014-08-31 23:32:14 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, an I don't know how sincere you can be, with a creature who can not only tap into your emotions, but read your every thought. Erik is doomed.
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