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Ok, so, after some 2 second debating with *AlphaShampoo-Artemis , I've decided the submission days will be Wednesday. That way I can remember to submit them either before or after church. Cause any other day and I'll forget. xD
Oh, and Shampoo counted all her Mangas. She has, roughly, 797. Which is about $8,000 worth of merchandise. Ehehehe.
Once more, I hate crowds with a passion. I wish I had the Where's Waldo? guy to do them for me. But this time I actually put in a bit more non-lazy effort! Yaay! :D
YEAH, YOU TELL 'EM TANNER!
Also, I have several secret Easter Eggs in the crowd. I added in a few Alfas... find them all and you get a cookie!
Welcoming in, Queen Matieka! And.. OMG Verica and Krimma too! LE-GASP!
For those who have no idea who those two are, they're two fraternal twins who are the Ambivian Sergeants of the army, as well as the bodyguards of the Queen and the babysitters of the Princess (or at least they were in CP).
Readers of my crappy Fan Fic of Fail should know them.
Watch me jerkily color in the adorablicious panel of Brandon! [link]
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Favorite panel: 3 & 6 Least Favorite panel: None 
Personal Crits (ones I'd prefer you not mention): The table in panel 1 as I just now noticed it's completely off perspective by a LOT xD But feel free to crit anything else!Constructive Criticism, pointing out flaws, and spelling/grammatical help is DEFINITELY helpful!
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Comments: 139
Heh, looks like Tanner hit a nerve with Reuben and Callia. Good for you Tanner.
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Haha, as they walk away in defeat, he will know he got the best of them. Deeep dooown inside.
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They gave Tanner the evil eye!!!!!! RUN FOR IT TANNER!!!!!
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I FOUND YOU! or your character... (in the middle-ish)
p.s. the queen is more beautiful than i imagined!
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I see Filly and dat dragon guy in the crowd!! Cookie?!??
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And PacksnPrides..I think thats her user name.
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Aws Somebody already got the cookie. D: Ah weeeell.
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Kailani looks like she's twitching XD. (Panel 2)
Is it supposed to look like that?
It's still awesome!!
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Haha, yeah, it is. xD She's a twitchy thing!
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I am seriously hooked on this series you have NO IDEA
and Queen Matieka looks all regal; you can tell she's a royal
fff you can draw crowds better than I can at least! XD <3
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Yay! That makes me happy! CC:
btw, what happened to your comic? :0
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C: thats because REUBEN = AWESOME
Wellll due to my laziness and the fact dA was so slow on my computer, I [foolishly] decided to not upload the comics just yet |D THEN my computer commited suicide XD However, a new comic is on the way c:
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OH NOES :0
Yayz C: It betteeer >xD
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Wow, I love this comic!!! I didn't notice it was even there at first until now!! It's so awesome!! 
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aww, thank you so much <33
Glad you spent your time reading it, that makes me happy :3
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Lol, yeah.. 
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Haha I like how those two are just walkin away, I guess they didn't have the guts to stand up to them. That or they just don't care xD
And awesome! Queen Matieka! O.O I don't know the way you drew her in that panel is just cool, like an upward camera angle to the Queen to show her superiority or something if that's what you had in mine or not. Either way it's awesome 8D
I also like Verica and Krimma, the two bodyguards. I've always had a personal interest in bodyguard characters- mostly of their designs and stuff. Their weapons look pretty nifty >:3
Oh and I also noticed that Queen Matieka's one antenna is different, any particular reason why or is that just the way it is?
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As for constructive criticism, I think overall you certainly know what you're doing when it comes to making comics :3
In general technically everything is right when it comes to how you use your layouts, panels and dialogue but that doesn't mean you still can't try and improve things if you're not satisfied.
One thing I've noticed is that the expressions and poses read as passive. If you want, you can always try exaggerating certain poses or expressions to help get more attention to their actions and what not. But in the end it all really depends on what you're aiming for
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I'd go with that second option.
Yup! Indeed, that is what I was going for in a way! Glad someone noticed! <8D
Hehe, bodyguards, eh? That's pretty nifty.
Oh yes, one of her antennae is partially ripped off. She's been in many wars in her times. Which reminds me, I forgot her scars! Oh crap!
Ah, that's a very good suggestion! I'll try going for that in some of the next pages!
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I want the queens claws. . . Brandon looks like a kid in a candy shop, just Ohhhhhhhh. pretty.
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lol he does! xD
Maybe he thinks the Queen's jewels are Jolly Ranchers
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oh man, oh man, i can't wait till the next page. The queen is gorgeous btw, i love how you did the third panel.
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Haha, glad to hear that! <8D
Thank you <3
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Thank you very much! <3
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Ah, I don't think I can really add anything more here, I love the details you have added with the whiskers, lines right to the face, I love them! =^^=
Looking forward to the next installment!
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:D Thank you! Glad someone noticed the whiskers xD I always liked the way I did them for some odd reason.
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OMG I WANT A COOKIE
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No, all the other Alfas are too xD
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=o -checks again- ooo they areXD
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NEW PAGE! YAY! *a trained chinchilla does the cancan for NO reason at all*
your comics are amazing! ever though of makeing comic books?
and the only alfa i see is filly XD
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WHOO CHINCHILLA!!
I have pondered whether or not to go into that field, but I'm not sure how stressful it is. I might take a course in it in College though, if they have something like it.
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after imagening*gets shot at for bad spelling* that chinchilla thing i laughed so insanely hard my cat thought i was nuts XD
you'd be really good ya know, your good at animateing *gets shot at again* aswell, you could also be a cartoonist or an animae person. id by all your stuff
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Being shot that many times sounds painful :0
lol and thanks! <33
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Oh my gosh! This is great! I love all the colors that you use, and the suspense and plot is thickening!
I'm more of a photographer and writer, so there's not much I'll say about the art work-except that I love how everyone is so unique. I've seen some comics where everyone looks the same-even in the crowds. You don't do that which makes me very happy (and impressed!).
I can't wait for the next page to come out! Keep up the great work!
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Yay, glad you're noticing! :D
Aww, why thank you! <3 I certainly try my best to make everyone have something about them different from everyone else. Glad it's paying off!
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It really is, and it makes the story all the more special.
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OH, snap! I see da Filly in the crowd!
Nicely done, hun!
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Gasp! <8D Yay! xD
Thanks! I'm very glad you think so!
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YAAAY = D
I LOVE how the last panel looks. :3 Matieka looks awesome.
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