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NOTE: IF YOU ARE READING THIS FOLLOWING THE INTRO, THIS IS THE OFFICIAL START OF CHAPTER 1! PAGES 1-6 HAVE BEEN REMOVED AND WILL BE REPLACED IN THE FUTURE.Next Page: [link]
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WOW I sure did pop this out fast.
Ok, not really, I've been working on it since page 5.
I'm not entirely satisfied with the grass on panel 2 but it'll do since I enjoy and am proud of the rest of the coloring, including the clouds in panel 1. Normally my clouds suck eggs, along with everything else that isn't a character.
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Favorite panel: 1 (looove the clouds and coloring) Least Favorite panel: 3
Personal Crits (ones I'd prefer you not mention): -Panel arrangements. lol
Constructive Criticism, pointing out flaws, and spelling/grammatical help is DEFINITELY helpful!
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Comments: 121
I'm gonna reread it from the beginning! I remember reading it ages ago but now I wanna get caught up again, I remember loving this! exciteD!!! <333
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Haha, if all else fails, read things over!
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What about the little girls ? Are they going to meet their mate too? May I ask?
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The girls were not in the Selection process so they do not have future mates.
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Really? But why? Is it because They are still young to have future mates ? MAY I ask?
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The event was just a one time thing so they weren't even born yet when it took place.
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Oh ok! That's cool! Thank you so much for tell me .
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How cute indeed! I like the colors. And are all the people in this page mixed races like kailani?
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Thanks
No, they are all Ambivians, simply different breeds 
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Oh okay. I sortof figured out after reading the rest of the comic. I guess i should have done that first. Thanks for answering anyways!
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hey! xD it looks like i found another three tailed blue fox! xD i am just staring to read ya comic!
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Technically he's not a fox but an alien called an Ambivian but close enough! xD He was based on a fox lol
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xD i just red the whole comic! its amazing!
my friends keep telling me to make a comic but i still dont know about that... but your inspirational believe it or not! maby insetad of animating WTNL... i will make that into a comic instead!
lol im blabbing! xD
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Comic making can be challenging xD But you can do it if you belliiieve!
Do you need any tips? Here's a journal I just posted up giving a bit of advice: [link] Probably not that helpful though. xD
And I can link you to some comic page tutorials as well if needed
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aww thanks! 
(btw i cant help but love your icon! did you make it?)
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Yup, sure did. I have the full-sized one somewhere in my gallery but it is hideously ugly. xD
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oh cool!
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He's just an angry alien guy. xD
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xD lol. have you been animating at all recently? just wondering.
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Nope. xD
My animating methods, unfortunately, haven't been working lately. :[
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aww! 
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ooh, send me a link when you're done! I'd like to see it. C:
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i will as soon as my cuzin responds!
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Haha yay!
I love your avatar by the way. xD
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If you want i can make you an avatar like mine :3
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This is... WONDERFUL! I wouldn't have the patience to work on a scene like this~ I LOVE IT! The triplet in the blue shirt on the left is meh fave already.
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I guess the patience just comes with the territory :'D
Thank you!
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that's cute and hilarious I love your exotic creatures you have amazing artistic skills
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TS Reread Crits-Chp1/pg.7
Artistic: I know this is really specific and doesn't matter, but I don't think a sheet of stickers can crumple in that manner. XD I don't know why I noticed that, but I did. It should slope and bend gently, for it is thick like construction paper. :iconquiterlyowl:
Technical: Uhh..your water fountain isn't...'fountaining'? X3 It's just shooting up water, but not letting it flow down the 'cups' like a waterfall. c:
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Oh the little things, they impress me so much.
Sounds about accurate. I wish I had some stickers to crumple up just to see what it looks like. Haha
Heeey you're right there too! GRAVITY DEFYING WATERZ! I'll be sure to fix that! :D
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Man, this comic's awesome!!! O: The details of each character is fantastic, and I'm really diggin' Kailani's hair; it's so daggon cool. O.O
100 outta 10! Instant fav! xD
Hey, if you don't mind, maybe I could do some fanart of this comic? o:
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Haha, her blinding hair. I'm not even sure if her hair is physically possible without being dyed. And... it's natural. xD
Thank you <3 And most certainly if you want
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Do siblings useally end up at the same house if they are selected?
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Oh, and if you mean after they were selected and then the 15 years ordeal, then no, they will end up going to live with their mates and would separate. Ambivians don't have more than one usually.
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Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!! I was just wondring.
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Well, the main gang are orphans and are living under foster care (or were, rather). Most others of the Selection lived and were raised with their parents.
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Don't say that; your clouds are prettyful!
I lol'd. HARD.
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Yay! :D
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Oh my! I was looking through my favourites, and i say one of my most favourite pictures [link]
And being as nosey as I am I decided to flick through. This is amazing! The storyline is great! And I am fascinated by these creatures of yours! I will definatley check back to look for new pages <3
This page... well I just love those triplets <3 They are lil' monsters and those teefs' are awesome!
I love the guy's poses and expressions XD They look so cute!
Amazing comic! I can't wait to see more
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Wow, that picture seems so long ago! XD Glad you liked it though <3
And aww, thank you so much! I'm so glad to hear you think the characters and storyline and such are good. I tend to worry about those aspects quite a lot
Hehe, gotta love the triplets! <3
Thank you SO much! <3 
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