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AmandaSylvia β WIP Bullets and Scars: Limits
Published: 2012-04-24 01:00:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 5334; Favourites: 176; Downloads: 0
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So this is the WIP for the comic that I'm doing for my portfolio that'll send to Gothenburgs University. Inspired mostly by Lana Del Rey's song 'Dark Paradise'. Here's the [link] to the song.Feel free to give me both good and bad critique, because I really want - and NEED - this to be the best piece I've ever done, if I'll be sending it as a part of my portfolio.
As this is only the WIP, the pictures are VERY 2D, with little to no shading, no colors and hardly any backgrounds, so that I already know and I will of course fix that for the finished piece.
PLEASE comment!!
UPDATE
And here's the finished and colored version:
Do not copy or steal! D:<
Art, Avery Shepard Β© me.
Thane Krios, Mass Effect Universe Β© BioWare.
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Mostly because I used some of my old random sketches as references when I drew that one, because I was too lazy to do so many new faces. But since this is just the sketch, there will be a lot of chances, especially on the skyline-picture. ^^
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hm... okay then!
i'm trusting You and totally putting to watch.
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Okay, this genuinely made me cry. WIP or not, this is gorgeous as it is... Flawless...
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Thank you so much, that's a HUGE compliment to me!
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First of ALL, it's OFFICIAL! All great minds must be think alike!!! Geez, I designed Jane having a moment like this with her gun too!!! 
Anyway, to the details, I liked the concept, loved all panels but especially the 3rd and the last (note: the last you HAVE to have it as a stand alone too, it's SO awesome), your sketching is clean, and you did a great job with Thane himself and his armor! 
It already looks great, so I can only imagine that colored will look FANTASTIC!!!!
Though I think that you can lower the size of your text! 
This is great Amanda, can't wait to see it finished! 
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I think most of us ME-fans, at least all Shrios lovers, has at least one of these moments with their Shepard
Thank you for the critique, and I will keep it in mind. I was already going to make the text smaller, but I just wanted to make sure it was visible for the sketch
And thank you again, I'm glad you liked it!
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You are welcome gorgeous! 
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Aww, jΓ€ttefint! Γlskar den! SΓ₯ sorglig. D:
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Tack! Jag vet, Avery's liv blir inte sΓ₯ vΓ€ldans glatt i ME3 ;_;
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I dont wanna know! D8
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Vastly enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing it with us!
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You're welcome! And thank you, I'm glad you liked it! ^^
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WHY YOU MAKE ME CRY AMANDA?!!
This is...so beautiful...I can't stand it.
I LOVE how you draw Thane...
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I'M SORRY SARAH!!
I'm happy that you do!
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That is Great =^_^= I can't wait to see the finished version
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I shall try to finish the final version as soon as possible, and with the sketches done I have already finished most of the work ^^
And thank you, I'm so happy you enjoyed it!
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Damn it.. Must not cry.. or will have to turn in man card.. on final strike..
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Come on, CRY. GIVE ME MY MAN TEARS!!
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Q_Q *ample supply*
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Wow this caught me off guard, and I must say this has a hell of a lot of emotion in it. Man tears are popping up.
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daldfj;lasdjf;l *sobs forever* This is so gorgeous, Amanda. Seriously. The detail and the faces and the... everything. It's just perfect. I can't wait to see it colored, hon.
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*squeals happy fangirl artist squeel of doom* THANK YOU SO MUCH HON!! It makes me so happy to hear that you like it!!
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I love it, sweet thing. It honestly breaks my heart to see something like this, knowing what happens. And don't think I missed that nod to Dark Paradise in panel 9.
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I'm so happy that you love it, and that it moves, because I can't remember the last time I worked so hard on something, and I haven't even finished it yet! But knowing that people like it so far makes it worth all the pain, and I will definitely finish it!
Thank you again!
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Yes, that I do.
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