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PFFF I hated this setting even more than the old room. It was such a dang pain. Thank goodness it changes next page! Still need to touch up the shading.
Oh, Filly, Filly, why do you torture yourself? Major experimentation with perspective this go around. So many flaws, but overall I think it's relatively easy enough on the eye so you can get the basic impression of what's going on, which I'm happy about.
Still sucks though, lol
Thanks to *AlphaShampoo-Artemis for helping me tweak some things. And for helping me with Federico's aristocratic speech. Hurhur.
WANT TO GET A SPOILER? Of the paintings/photographs on the walls, there are 4 special ones (plus one Easter egg that no one will get). If you can specifically identify all 4 I will show you a sneak peak of the next few pages. You have to tell me which painting/picture and who/what it is of for each.
Hint: One is a setting, and one is a person you've seen before.
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Favorite panel: 5 Least Favorite panel: Last
Personal Crits (ones I'd prefer you not mention): -Perspectives. Unless you can red line a fix. I need visuals. Otherwise they are of no use to me. Sorry~
Constructive Criticism, pointing out flaws, and spelling/grammatical help is DEFINITELY helpful!
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Comments: 182
Gaw, you're pages are too awesome /splodes
I got the Creator's symbol in the picture and on the floor.... and the last dog reminds me of someone in To The Dogs..... Grrrrr, I'll never get it XD I really enjoy how you like to leave things to the imagination and think more about the page itself than the story sometimes!
Coke for you <3
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Oh noes lateness! D8
Thank you muchly! 8D I do try to make the pages more open so readers can think for themselves what's going on~
YAAAAAAY
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MY HEART IS BROKENED /cries
Sugar party!!! 
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wow! Federico is classy :3 ahhh, I do believe he's my favorite character XD I do have to say, even if you expiremented around here, I really love what you've done with perspectives! and th shading here is beautful, my favorite pannel is the fith too XD wonderful job, oh god I can't wait to see the next one!
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Classy oh yes, haha!
Aww thanks so much! :'D
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i love the emotion of character in the 5th frame
your doing a wonderful job
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Amaazing, as always
And I love the aristocratic speech. And I actually think your perspective is pretty good! 
Anywhomz,
Keep it up! <3
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Awws, thank you! <3
Haha, it's true. xD;
I definitely shall!
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Yay, new page!
Finally they talk to each other! The light here is amazing!
Err... About the paintings... Hmmm... I stared at it for like 30 minutes and nothing came in my mind... I even re-read the other pages to find any clue and nothing!
Easter Egg?I love Easter Eggs
I only noticed that the painting with the three ladies have the same symbol as the floor in the first panel... As I read in the first pages, it looks like The Creator symbol. GAH! But the rest I don't know!!
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The first official conversation! Or er... second? Whatever!
You're certainly close! xD
Thank you!
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I imagine Feddy with a British accent.
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Dawws xD Cheerio and wot wot! *gets punched*
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Nope...Nothin'. But those fish thingies look a bit like Dribblet. Maybe it's the mouth.
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I'm actually surprised people even know about Dribblet xD
Yeah, I think it's the mouth, haha.
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XD I KNOW WHAT YOU DO EVEN IN YOUR BEDROOM
Lol
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OMG WHAT DO I DO?!
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You have secret meetings with... *DUN DUN DUUUN* Justin Beiber and... Uh... Jhonny Depp?
Lol idk.
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EWW I hate both of them D:<
lol jking I hardly know who Beiber is and Depp is just... what-ev lol
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Lol
Oh well. so, when do you get out of schools?
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I've been out since last week! C:
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Lol, this is my first week out.
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I give up on the paintings
But awesome page! ^^ You gonna get started on ToH soon too?
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Dawws! :'D
Yep! Sure am. I'm working on the storyboard for it right now. Hope to get pages started soon. :]
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Whats that pic behind her head in the last panel?
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Nope xD Guess again? C:
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One is kind of small and partially cut off. ;D
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YouΒ΄re comic always make me go "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!" But thatΒ΄s because itΒ΄s so cute most of the times! And this is... This is just sooooo cute too!
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Haha, aww, thank yooou <3
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Just telling the truth
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Why is the one drapery tied off like someone ripped it? I'm scared to even try the picture thing XD
I love Feddy! Then again I just love tall guys
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Actually all the things are supposed to be tied up but for some reason I forgot to do it xDD Needs to fiiix~
Tall guys are quite manly~
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Lolz ^^
And Nah I prefer the guys with long hair XP
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Huh, I thought one of the pictures was of the queen at first.
But upon closer inspection, the eyes colors don't match.
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Actually it is lol
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Looovvveee. I'm not even going to try the picture thing, I'd fail epically |D. But very nice page x3. I like how your perspective turns out. Better than I could do. And the design in the first panel turned out very nicely 8D
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Aww, come on don't be a baby! xD I've already given one up for ya!
Thank you very much! 8D
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Lolfff. Someone else has guessed it by now I know ittttt. And I'm lazy, too :3
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Actually so far no one has gotten them. Most of them are waaaaay off. xD
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FEDDY IS FLOOFY
It had to be said
Anyway, I like how you did the nighttime scene, the light comeing through the window, and the paintings.
*pets Feddy's hair and runs away*
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FLOOFEH
Thank you~
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