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StoryKillinger [2013-03-07 20:55:08 +0000 UTC]

Not bad. But there are some unexplained shadows on the victims face. Dimple in her cheek next to her nose is incredibly unnecessarily dark. More crevasses you have on the face, the uglier your character will seem to the eye. Anatomy is a bit off as well. Her neck too long,distance between her eye and ear is massive, measure yours... There is no more then an eye's length. Determine where the light is coming from and keep it there. That shadow on her nose is caused by something unexplained. Calculate that the edges of her mouth end directly below the irises. ( go look in the mirror)
That's about it. Also putting more emphasis on the character is good. Do that by dimming the background and setting a darker more macabre mood to it.
Leave just the suggestions for the mind of the interpreter to figure out, that its a stone castle.
Hope it helps.

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