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sort of a sequel to ardentaspen.deviantart.com/art… , specifically when read with the comment chain added by Foxbear"Take it slow, Dad," Eli balanced on the Headmaster's hand, acting as resident therapy coach as June was busy. "You've been out of the armor for a month."
"Don't remind me," Vanguard sighed and raised both arms again, pleased to only experience moderate pain this time.
He'd barely been used to the Predacon body that his encounter with the Triptych Mask had rescanned his transtector into. Being out of action for a month after a surprise attack on the winter camp did not do much to help him acclimate. The cockpit had been reinforced at Storm Soldier's insistence, which would prevent a repeat of the incident that had left Jack with a concussion and nearly bleeding out in the middle of an acid rainstorm.
Vanguard struggled to lift his wings, but the sheets of pliable bio-mesh and steel remained flatly hanging against his back. He'd regained almost full range of motion for everything but his wings. Eli could see the frustration in the bright green optics, and not for the last time wondered why his father's armor -- and Aunt Miko's and Uncle Raf's -- had become much more emotive lately. Had Raf upgraded them?
The teenager leapt easily from Vanguard's hand to one of the several large trees that grew in the biodome. Ignoring the mech's outraged exclamation over the risky jump, he held up his hands and grinned.
"Be right back, keep trying to extend your wings."
"Keep trying to-!" Vanguard sputtered a little as Eli slid down the trunk and vanished into one of the tall hangars installed for Cybertronians to use. "Just who is in charge around here, I'd like to know?"
His eldest son returned moments later, with Storm Soldier in tow. "See?" The boy pointed, "He can barely lift his wings at all!"
"You try flexing your shoulder blades sometime, little one, and see how far off the ground you get," Storm Soldier remarked flatly. "Vanguard will recover in his own time, provided," And here he shot a stern look at Vanguard, "That he does not attempt to surpass his current physical limits before he is ready."
The huge mech's wings, which folded out into solar sails on his vehicular mode, rippled once with a snap in an irritated gesture, but they were still held close enough to his armor that Vanguard could read more concern than exasperation.
"Aye, Ærfæder," the mech in question chuckled, quietly expressing that no, he would not be trying to test new limits yet. At least, not until the stitches came out.
"Not exactly the homecoming I pictured," Vanguard joked half-heartedly, running a quick check to ensure that the stitches weren't being tugged at too much.
"Better than a funeral," Storm Soldier said tersely. He, for one, was not eager to remember having to carry the nearly unresponsive human through an acid storm to find medical attention, certain Vanguard would bleed out in his interior.
After a moment's awkward silence, he scooped Eli up off the ground and gestured Vanguard to follow him.
"There will be time enough to torture the frame when Medic Woman is no longer busy. Come: Prime had a forge moved into the hangar."
"But my wings-" Vanguard protested softly.
"Let your wings look after themselves. You are overthinking your actions," the older mech replied, and handed him a hammer. "In the meantime, six Predacons will need new reinforcement on their armor after the last attack. Start working on that while I finish the next shipment of safeties for the Smelt Clan's subsonic repeaters."
Eli shuddered. "Smelt Clan, huh? That Gigatron guy is creepy. Scares the heck out of Mason, and he loves everyone!"
"He's loyal to Predaking," Vanguard admonished, "So "creepy" or not, he's not going anywhere so long as Predaking allows him to rule."
"Unless his ambition gets the best of him," Storm Soldier said thoughtfully, stoking the fires in the forges, "Then I may have to challenge him for leadership of his clan."
Murmur or not, Vanguard and Eli still heard his musings and stared at him. Vanguard had even managed to lift his wings a fraction of an inch.
"You'd challenge Gigatron for his clan, Grandda?" Eli asked, surprised.
Vanguard's concern was slightly different. "You've..." he studied the way his mentor held his wings. "You've actually discussed this with Predaking, haven't you?"
"To work with you!" Storm Soldier scolded, "That's none of your concern!
The boys exchanged worried glances, but did as they were told. It was to be hoped for Gigatron's sake that he had not yet outright defied Predaking.
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Comments: 37
MiniKoontzy [2016-05-23 18:05:55 +0000 UTC]
Heh. Talk about a strangely intimidating therapist. And moody/prone to outbursts. I think somebody needs emotion management classes.
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ArdentAspen In reply to MiniKoontzy [2016-05-23 18:18:39 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, Jack was probably better off letting Ratchet take charge of the healing process haha
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Foxbear [2016-05-22 14:21:23 +0000 UTC]
Ah, Storm Soldier makes an effective physical therapist I'd imagine. I also can't help imagining the kids trying to wheedle rides a dragon back out of their father or grandfather.
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ArdentAspen In reply to Foxbear [2016-05-22 15:06:56 +0000 UTC]
Mason is probably the one who gets away with it the most. And Storm Soldier will never, ever tell a soul -- not even Vanguard -- but it's because Mason climbed up his back once and settled on his shoulder and whispered, "Op-pa took me flying but he doesn't go very high."
And why should Optimus take Jack's youngest flying? He didn't even have wings!
It occurred to him later that Mason was a very cunning child. He was more proud than irritated, and had every intention of encouraging that trait once the child was old enough to put it to responsible use.
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fikrikooler [2016-05-21 13:29:53 +0000 UTC]
Is Jack the only one remade?
Can I see the others(Miko Rafael) as predacon transtector?
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ArdentAspen In reply to fikrikooler [2016-05-21 14:06:51 +0000 UTC]
Jack is the only one with a Predacon transtector in the audience, mostly because he's the only one who didn't have the common sense to not touch the Triptych Mask, but also because he's the go-between for humans and Predacons.
Raf is all about stealth, hacking, and sabotage. That's why his transtector is modeled somewhat after Soundwave (which freaks Soundwave out considerably).
And Miko is and always has been a Wrecker. I could see her maybe pulling off a Dinobot look at some point (like that one episode of Rescue Bots where everyone was a triple changer for a day lol). She'd probably be a Velociraptor. Though Spinosaurus Miko would be cool too.
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fikrikooler In reply to ArdentAspen [2016-05-21 20:46:30 +0000 UTC]
Rescue Bots episode? Triple Changer? Yeah that'd be cool.
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ArdentAspen In reply to fikrikooler [2016-05-21 21:07:03 +0000 UTC]
Did you ever see the Rescue Bots episode where everyone including Optimus inexplicably took a dino mode?
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fikrikooler In reply to ArdentAspen [2016-05-21 23:59:04 +0000 UTC]
Actually no. I didnt care much before, but season 3? got me hooked. Please tell?
A personal request... the trios face emotes.. and megs, like theres 4 pieces of art that shows 3 emotions on their faceplate, happy, sad and a random face. Like Jack's 3rd face is Serious, Rafael's was like sexy Superiority that KO always does looking over his shoulders and Miko's face of Glee and Excitement. PLEASE?
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ArdentAspen In reply to fikrikooler [2016-05-22 00:28:20 +0000 UTC]
I don't remember what season it was, (my interest in the show waxes and wanes a bit) but there were a lot of Jurassic Park references haha. Optimus, unexpectedly, is a t-rex. www.youtube.com/watch?v=8b3Xwb…
I'm not really sure what you're asking with the emote thing, honestly? Are you talking about pages of faces, or a ton of separate pictures, or?
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fikrikooler In reply to ArdentAspen [2016-05-22 02:01:30 +0000 UTC]
Emotions, like only their heads in one page for 1 character,3 faces showing different emotions, 1st is happy, then sad then the ones I recommended.
This request can make some interesting things to the table. Basically I want to see their faces only without being distracted with body builds and such, just wanna see their expression, on their transtector face.
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ArdentAspen In reply to fikrikooler [2016-05-22 02:39:37 +0000 UTC]
Are you asking this as an official commission request? Or more like a "if you have time and inspiration" kind of suggestion?
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fikrikooler In reply to ArdentAspen [2016-05-22 20:58:19 +0000 UTC]
It might have not posted yet or my internet sucks, but I hope this isn't something that was doubleposted..
orig09.deviantart.net/bb68/f/2…
Basically like this but just 3 faces.
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ArdentAspen In reply to fikrikooler [2016-05-22 21:26:46 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I got the other one
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fikrikooler In reply to ArdentAspen [2016-05-22 20:56:39 +0000 UTC]
orig09.deviantart.net/bb68/f/2…
Like this..
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ArdentAspen In reply to fikrikooler [2016-05-22 21:26:30 +0000 UTC]
Oh my word the Megatron with the lovestruck face is hilarious
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fikrikooler In reply to ArdentAspen [2016-05-23 09:45:41 +0000 UTC]
I know right, now imagine Vanguard, Nakadai and Dr Esquivel's faces with these.
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fikrikooler In reply to ArdentAspen [2016-05-22 04:52:17 +0000 UTC]
Time and inspiration.
With very detailed faces, one can portray how ur story emotions look like. Say, Jack saw a Predacon terminate and he was sad, now readers can actually see how Vanguard's facial expression is. If u have time..
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ArdentAspen In reply to fikrikooler [2016-05-22 13:11:16 +0000 UTC]
A lot of what I draw depends on of I have the inspiration to draw it, much like with my writing, so while I'll keep the idea in mind I feel it only fair to warn you that it's not a guarantee that I'll end up doing it.
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fikrikooler In reply to ArdentAspen [2016-05-22 17:24:52 +0000 UTC]
It's Okay, love your art as it is. It was just a request that I wanted to see something I can imagine but can't draw out.
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ArdentAspen In reply to fikrikooler [2016-05-22 17:47:29 +0000 UTC]
I'd probably do them as separate character sheets if I did all of them, Miko first (because she's my favorite Wrecker)
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fikrikooler In reply to ArdentAspen [2016-05-22 17:59:40 +0000 UTC]
I favor Rafael, and Soundwave Cuz I like hacking and obscurity.
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ArdentAspen In reply to fikrikooler [2016-05-22 18:54:38 +0000 UTC]
I can tell
There's things I like about each of the kids, really. Which one is my favorite favorite tends to vary depending on the day haha
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fikrikooler In reply to ArdentAspen [2016-05-22 19:09:53 +0000 UTC]
I agree with you. They have their own specialties, and I, like to amplify ALL of that potential by turning them into corresponding Cybertronians, as a mirror of Decepticons, a Triple(Quadra)-Changer or a composite Seeker/Wrecker form.
In my mind, I often portray Jack as a Triple-Changer with Jet and Sports Car combination, now You have sparked a Predacon/Land/Air-Changer for me
Rafael's hacking capabilities make me happy, so I want him to have an efficient body, so I think of him in a young Soundwave-like body, with multitude of cables, Cloak-Shield and Wireless Hacking, including Telepathy.
Miko I don't like her brash attitude, but there are qualities that endear me to her. I imaged her a Seeker(Carrier Protocols ) and Wrecker, control gravity, able to fly and make a huge skydive bomb.
I like to think of my trio able to fly with wings, make them have special super OP abilites gifted by Primus to be a Prime of a specific region. And also, I like to make all my characters have a deceptively good look, albeit a bit Decepticon looking, cuz I like Con's builds, they're sharp and ... Sexy... somehow.
Anyway, with them having Special Stuff, I make them the primary target of Decepticons, cuz with them, they will win, unfortunately the Trio doesn't wanna join..
Sorry for the long text, I was expressing everything I thought of, and how happy to find a deviantartist that makes the EXACT thing I was looking for.
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fikrikooler In reply to fikrikooler [2016-05-21 13:30:47 +0000 UTC]
Also awesome! He looks much more adult.
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Fanatic97 [2016-05-21 11:43:19 +0000 UTC]
Oh nice desgins
I wonder waht Storm's Dragon mode looks like
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ArdentAspen In reply to Fanatic97 [2016-05-21 14:09:29 +0000 UTC]
Well I was sort of going off the Botcon Exclusive comic where Megatron has wings in bot mode, but they're sails on his car mode. If he were a dragon, I'd have to break out my old "Dragonart Evolution" art book to find a model that would fit him.
I kind of think the traditional long necked dragon like Predaking and Skylynx wouldn't fit him.
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Fanatic97 In reply to ArdentAspen [2016-05-21 15:57:49 +0000 UTC]
I see, So something akin to Toothless maybe>
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ArdentAspen In reply to Fanatic97 [2016-05-21 16:11:08 +0000 UTC]
Maybe less cute XD
A cute Megatron would be a little undignified, dontcha think?
If I did go with a HTTYD design for body style though, it'd probably be closer to Cloudjumper. Big, sturdy, short neck and powerful limbs.
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Fanatic97 In reply to ArdentAspen [2016-05-21 16:18:17 +0000 UTC]
True...but it'd be hailrous
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JasonVoorheesfurry [2016-05-21 09:59:04 +0000 UTC]
Is that Megatron? 8O
Is he a dragon? :3 Am I getting Beast Wars feels?! XD
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ArdentAspen In reply to JasonVoorheesfurry [2016-05-21 14:11:27 +0000 UTC]
Well, either he's a dragon and I haven't decided on how the alt mode looks yet (it'd have to be distinct from Predaking, Skylynx, and Gigatron)
Or its like the Botcon 2016 exclusive comic where Megatron has wings as a bot but they turn into like sails or decorative fins on his vehicle mode.
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JasonVoorheesfurry In reply to ArdentAspen [2016-05-21 22:02:29 +0000 UTC]
that'd be cool ^..^
His alt mode could be a humanoid dragon.
While Predaking and the others (at least in Prime) are mostly/primarily 4 legged in the show, Megatorn-Dragon could be 2 legged.
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ArdentAspen In reply to JasonVoorheesfurry [2016-05-22 00:23:55 +0000 UTC]
like a wyvrn kind of dragon? ( I think that's what the two-legged kind are called, anyway)
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JasonVoorheesfurry In reply to ArdentAspen [2016-05-22 07:39:36 +0000 UTC]
Um no like a *thinks* .... Like .... well like a dragon that walks like a human.
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ArdentAspen In reply to JasonVoorheesfurry [2016-05-22 13:08:56 +0000 UTC]
So like Deathsaurus' sort of Godzilla look?
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