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Considering I am still hopelessly stuck on TS page 41, I decided this week to have a 3-part update for the new Prologue pages! Next two updates will be Wednesday and Friday. Unless I somehow can't for whatever reason.
Though I designed the page to only tell of the basic creation story, here is a bit more information for those interested:
- In the religion of the galaxy, the people worship a god named Creator. Though there are many planets within the solar systems in the galaxy, there is one cluster of planets in particular that many believe to lie "in Creator's realm" or, other words, in the center of the galaxy. The cluster is made up of one large planet and six smaller planets that orbit around the larger one. Originally only the main world had life, which consisted of hundreds of beast-like land dwelling creatures along with various sea life and birds, of course. Many races and species known in present day (Ambivians as a good example) did not exist.
That's all the info you get for this page. Next update I will tell more. :]
Psst, if you guys followed my Storm-Artists account you would have seen this page 2 days ago. Ha!
Tell me if you have trouble reading the text. I may alter it if many people do. :]
Constructive Criticism, pointing out flaws, and spelling/grammatical help is DEFINITELY helpful!
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Comments: 68
Very nice! I like the color palette you chose for this. 
(Hm, also, I believe the term for anything that revolves around a planet is a 'moon'. A planet is defined as 'a celestial body that orbits a star or stellar remnant', and a moon is defined as 'a celestial body that orbits a planet', so I think it would technically be a misnomer to call any celestial bodies other than the large planets 'planets' themselves. 
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Thank you kindly! Glad you like it. I was trying to go with more soft colors to make it appear sort of worn.
Ah, that might help a bit. Hopefully I'll be able to fit it in the narration boxes without overlapping anything :'D
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Absolutely beautiful I love the sketchyness of it
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Very nice! It reminds me of Watership Down for some reason..
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I was hoping someone would say that!
The suns were partially inspired by the Frith sun in the WSD film. :]
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Yep, that's definitly it. I knew I reconised something! Very good job on everything else too. :]
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Are you redoing the comic or just the prologue? D:
Or am I missing somethin DB
Otherwise nice page :333
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I am redoing the entire prologue and the beginning of Chapter 1. The comic will still progress in updates though. (Meaning new pages will still continue)
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Sweet! :3
Tho i did like the older Prologue D:
Whatever you wanna do I'll stand by it as a watcher and a friend
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Indeed, I like it too and I will still keep the pages up, but it really needs a redo to fit better with the story. D:
And thanks! I'm glad! C:
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