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Published: 2010-06-05 05:45:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 10584; Favourites: 108; Downloads: 0
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PFFF I hated this setting even more than the old room. It was such a dang pain. Thank goodness it changes next page! Still need to touch up the shading.
Oh, Filly, Filly, why do you torture yourself? Major experimentation with perspective this go around. So many flaws, but overall I think it's relatively easy enough on the eye so you can get the basic impression of what's going on, which I'm happy about.
Still sucks though, lol
Thanks to *AlphaShampoo-Artemis for helping me tweak some things. And for helping me with Federico's aristocratic speech. Hurhur.
WANT TO GET A SPOILER? Of the paintings/photographs on the walls, there are 4 special ones (plus one Easter egg that no one will get). If you can specifically identify all 4 I will show you a sneak peak of the next few pages. You have to tell me which painting/picture and who/what it is of for each.
Hint: One is a setting, and one is a person you've seen before.
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Favorite panel: 5 Least Favorite panel: Last
Personal Crits (ones I'd prefer you not mention): -Perspectives. Unless you can red line a fix. I need visuals. Otherwise they are of no use to me. Sorry~
Constructive Criticism, pointing out flaws, and spelling/grammatical help is DEFINITELY helpful!
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Comments: 182
Oh most definitely.
Quite so. He's a gentleman like that I suppose.
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lol I think I recognize some of the photos.
anyway, love the difference in dialogue in this page. stop making me sit at the edge of my seat waiting for pages! *punches in kidneys as payback*
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Oh really now? ;D
Thank you!
And noooo it's too much fun!
OWWIE *keels over*
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I stumbled upon this comic by accident, but I'm interested in it and read all of the pages straight through. I think I'll be subscribing to your artwork now.
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Thank you! 8D I'm flattered!
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It's very interesting, and also confusing because it is so different to or cultural ways. I want to yell at the queen "why do they need to have arranged mates?!" lol
But I really want to see how this story plays out, and most of the character designs are very unique.
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I see a Thrash cyborg. Does that count?
Nervous much, Kai? And that brings up a question I want to ask SOOOO badly, but I'm not allowed to because I swore to secrecy.
Once again, great job on the expressions. No crtis on the dialogue, so you're good!
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Not a Thrash cyborg, but good enough so it still counts. xD
Secret?! I probably know of this but can't remember for some odd reason!
Hurrah! Thank you!
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Lol, I love his expression~ xDDD He is like: Uh, you okies...?
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Dawws he's a worry wort XB
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Great as always I think I see a small error I can't tell if it was intentional but are there supposed to be white lines on the bottom of the curtains in panel 3
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I spied that just recently, actually. That's a layer mistake. Will fix soon~
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She's getting a head-rush from sitting too long? =^^=
I must really be blind to issues of perspective, because I really don't see anything gapingly wrong...
However, if you want a little help with visuals in that department, I might suggest getting a couple small action figures (or those poseable art mannequins) Put them into your desired shot, and then photograph them from the camera angle you want...
Four special pictures and a bonus? There are only eight pictures total! 
Hmmm, at first I thought one was Bloodclot and Steve's background, but closer inspection proves false... Hard for me to make teh details out... (getting old! 
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Perhaps. Or maybe Federico's aura is overpowering her little mind.
Oh yes, I want one of those little figures so badly. I haven't a clue where to get one, though.
Oh goodness!
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I don't know if this would help at all...
[link]
Googling Stikfas will yield a veritable cornucopia of incredibly poseable figures...
If I ever get off my lazy tail I will start my comic involving the little buggers!
Heh, if you lived in, or near, Pittsburgh, there's a shop by the Pitt campus that actually sells those mannequins in a variety of sizes..
Good luck!
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I love it! I need more! This is getting to be like an addiction.. I have a feeling about the portrait in the middle left side of the painting panel. Is that one?
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Thank you!
A very unhealthy addiction. xD
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Like Drugs. This is my drug.
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the two fish things are yin and yang and thats all i can find
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Haha, that wasn't intended but I can kinda see that now xD
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So aristocratic Federico 
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She's probably shocked by his deep manly voice.
After all she's used to the squeaky puberty voices of her "brothers" haha!
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This is amazing!! I love your work of drawing skills, coloring, and shading. Everything is magnificent and the suspence is killing me. Can't wait till the next one!
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^^ very well done and can't wait for the next page
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i see no flaws <3
you are so awesome <3
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even if you hated doing it it looks really good in my opinion
and honestly I think the perspective looks good too
I like how creative you are with the angles
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First off, this is amazing. I really love the atmosphere for some reason. It's also pretty awesome that it's actually (almost) on time! Not trying to sound mean or anything, though. It's just pretty awesome. (:
Now, after I saw the 'Want a Spoiler?' thing...I freaked out. XD LOL I'm such a huge fan and seeing upcoming pages would be amazing!! So..Let's see if I get this right, shall we?
Big Picture on 3rd Panel: I believe these are the creatures from 'The Selection Pro. Page 2'. (When creator is giving forth to every creature the existence of independence within their minds.) You can see the creatures head sticking out of the water on the last panel. [link]
Picture behind Kailani's head in last panel: When I first saw this I thought of the comic here on DeviantART called 'To The Dogs'; which is by kairiko. To me it looks like one of the diggers; because of the things on the legs. I'm not too confident on this one but it's all I can think of at the moment. [link]
I also thought a bit of Power of War when I saw this too, but I looked in your POW gallery and nothing was there. ):
4th tiny picture down on 3rd panel: When I first saw this picture, I though of 'The docter'. (Federico's docter.) Soo, I went to your YouTube account and looked at the video I remembered seeing her in. (Turns out it was 'The Selection Pronounciations plus EXTRA EPIC FUN FACTS'. xD) Anyways, so I found out that the race is called 'Tillanix'. So yes. I believe that the picture is either just a Tillanix or it's Federico's docter. [link]
After this, I'm stumped. ): My only other guess is that the very last picture on the 3rd panel is something from the 3 new prologue pages. Perhaps something like the evolution of the ambivians. The only other one I could be missing is the second small picture in the 3rd panel, but I don't recognise her. :/
Well, all in all, you did an amazing job!
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Whoops! Sorry for lateness!
Haha daaang, very nice suggestions!
You were pretty close on a couple. C:
Haha, and yes, that is "the doctor's" species in that one! I'm impressed you caught that xD It's not one of the pictures but still dang intensely awesome!
Thank you! C:
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S'okay. :]
Thankyou! :3
Yup, yup. Tillanix are cool! You should post up some sketches of them sometime. (Lol just a suggestion. :)
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Sorry this is so long. I was a bit excited. :'D
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Ahhh I love your comic <333
Im always checking my inbox constantly for the next page x3
Anywho, no idea what the paintings are, except for that one with the three..women I think? All looking up at that symbol, which appears to be on the floor of the first panel. Like everyone else said, I guess its the creators symbol and has a meaning to the prologue.
Good luck on the next few pages!
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Aww that makes me happy <3
Thank you so much!
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ohhhhhhh! i love feddy!!!!!!!
and u hav been takin ur time with this!
im dyin to see how this comic plays out!
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heck ya!!!! i love this graphic novel!!!!!!
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Awesome as usual so far 8Db Sorry my comments are always so boring XDD
Ok umm I'll try to guess the pictures but I'll probably fail xDD
Is the 5th frame that pike guy you drew one time? XD I remember you drawing a pike guy and you were like "I looove pike!" It might've even been a siren or something xD
Then is the 6th one the maid? :U
Then the 7th one, is that from the creation scene on the redone first page?
Then in the last panel, is that from POW?
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BORING MC BORINGSON
xD
Well, you got two of em C:
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*dies a little bit*
psh this is totaly awesome dont tll your self any different!!!!
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