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Antarija — The Untold - part 67

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Published: 2020-04-01 00:09:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 2231; Favourites: 45; Downloads: 16
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Hey, there, The Untold is finally back and it's not an April's Fool joke ( I mean, hopefully)!


I've been thinking about it lately and decided I'll be posting shorter pages but trying to go back to monthly updates and I'll do everything in my might to keep to that decision this time (that saying I already have the next page ready, so at least next update will be on time...) To tell you the truth I really hate that 3-4 updates per year system  I've unconsciously fallen into. I think it's hard to keep the interest in the story when it doesn't move at all for few months. I'd really love to give you updates much more frequently but I need to finally face it - I'm totally unable to make them faster and in the same length. Not to mention Ive cought Khail's insomnia-thing, not being able to sleep for more than 2 hours per night and that together with my job, which is rather draining both physically and mentally,it doesn't leave me in a very "artistic" mood (more like an empty-minded potato staring into the wall as if it held answers for every mystery of the universe). So it's hard to get anything done.

So yup. That's it for the news on my side. Big thank you for everyone still sticking around!


Trivia:

- My interpretation of Leavanny lineis that when it evolves thanks to their "love-meter", or whatever it's called, is that in this universe they would be rather deadly to their own Trainers, since in this world the more attached the Pokemon is to their owner the more severe consequenes they suffer upon their Pokemon death. That's why Leavanny is only bought by the Trainers if they are to fight, they never use the ones they evolved themselves, they simply sell them. Money money money~

- Burgh is a Gym Leader and thus a kind of a mentor so he would never miss a chance to lecture a student!

- Every Trainer have their own files at the Guild, including things like birthplace, the usual info/bio, schooling, list of hunted Wilds, registered Pokemon both kept/dead/sold ect and a whole story of their achievements as Trainers. Quests solved, mission accomplished/failed, badges earned and all that.

- Since Khail was rather busy with his bandit life since a young age, he never got a proper schooling which is usually forced upon everyone with the talent to be a Trainer, so his files are a bit... made up.

- Seekers are Trainers from the Guild especially keen on reading auras and every year they wander through the whole Unova looking for the kids awakened to their powers (not older than 6 y.o, after that age the mana circuits are set so if you didn't get them - you won't)



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Comments: 28

XiwyCain [2020-04-29 15:06:57 +0000 UTC]

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Antarija In reply to XiwyCain [2020-05-05 19:57:17 +0000 UTC]

Hurray!

That's what Buggy man was born for~

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DeadlockAt [2020-04-10 07:14:01 +0000 UTC]

Waiting 5 months was so worth it to witness the birth of another important part of this comics lore.

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Antarija In reply to DeadlockAt [2020-04-13 00:42:48 +0000 UTC]

When I hear "5 months" I want to cry... Has it really been 5 months already...?

A-anyway, thank you very much, I'm glad you still think such a long wait was worth it!

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DeadlockAt In reply to Antarija [2020-04-13 00:55:42 +0000 UTC]

I think read is the correct word than heard.

Also when I find a comic, manga or game that I like but have to wait months for the next chapter. I don't really mind. Just glad this comic of yours  isn't dead.
It's the first pokemon comic I know that combines 3 things I like. 

Fantasy magic, mature content and an anime/cartoon/game world as a base.

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Antarija In reply to DeadlockAt [2020-04-16 22:13:20 +0000 UTC]

Point.


I'm glad you think so and that you're such a patient person, haha.


Hopefully it will stay enjoyable!

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DeadlockAt In reply to Antarija [2020-04-17 02:15:29 +0000 UTC]

I do and will enjoy it. 

You have no idea how long an already very patient guy who is also a dedicated poke-fan can wait.

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Antarija In reply to DeadlockAt [2020-04-18 17:54:48 +0000 UTC]

And I'm very glad to have  this very patient guy who is also a dedicated poke-fan on the board, then!  

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DeadlockAt In reply to Antarija [2020-04-18 18:32:18 +0000 UTC]

You sure are. They waited 19 years to finally play their very first real pokemon game.

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celdragon [2020-04-07 21:00:39 +0000 UTC]

What do you mean broken one? 

He beat you ... even tho you cheated ... grumf

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Antarija In reply to celdragon [2020-04-16 22:10:53 +0000 UTC]

Who knows, who knows... Burgh is a bit 'special', after all~

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Velink [2020-04-04 08:02:58 +0000 UTC]

Oh hey! update!

al I heard are just Burgh saying your pokemons are special

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Antarija In reply to Velink [2020-04-16 22:09:30 +0000 UTC]

Seems miracles can happen at timese, aha!

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cD5s [2020-04-02 21:03:05 +0000 UTC]

I love how you weave details cementing the word building, like with the Leavanny and the fact that they sell us both for money and for not suffering too much damage when they die because of course they're just toll for them
Burgh wanting to have a bath, for his sake I hope he doesn't ask Khail to join him lol
and speaking of Khail he really is something else, able to go from "don't fucking bother me" to "charming sparkly man" in a second
Hope you're okay with everything that's going on too

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Antarija In reply to cD5s [2020-04-13 00:39:16 +0000 UTC]

Ah, thank you so very much! I'm trying to work on my storry-telling skills a bit and using less words for explanations in order to not bore my dear readers to death, so I'm glad it's working somehow!

I'm not sure if he has any self-preservation instinct left, to be honest.


Yup, he's definitely mastered it.


Yes, I'm good, thank you. I hope you're also fine, safe and healthy!

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ShadeOfObscurity [2020-04-02 13:13:51 +0000 UTC]

Okay I wish I can help you with your sleep but don't trust anything the wall says. I tends to say some really crazy stuff that only the Lovecraftian gods would understand. Hopefully these can give you some kind of emotional boost.


www.youtube.com/watch?v=yvhXOK…


www.youtube.com/watch?v=56jUTb…


www.youtube.com/watch?v=w30D5x…


What is file might be made up. Gasp it like he needs to hide his identity. I wonder what kind person Khail could be? Hmm the mystery deepens.


You did mention in a past post about how the closer the bond to a pokemon is the worst the feed back the trainer get from it's unfortunate demise. Hell I liked to think that Levanny line are similar to praying mantis where the feedback is much stronger with females since you know females mantis have a tendency to eat the males head. Oh god Khail is going to have the worst migraine if that ever happens. Which it won't. Because Tsun Tsun princess is precious and I will be very upset if something bad happens to her.


Also white text on white background is really hard to read. Could barely read when Burgh asked to "prepare the bath", which probably smell like roses.


If you ever need to talk just send me a note. Have a great day.

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Antarija In reply to ShadeOfObscurity [2020-04-13 00:35:35 +0000 UTC]

Hm, are you sure? Sometimes they say some very amusing things, though...


Ah, those are so beautiful music (even if one seems a bit different that the rest, yet it's still awesome xD)

Well, I will share one of my favs lately as well then, boop

www.youtube.com/watch?v=0EeZ8u…


Nooo, it's unbelievable, right? Not the innocent, just, little Khail~


Hm, that is a very tempting idea to follow, to be honest.

Of course there won't. Nah-ah. Nope. No way. Not possible.

Or is it~?


Wait, I could have sworn I did change it to a black stroke, agh dammit. I will fix it later, sorry for that.


Thank you very much, I might just need to do that soon, haha.... Welp, have a great day as well!


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ProfShiro [2020-04-01 17:30:14 +0000 UTC]

Really love seeing this boy again. And I somehow completely forgot that Khail looked that beat up kjhgfghj

I don't know how the hell that happened but here we are haha~


I really like the lightning in this, I guess after seeing all this dark stuff it's a nice change of pace for sure~

And Khailey will ever fail to make me like that smile of him haha~

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Antarija In reply to ProfShiro [2020-04-01 22:38:49 +0000 UTC]

And I'm glad to be able to bring him back, haha. Meh, it looks worse than it really is, forhead wounds always look like bloodbath, haha.


Burgh's office is much more... lively, I guess? Though I think that green glass in windows would be pretty annoying after some time, but oh well.


Aww, but he put his best prince bloody charming mode on here, haha.

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ProfShiro In reply to Antarija [2020-04-03 16:43:34 +0000 UTC]

That's true.

Khail is that one fella that will say: "Meh it's just a fleshwound"

A true nightmare for every healer-


Hmm could be! Tho yeah I gotta agree. Green Glass does sound annoying after some time. But then again,

every coloured glass can get pretty annoying in a normal household...except a church maybe.


Well, he has a pretty smile that works for him. Still, despite sparkles, it's damn unsincere, honey~

aka thanks to Gil with his smile I have a sensor for unsincere smiles orz

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Mendelrock [2020-04-01 13:32:23 +0000 UTC]

I don't mind shorter pages as long as you don't burn yourself out (more). I'd hate it to see you drop the story. Take care of yourself before taking care of us. We love The Untold enough to wait.

Anyway, glad to see you back!

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Antarija In reply to Mendelrock [2020-04-01 22:31:57 +0000 UTC]

Fear not, I don't plan to drop this project. I'm really glad there are people who seem to enjoy it so much and it gives me the motivation and energy to keep on going. So thank you very much for your support, it really means a lot!


Thank you!

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Bazzinga-Hideki [2020-04-01 02:35:33 +0000 UTC]

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Antarija In reply to Bazzinga-Hideki [2020-04-01 22:24:15 +0000 UTC]

Uhuhu, I can't spoil you too much right after the big come back, can I now~?

Aww, thank you, I'm really happy you enjoy it! And what can I say? I grew very fond of making this story over the past five years and I'd like to see it through to the end, haha.



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thatguybrody [2020-04-01 01:01:03 +0000 UTC]

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Antarija In reply to thatguybrody [2020-04-01 22:19:08 +0000 UTC]

: )

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AlyBur [2020-04-01 00:58:46 +0000 UTC]

Aww yeah, back at it again with the cast!

I honestly find this nuzlocke to have such interesting characters, and the plot is exciting as well!

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Antarija In reply to AlyBur [2020-04-01 22:18:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much, I'm really glad you think so!

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