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Published: 2006-03-09 01:52:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 1116; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 163
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just trying my hand at some digital painting, i think it looks rather good for my first time ever. i need some constructive comments including the followingCONSTRUCTIVE COMMENT HELPFULLNESS:
Links to some good tutorials?
how i could make this look better
anything having to do with the 2 listed above.
thanks
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the font is very displaced, concept is clear and clean, just try to make more of this
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lol why is everyone knocking it? Actually, it's probably my favorite piece that you have, I like the color-style of it so much better than your other stuff.
Why don't you try applying some things you have used/learned here to your other pieces?
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Sandstorm? Hmm... Maybe you should put little spots of see-through.
TeraLink Was Here!
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maybe sharp some stuff, do some lighting, use a contrasting color also_
keep it up_
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yeah im gonna try to edit tonight.
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I don't think there is enough to it. The thing in the middle isn't enough. Add more details, and add more spunk. I think it needs more if you aren't going to have a focal point. Nice job though.
BTW, what program did you use to make it?
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caught it first man 
yo i like that shit man looks smooth , but i can't really see the focal point, like there is that space with circles in there but it's kidna not nuff
good stuff styll tho
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airbrushing pieces dont really have focal points when they are absrtact. but thanks a bunch for the comment
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yes they do. its all part of composition, you need a focal point or the eye wonders. basic rules there. Good colours!
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the eye needs to wander on this piece, or you will only be concentrating on one point. which isnt the point of most pieces. look at the top right corner and then move your eyes with the curves of the coloring.
have a good day
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i see. the flow needs some work then i guess.
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how so? could you be a little more specific.
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thats your job, im just suggesting
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you must have some thing that freaking apeals to you, you cant just say Do that, without backing it up with how. i could do it one way, and then u could say again, i dont like it, fix it, then i could do it again, and you not like it! and then it could repeat and repeat and it would be very annoying...
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i have no idea what you could do to it, i just think it needs more, somthing more interesting.
look at what Punkin said
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you are really bad a constructive comments.
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hmm. do you expect an essay? If i see somthing wrong with an image, i would say so, not give you an essay on what you should do, thats for you to explore.
Whenever i give you critisism you always take it badly, from now in i will say "thats brilliant, well done" like everyother Da'er. you dont deserve critisism, you cant appriciate it.
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i expected something this long from you, ALL I FUCKING ASKED YOU IS IF YOU COULD TELL ME HOW YOU WOULD LIKE IT DONE DAM! geez, can you be more of an asshole, i ddint want a fucking essay..maybe something this long..
________________________________________ _____________ on how i could make it better, not even that if you dont want it. you are the worst commenter i have, its seriously annoying when you tell me to fix something, and dont tell me how to fix it. he1z sends me comments saying, try adding more texture to a certain part, that would make me like it better. look at the other comments on the piecs, they dont just say fix the render, they say make the render a little more blury in some parts, that would help
if you are just going to annoy me more and more over and over again, quit sending me comments.
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I NEED A FOCAL POINTTTT **bangs his head against the wall**
lol ok no focal than no still i like it
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