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Deus-Lux [2013-10-04 18:53:14 +0000 UTC]

Hello again. This is a lovely piece with a beautiful, fitting colour scheme.

As with before, the colours are well balanced and fitting, the purple and blue may not match too well, but that is more a matter of taste than anything else.

The anatomy is off, but with reference, that can be easily sorted, practice is the key.

The hair is a little off focus, it would probably benefit you to use a small hard round brush to add the hair details. I can see the starts of that at the fringe and the highlight but the rest of the hair can do with that. It is also very off centre for the angle of the head. The nose and mouth are very light, I can barely make them out. They should be more defined. Don't worry about it too much, but try and define them more, don't be afraid of making a hard line or two. The eye is good for the style, although I can't see any eyebrows, which could help with emotions. The tear should probably be a little bit transparent, but it is well placed.

Brilliant work, keep it up.

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SzzCarl [2013-09-21 17:19:15 +0000 UTC]

A wonderful result of a 30min work. But there are some small comments that requires a long drawing time to find and eliminate, I mean attention to details...
The aurora style background matches the subject very well. It matches very well to the light blue glow of her hair. Both the fore and background blends splendidly together to form a mysterious glowing effect(theme).

I would like to discuss the hair. The blurring hair strands are very efficient in translating a dreamy mood. The few specific single strands of hair in the front is well placed. But the seem to hang in the middle of the air, what I meant is the root of the hair started at a positon inconsisten of the rest of the hair. I suggest you blend them under the longer strands since they are simply bangs, hope you know what I mean. As to the center of the the head where all the hair originates- too much space there, need more hair or lines. The extra purple strand is placed wonderfully, I love it there. It gives a special personality to her.

The eyes are wonderful. The glow at the bottom part of the eye synchronises very well with the flowing tear. Love it.

I see a blur shape of her lips. Did you try to draw it and decided its best not to? Perhaps its difficult to blend the lips into the shadow? Whatever happened in the process of creating I´m not sure. I was thinking her lips could be clearer. The shadow in the nose is perfect.

All those I wrote up there could be negligible since you completed this in under 30mins. There is simply no time to go into details and planning and corrections. I really salute your speed... Its like, wow, only a computer can go this fast.

But there one detail about the neck I would like to inquire about. The neck, there is 2 necklace like line going down to the bottom of her neck. Is that necklace or her neck muscle? Cause I wasn´t expecting any artificial stuff from nect to shoulder...And that being there is a little confusing.

Mistakes aside, this work is spectacular. The whole choice of colour and background gives and amazing feeling of loneliness, solitude and sadness. This is going in my favourite!

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Dark-Hart-Design [2013-09-17 05:28:27 +0000 UTC]

very good color work

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First-to-Go [2013-09-17 04:14:05 +0000 UTC]

I like how you used the colors to reflect the gloomy feel of the image.  I don't think I want to know why she's so sad.  The simplicity overall, I think, enhances the atmosphere quite well.

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Miyuki3769 [2013-09-16 21:35:15 +0000 UTC]

I love how her hair is glowing in a way It's beautiful ^^

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raikostar [2013-09-16 02:07:24 +0000 UTC]

Amazing

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ThisArtToBeYours [2013-09-16 01:16:49 +0000 UTC]

This is so gorgeous, I'm like WOW! .   Nice. 

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DiabolicLily [2013-09-15 19:51:37 +0000 UTC]

Very beautiful! 

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Anbleach [2013-09-15 18:54:48 +0000 UTC]

Decently!

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RunningWire [2013-09-15 18:29:17 +0000 UTC]

Very nice for only a half an hour. 

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LuisMelendez64 [2013-09-15 18:09:02 +0000 UTC]

very nice i like the colors

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