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PFFF I hated this setting even more than the old room. It was such a dang pain. Thank goodness it changes next page! Still need to touch up the shading.
Oh, Filly, Filly, why do you torture yourself? Major experimentation with perspective this go around. So many flaws, but overall I think it's relatively easy enough on the eye so you can get the basic impression of what's going on, which I'm happy about.
Still sucks though, lol
Thanks to *AlphaShampoo-Artemis for helping me tweak some things. And for helping me with Federico's aristocratic speech. Hurhur.
Of the paintings/photographs on the walls, there are 4 special ones (plus one Easter egg that no one will get). If you can specifically identify all 4 I will show you a sneak peak of the next few pages. You have to tell me which painting/picture and who/what it is of for each.
Hint: One is a setting, and one is a person you've seen before.
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-Perspectives. Unless you can red line a fix. I need visuals. Otherwise they are of no use to me. Sorry~
Constructive Criticism, pointing out flaws, and spelling/grammatical help is DEFINITELY helpful!
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Comments: 182
AlfaFilly In reply to ??? [2011-02-03 19:05:38 +0000 UTC]
One was the siren/mermaid/whatevertheyare fish things.
Two was a picture of Queen Matieka (top right of panel 3).
Three was the picture of the tree (3rd picture down on the left) because... lol its a tree.
And four was the canine cyborg thing last panel. You'll see more of them later.
Though I kinda just took the Creator symbol picture and the Tillanix as well though that wasn't intended originally. xD
The Easter Egg was a picture of Matieka's mother, the previous queen (second pic down on the left, the round frame). Though her design is technically not finalized yet.
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ElementalHowl In reply to AlfaFilly [2011-02-03 20:55:39 +0000 UTC]
...The tree? Seriously? xD I don't think anyone guessed that..
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AlfaFilly In reply to TheHQRebellion [2010-12-26 02:49:00 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. Indeed, he certainly is.
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Earthpatriot117 [2010-07-18 06:03:54 +0000 UTC]
i'm speechless, for once.
still reminds me of Beauty and the beast.
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AlfaFilly In reply to Earthpatriot117 [2010-07-19 03:12:22 +0000 UTC]
Beeeaauuuuty and the Beeeeeeast!
But the ultimate question... which is the beast? xD
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Earthpatriot117 In reply to AlfaFilly [2010-07-19 05:04:11 +0000 UTC]
if it's anything like the movie feddy will be the beast, not that he's ugly but he is different from everyone, and he does have a temper like the beast, thou we have yet to see the full wave of it.
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AlphaGodith [2010-07-12 21:53:32 +0000 UTC]
I adore this guy already. He really doesn't seem bad at all!
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AlfaFilly In reply to AlphaGodith [2010-07-13 18:04:26 +0000 UTC]
Indeed. But you'll have to see~ ;D
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Zeydarchist [2010-06-27 20:44:22 +0000 UTC]
DAAAAAAAAAAMN!!! I WAS WAITING FOR THIS FOR SO LOOOOOOOONG!!!
lol and for the chance to comment XD
i absolutely LOVE the detailing, and the realistic poses,
whatever you did for this one, PLEASE, keep it up!!
it is spectacular
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AlfaFilly In reply to Zeydarchist [2010-07-02 21:44:14 +0000 UTC]
Yaaaay! xDD
Thank yooou! I definitely will keep it up! Or try at least xDD
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Kiyao [2010-06-24 10:10:14 +0000 UTC]
This will be my first comment for this comic. Mmm... why it reminds me the Beauty and the Beast? Well, Federico is not a beast, at least I find him... cute. Yes. I have strange tastes.
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AlfaFilly In reply to Kiyao [2010-06-25 04:45:56 +0000 UTC]
Haha, it's perfectly fine I actually find the similarity too though! I was wondering if I was the only one, lol though I didn't base it off of it or anything.
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Kiyao In reply to AlfaFilly [2010-06-25 11:27:10 +0000 UTC]
Fffffffffffffffff Sexy Feddy! LOL I already love this character. I knew that you didn't, but the similarity is... huge! XD Anyway... I love this comic. Not similar to the others that I readed. This difference mades it interesting. I love it. <3
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RocketMeowth [2010-06-19 23:16:08 +0000 UTC]
Alright lets see....
The big picture of the fish is rape
The one with the three is the praising of the rape
The one above praise is watching the rape
The others are just whatever it's rape, that's cool
And the dog... we cant see the butt so I say rape.
xDDDD
=^^= Nya
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AlfaFilly In reply to RocketMeowth [2010-06-19 23:54:49 +0000 UTC]
I am sorry, but that is incorrect.
The correct answer was molestation.
YOU FOOL.
xD
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RocketMeowth In reply to AlfaFilly [2010-06-19 23:57:28 +0000 UTC]
AW MAN! I knew it was molestation... but I still put rape. I shall never question my judgment again.
=^^= Nya
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KalliahVerkauf [2010-06-17 10:44:49 +0000 UTC]
I really really love that third panel. I envy your hand skills. And coloring/shading skill0rs. It's all so awesome.
Kailani will only be able to keep passing off as 'fine' for so long, eh?
It's funny to see your fans nomming for a spoiler, btw. xD Yay for excited fans. I love how you tend to... uh... taunting/teasing them? LIKE WITH THAT FEDERICO TRAP
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AlfaFilly In reply to KalliahVerkauf [2010-07-02 21:48:27 +0000 UTC]
Hands are haaard but I think they're probably my favorite thing to do. C:
Perhaaaps... she's quite good at faking. Or rather she thinks she's good at faking.
I know, right? xD Sooometimes I'll give and show a spoiler but rarely. It's just too much fun. Perhaps I am just mean. lol
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KalliahVerkauf In reply to AlfaFilly [2010-07-07 16:00:40 +0000 UTC]
YOU MEANY
but we all love you. <3
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ElementalHowl [2010-06-16 00:00:55 +0000 UTC]
Okay...I've already posted a comment on here (and a big one at that), but I'm pretty bored and I have no homework, so I'm going to give the 'spoiler' thing another try~ C:
(I'm going to try and make this as short as possible..)
Big picture in 3rd panel: [link] [link]
Small picture on the right in 3rd panel: I went and looked through the pages of The Selection and the hair colour on the ambivian in the picture looks like Queen Matieka's hair. I have a feeling it's her..The picture also looks like she has a long claw on each of her hands..
4th picture down on 3rd panel: Again, this looks like a Tillanix. That's pretty much all I can say about that one..:'D
Big picture on the right in the 3rd panel: I know it's a picture of three ambivian women and Creator but nothing really jumps out at me. It looks like something that could be in the new prologue, though. Perhaps the evolution of the ambivians..?
Well...That's all I've got!~
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kittydemonchild [2010-06-13 18:17:04 +0000 UTC]
That picture looks tall enough to bash Feddy with and make a run for it.... Hmm.
Yes I can read minds.
Nice attempt at angles. That's more then I can say for myself.
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AlfaFilly In reply to kittydemonchild [2010-07-05 20:38:05 +0000 UTC]
Escape methods must be thought of quickly.
Thank you!
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rozen85 [2010-06-12 07:18:15 +0000 UTC]
Wow, Amazing job you have done on this comic. I also have to say, I didnt realize how small she is to him! and I thought I was short! lol
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AlfaFilly In reply to rozen85 [2010-07-05 20:39:24 +0000 UTC]
Aww thank you so much!
Or rather, how big he is to her!
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CJFer90 [2010-06-11 03:58:01 +0000 UTC]
I'm new to Deviantart but have already read dozens of comics and this is by far my favorite! Please don't stop halfway in the story like most people do. Very inspiring work.
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AlfaFilly In reply to CJFer90 [2010-06-23 19:42:52 +0000 UTC]
Oh I definitely hope I don't do that!
I'll try to get as far into the story as I can!
Thank you very much!
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austintrench [2010-06-10 06:24:05 +0000 UTC]
U may make Stan lees comix look like garbage u r so good
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austintrench In reply to AlfaFilly [2010-06-10 22:10:52 +0000 UTC]
:3 cute faces!!!!!!!! x3
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T0xicEye [2010-06-09 18:17:42 +0000 UTC]
Finally it's moving on. I waited so long for the next page. Ah, and now I impatiently await the next.
(dunno what to say, so you have to endure my bad grammar and "OMGWTFBBQ" Fangirl squeal)
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AlfaFilly In reply to T0xicEye [2010-06-10 22:02:10 +0000 UTC]
Do not fret! If things go good, next page should be up this coming Wednesday!
Hopefully, that is.
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T0xicEye In reply to AlfaFilly [2010-06-10 22:39:45 +0000 UTC]
O.O Yeah.
Awesome. Can't wait.
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MoonsongWolf [2010-06-09 03:47:05 +0000 UTC]
Damn, girl, your artwork just keeps getting better and better. I'm really loving the lighting and perspective on this page. Which reminds me, I think it's about time for me to sit down and re-read all of these again.
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AlfaFilly In reply to MoonsongWolf [2010-06-10 22:03:20 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much!
Oh goodness, the old pages are dang terrible! Not just in art but story. I'd wait and reread it whenever I get it redone, haha!
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Little-Eagle [2010-06-09 02:48:33 +0000 UTC]
Four speacial pictures... me thinks the little oval picture, the yin-yang fish thingy picture, the creatures reaching tothe Creator symbol picture and the picture in the last panel. The little oval portrait kiooks like Kai. . . kinda. Soooo, am I right???
P.S. the critters reaching to Creator makes me think of Captain Planet for some wierd reason. . .
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AlfaFilly In reply to Little-Eagle [2010-07-05 20:41:06 +0000 UTC]
Captain Plaaannnet!
I wanna be Heart!
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Rojas-Crevan [2010-06-08 20:22:52 +0000 UTC]
1) it looks like yin yang fish on the big pic
2) if im not badly mistaken, could it be a reference to the three golden goddesses of LoZ (Farore Din Nayrue- spelling?)
3) ????
4) ????
I have no earthly idea of the rest
he ought to start asking some questions, break the silence ya know?
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Rojas-Crevan [2010-06-08 20:14:08 +0000 UTC]
i coudnt help but notice, but in panel 4, is that a bluetooth in Federico's ear?
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AlfaFilly In reply to Rojas-Crevan [2010-06-10 20:00:15 +0000 UTC]
Nah, it's a ear cuff thing. Like jewelry. :]
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Little-Eagle In reply to Rojas-Crevan [2010-06-09 02:34:35 +0000 UTC]
I think it's like an earing
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SassyRaptor [2010-06-08 09:01:03 +0000 UTC]
What an awkward situation!
It seems Feddy is pretty sensitive in perceiving the feelings of other.
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