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A page actually technically on time since the last page was posted on New Years! Ahaha! Now to just wiggle back to my weekend schedule...

Transitional/emotional page again. Also a page with a practical function. Canon design changes? Yes, hello. I forgot who it was who suggested that the pink stripes be temporary but... I went with it. Hurrah! I'm glad to be rid of those stripes. They were barely noticed half the time, which I think is why I hated them. Took too much time to put them in only to barely be readable. I admit, I am going to miss her cotton candy hair a little bit though...

But that's also not the entire purpose of this page. The next few scenes are going to give a couple smaller hints on some Ambivian culture. Nothing large, but just a little thing or two. Don't expect a whole lot, though, or you'll be disappointed.

You know what's the funny thing about this scene? Originally it was scripted to be Federico, not Kailani. I suppose fangirls will just have to wait for that one~

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Favorite panel: 4
Least Favorite panel: 2

Personal Crits (ones I'd prefer you not mention):
-Perspectives as always
-Size changes in things

Constructive Criticism and spelling/grammatical help is WELCOMED!

Copyright 2008-2015 © C. "Filly" Boone, AlfaFilly
Do not alter or distribute without permission.

Description
Next page: The Selection - Ch2 page 14
Previous page: The Selection - Ch2 page 12
Chapter 1: [link]
Chapter 2: [link]
FAQ: [link]

A page actually technically on time since the last page was posted on New Years! Ahaha! Now to just wiggle back to my weekend schedule...

Transitional/emotional page again. Also a page with a practical function. Canon design changes? Yes, hello. I forgot who it was who suggested that the pink stripes be temporary but... I went with it. Hurrah! I'm glad to be rid of those stripes. They were barely noticed half the time, which I think is why I hated them. Took too much time to put them in only to barely be readable. I admit, I am going to miss her cotton candy hair a little bit though...

But that's also not the entire purpose of this page. The next few scenes are going to give a couple smaller hints on some Ambivian culture. Nothing large, but just a little thing or two. Don't expect a whole lot, though, or you'll be disappointed.

You know what's the funny thing about this scene? Originally it was scripted to be Federico, not Kailani. I suppose fangirls will just have to wait for that one~

---

Favorite panel: 4
Least Favorite panel: 2

Personal Crits (ones I'd prefer you not mention):
-Perspectives as always
-Size changes in things

Constructive Criticism and spelling/grammatical help is WELCOMED!

Copyright 2008-2015 © C. "Filly" Boone, AlfaFilly
Do not alter or distribute without permission.