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NOTE: IF YOU ARE READING THIS FOLLOWING THE INTRO, THIS IS THE OFFICIAL START OF CHAPTER 1! PAGES 1-6 HAVE BEEN REMOVED AND WILL BE REPLACED IN THE FUTURE.Next Page: [link]
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WOW I sure did pop this out fast.
Ok, not really, I've been working on it since page 5.
I'm not entirely satisfied with the grass on panel 2 but it'll do since I enjoy and am proud of the rest of the coloring, including the clouds in panel 1. Normally my clouds suck eggs, along with everything else that isn't a character.
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Favorite panel: 1 (looove the clouds and coloring) Least Favorite panel: 3
Personal Crits (ones I'd prefer you not mention): -Panel arrangements. lol
Constructive Criticism, pointing out flaws, and spelling/grammatical help is DEFINITELY helpful!
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Comments: 121
Oh crap, yeah, thanks for pointing that out! :'D
Though things have changed since I came up with that so I can't guarantee it still is accurate.
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Geez, again so lot of text, how do you have the time for me, thanks
I think this has satisfyed my question hunger for awhile, thanks so much for answering, Filly
- (i know what you mean ;D)
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X3 It's fun and totally worth it! <8D
Hurrah! Feel free to ask questions whenever they come up and I'll try to answer them <83
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Sure thing, Filly, i'll never hold my questions if i have them :3
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It's in color, zomagosh! 8D -kasplodes- >w> And explodin' with it too! Lookit them first and third and fourth panels! -shot- Workin' quite nicely >w>
And the palace is gorgeous ;-; Looks like it was worth the effort with that 1 px brush, nyeh? >w>
Love it, keep it up ^w^
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<8DD ya! Like, totally, dawg!
Oh yes, delicious colors of epicness. I love bright colors XD
Indeed it was worth it, even if it did take... a week to do
Thank you! I shall!
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Theres so much stuff I can reconise... stuff I dun't wanna point out cause people may read this I might ruien some stuff of the plot >.> But I shall point out that dragon [link]
Anyways, I like it, I think the colouring and poses are done really well and the building is brill! Gewd job I'd have to say over all, very perfessional looking.
*Points* Ish the boy with nu entenna again D8
Tehehe the triplets make mah giggle XD Good job! Just brillient!
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Aha, indeed, that is a Spirit Ultimate statuuuueee <8D
I really think you are the first and only person to notice this stuff XD
<8D Aww! Thank you very much! <3
Cha, totally! He's a freeeak D8<
Hehe, how can they not? STICKERS BABY!
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WOwowowowowowow!This is absolutely amazing! The triplets are soo cute ~ The color and shading is perfect. This deserves a fave
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<3 Aww, thank you! hehe, I'm glad they came out good and the coloring and shading too.
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Dear GOD the detail on the palace is amazing.
I don't have any patience whatsoever with coloring and the lot of things. The fact you stuck to it and plan to do more of these pages awes me.
Your line art, everything is thsssso fabulouusssth, girl! 
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I'm so dang glad you think so! I guess it was worth it after all! :D
oh yes, I indeed do plan to stick with this as long as I can. I've never been able to work on a visual story and actually get it completed at a scale as high as this. So I really hope to work my best on it 
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I don't do criticism. I do fangirlism.
....TANNER IS SO COOL!!
Well, he looks cool anyways x3 *hugs him* He looks so fluffy and huggable~<3
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XD fangirlism pwns too.
<8D Yeah he is! And he's a silly muffin, just wait till the next page! <8P
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XD Indeed.
Oooh! I look forward to the next page, then! 8D
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*gasp* I GOT SECOND COMMENT! (well, sorta...) *squeals and runs around like the weird little girl I am*
... I don't usually get that close to first comment on people's pictures. xD
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XDDD wow, well, YOU'RE SPECIAL NOW!! <8DD
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xDD YAY!! I'm special! 8D
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OH MY GOD, SWEET SEXY COLOURING. TTxTT
I-I-I had to say that. I'm sorry. U_U
xD Anyways, this looks awesome. I love the detail you put into the palace front, its simply stunning. And well done on the lighting in the first panel. Sometimes shading like that is sorta hard. For an amateur like me, of course. xDD
Hmm...I can't find anything to crit on this, it all looks gorgeous.
You were lucky this time missy >:0 lol
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*flails arms* yaaaaay! :D
What's sucky is I'll have to do many more palaces in later chapters, not to mention the high Royal Palace. Oh god, that's gonna take me ages...
Shading is haaaard. I always mess up cause I forget where the light source is coming from XD
<8O O rly?
Well...
YAY! *jumps up then freezes in mid air*
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I bet you're sooooo excited for that, aren't you? :0 The anticipation is eating you alive.
Shading's nevah easy. D:
SWEEEET SWEET SWEET VICTORYYYYY AMIRITE
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oh yes, but of course DX
Actually, now I'm having trouble with sketching the next pages. ACK!
XDD TOTALLY!
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