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AOGRAI — FG FrontCover-New Issue #01
Published: 2013-05-07 18:06:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 2396; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 0
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Finally after taking into account everyone's suggestions into consideration; this is what I have come up with.I still wanted her to keep her pose, but I tweaked it to look as though she was floating... also wanted her to show some skin tone.
Fonts were readjusted and My Avatar was made black and white to reduce too much attention away from the main pict.
Well, I hope that all will approve and thank you for all your valuable input.
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I think this version at last hits the nail on proverbial head. It's both simple and elegant. It conveys a sense of mystery and piques my curiosity. I'd definitely buy it right off the shelf at my local comic book outlet. The Black and white icon was a good choice. I actually hadn't noticed how distracting it was until now. I still like it mind. I think the glowing bar on the tube looks like it's underlining "Awakening" it's not bad or a distraction just making a point to note it for you. Still love the pose.
Cheers mate!
TBJ
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Thank you for taking the time to critique and yes the lettering for the awakening was placed there intentionally. Thank you for picking that up. I learnt a lot doing this frontcover and valuable input did help from DA members like goodself.
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This is incredible I must say. Your cover looks very epic. You did a wonderful job with making her frozen. The title "The Awakening" looks so awesome and the light below to me looks to indicate how much more time she has before she comes back to the world of the living. The "FlyGirl" banner fits the scene very well along with the capsule she is in and the mist around it looks so real. I am very impressed how you brought this together. I can almost see it movie like I was to be watching an animated version. It also looks like she was frozen in the last position she was in before she died. This cover is very appealing. Superb.
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Yo Anzony, always a pleasure to read your critique. Thank you so much.
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It means just as much to know you appreciate them.
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Ahh much obliged kind... err Demon? 
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Sorry but what is a Forum Troll? What do they do?
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A forum troll just makes horrible post to try and start argument in forums, A because I am normally very helpful over at the Daz forums this was sort of a standing joke
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Aww better to be a good helpful troll than an instigator who dies horribly in the end and does not get the girl!
Being helpful, is a good thing. Love 
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reads real well,nice layout and artistic punch as well!
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Hey thanks a huge load of it! I must say it is a privilege to chat with you. I have bought quite a lot of your brushes and the Fog/Mist effect was from you. I guess, I should thank you too for that.
Thought I recognised that name - deviney!
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no problem, I am not one that someone has to credit me all the time, I am just glad you get satisfaction from my products, if some one asks just tell him. Thank you
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Thanks man, inspiring to hear that from you.
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Yes yes yes much better! I would say : don't touch it any more!
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