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Published: 2008-11-22 03:54:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 1153; Favourites: 63; Downloads: 43
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Description Fullsize is about twice as big as "fullview", but I didn't ink it very well, so it'll look awful if you download it. ^_^" I might do the whole comic that way... (assuming I do the comic)
This is the second panel I've colored, but the first is just a close-up of Ed knocking on the door. ^_^"

Hmm... Well, I thought I should upload something, so... (by the way, if every panel takes as long to do, I should have the comic done... in about two years? Assuming it's as short as I first planned (10 pages or so), which it most likely won't be, if I put a semi-OC badguy in it.)

Anyone with some suggestions of things to do? (like if the panel outlines should be thicker, or if I shouldn't shade that way when it's cloudy - really, how are you supposed to cell-shade in that weather?)
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Comments: 23

HiromuArakawa [2010-09-01 16:45:28 +0000 UTC]

Ain't he pretty... *stares at Ed till my eyes come out*

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Took-Baggins [2008-12-06 21:06:39 +0000 UTC]

i like the cloudy look. things get like that with snow. anyway, fantastic panel! i really like it!

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AsjJohnson In reply to Took-Baggins [2008-12-06 21:27:57 +0000 UTC]

thanks. ^_^

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Took-Baggins In reply to AsjJohnson [2008-12-06 23:55:24 +0000 UTC]

no problem!

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KrisKenshin [2008-11-30 04:26:50 +0000 UTC]

oh that is beautiful!

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AsjJohnson In reply to KrisKenshin [2008-11-30 14:36:55 +0000 UTC]

thanks. ^_^

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imaginary-ang3l [2008-11-22 21:40:50 +0000 UTC]

Looks awesome!

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AsjJohnson In reply to imaginary-ang3l [2008-11-22 21:55:47 +0000 UTC]

thanks. ^_^

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imaginary-ang3l In reply to AsjJohnson [2008-11-22 22:02:32 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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Iris-Angel [2008-11-22 16:25:53 +0000 UTC]

I think you did a fantastic job!! For the door, it should have some more detail into it so that it's more noticable. Other than that, it's great!^_^

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AsjJohnson In reply to Iris-Angel [2008-11-22 17:58:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. ^_^
Perhaps I'll work on the door more. I probaby needed a better reference. ^_^"

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Iris-Angel In reply to AsjJohnson [2008-11-22 18:41:03 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.^-^

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lokiescape [2008-11-22 15:44:16 +0000 UTC]

I simply love this!

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AsjJohnson In reply to lokiescape [2008-11-22 15:57:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. ^_^ Hopefully I'll have time to do more soon.
Out of the comic pages I've thought of so far, I like this one most. Although, I like the page because of three panels I haven't done yet...

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lokiescape In reply to AsjJohnson [2008-11-22 16:01:43 +0000 UTC]

you're making a comic?! how nice!
what's the story?

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AsjJohnson In reply to lokiescape [2008-11-22 17:55:59 +0000 UTC]

Well, I want it to take place between the anime and movie, so Ed's trying to find a way back to Al, and he also meets Alfons, and I think it'll involve some mystery with a guy that Alfons and his friends think is a vampire. But even though I thought of a few possible pages, I haven't worked out everything yet. ^_^"

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lokiescape In reply to AsjJohnson [2008-11-22 18:21:36 +0000 UTC]

this sounds so interesting!
It will be great to have a comic in between the anime and the movie!
I also always wanted to know how exactly Edwrad met Heiderich

who' s the guy they think is a vampire?

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AsjJohnson In reply to lokiescape [2008-11-22 19:05:09 +0000 UTC]

Well, the vampire thing is a new idea... I'm not 100% sure I'll do that, but it would make an interesting plot (and Hohenheim just happened to mention Dracula at the end of the series, and Mr. Oberth, the guy Ed's meeting, once lived close to a house Dracula lived in before... kind'a interesting, isn't it?).
I want who it is to be a little mysterious, since I want Ed to be surprised. ^_^" There'd be a dog that doesn't seem to like Ed... Um... Hmm... Perhaps I should work out things about the comic and then work on drawing the pages, and then I can say all types of half-truths about the guy in the pages to make you go, "it's him O_o !?" when he finally is seen. ^_^

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RissaRooxoxo [2008-11-22 11:54:56 +0000 UTC]

i really like this. love the coloring~

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AsjJohnson In reply to RissaRooxoxo [2008-11-22 14:16:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. ^_^
The door still doesn't look quite real to me, but I'm not sure why. ^_^"

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RissaRooxoxo In reply to AsjJohnson [2008-11-22 17:37:17 +0000 UTC]

well i think it looks fine. could be that its blurry. i donno. lol

it rocks anyways!~

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AsjJohnson In reply to RissaRooxoxo [2008-11-22 17:59:24 +0000 UTC]

maybe

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RissaRooxoxo In reply to AsjJohnson [2008-11-22 21:17:50 +0000 UTC]

*shrugs*

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