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hallot asunder collab #2I think this one turned out better..
hallot's poem is amazing as usual..
eh.. my drawing is alright.. still not worth the time I spent on it!! I did have a greenish and redish color to it like hallot did in his version of the pic but this one looked better without it..
AND HE WILL NOT SUBMIT HIS DAMN HIM!!
anyway, PLEASE COMMENT!! BOTH THE PIC AND THE POEM!!
here's the full poem:
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Like mint you burn my eyes
The scent of pleasure
Plain, but treasured
You are like a foreign object
a playful blade
The hardcore music
We all play...
Open lies but closed obsessions
truth makes all the people sad
taken from your honest hope
a playful mom a playful dad...
Like mint you make me Vomit
Premium malt beverage
Black pepper makes me dizzy
and promotes violance
induces rage
Open but closed doors
unique but closed minds
I am saddened, my you work
I am saddened for no reason.
Like mint you make soft voices
Voices in my head
make me do what needs be
make me right and wrong
depends on what you meant
but never lend a hand
open up the store of blackness
sell your soul to rock and roll
pay for your bannishment
pay, go to hell
Like mint you make me vomit...
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Comments: 235
natureofsin [2002-06-30 06:49:26 +0000 UTC]
this is a masterpiece. the dark mood of the poem fits the illustration like a glove. bravo!!! i love the film around the edges too. brilliant
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speakinenglish [2002-06-27 18:57:14 +0000 UTC]
damn, every piece you make amazes me more than the last
ive got three of your pieces on my faves , this ones gonna be added
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bittertears [2002-06-14 03:34:42 +0000 UTC]
wow...really incredible, i loved it!!! ^^
i love this kind of art...
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blankperception [2002-06-04 12:19:20 +0000 UTC]
why do i always seem the be the last person to find this stuff...ok im not really a big fan of poetry on deviant because most of it is crap, it really is. but god, i really like this poem its so..i dont know, differant, which makes it good. fantastic job on the poem and on the picture. i hope after 177 comments i dont get discarded in the rest.
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dustmephit [2002-05-25 15:11:39 +0000 UTC]
Very well done. I particularly like the way that the central figures are very dark against a pale background, but without losing the definition and attention to detail in the drawings. Furthermore, I know this is a very difficult style to pull off convincingly, but it is definitely done well here. My only complaint, and this IS nitpicking, is that the area at the very bottom just right of center seems a bit empty.
kudos
dustmephit
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MattSpire In reply to ??? [2002-05-18 21:47:09 +0000 UTC]
I tend to dislike seeing a few hundred comments, all reading "holy crap" and not being of much actual help to the artist...
That being said..
Holy crap.
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klentex [2002-05-17 23:45:25 +0000 UTC]
i'm still trying to make most of it out, but i found most of the body, the faces, and wings, and i like them. good job.
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ra3orblade [2002-05-16 09:06:12 +0000 UTC]
This one goes to favs
:y :
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[ Sharp as a razor and deadly as blade ]
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laya [2002-05-12 18:31:20 +0000 UTC]
this is gorgeous .... wow...i wish...nevermind -but wow.............!!
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pottymonkey [2002-05-09 04:36:24 +0000 UTC]
the pic and poetry compliment each other very well
is the woman winged?
it looks like she is.
whee!
pritty work!
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flyingphoenix [2002-05-08 09:58:31 +0000 UTC]
everyone said what I wanted to say... I love the scetch it is free and uninhibited and with the words...W0W!!!
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Sirhurt [2002-05-08 09:04:49 +0000 UTC]
realy nice peac of work... love the composition... nice drawings... the texturing... very nice.. fav+
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cokine [2002-05-06 11:40:03 +0000 UTC]
Yummor!
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tijuana [2002-04-30 10:51:35 +0000 UTC]
Oh! Over my eyes something crashed! Why we cant desappear?
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lol
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chrizz [2002-04-29 14:19:06 +0000 UTC]
looks really great!
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sweetkitten [2002-04-24 14:33:35 +0000 UTC]
Wow... beautiful. The poem is a bit hard to read, but worth the effort to work through it. The drawing... excellent. Congrats to both of you!
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lemut [2002-04-22 23:04:54 +0000 UTC]
wow.. really great design
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manipul8 [2002-04-19 17:49:02 +0000 UTC]
OMG...Clearly one of the best Deviations i've ever seen! what did you use to make it?
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nonentity [2002-04-19 15:44:12 +0000 UTC]
I love the picture, it's awesome. The poem is very good too, kind of lyric-like, but in a good way.
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maura [2002-04-19 14:00:59 +0000 UTC]
Oh my god, that's spectacular. Great abstractions and atmosphere.
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shrines [2002-04-18 13:57:29 +0000 UTC]
What else can I say that others havent already. EXCELLENT work, has to be a favorite.
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devin [2002-04-14 15:03:10 +0000 UTC]
I'm like going to have a whole Favorite section with just your stuff O.o;;
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killahshakur [2002-04-14 02:16:05 +0000 UTC]
HOLY SHIT!
so much damn detail!!
& the poem is so damn cool
another goddamn fav
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tdawg [2002-04-13 03:28:08 +0000 UTC]
the drawing is nice
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-mya- [2002-04-12 22:31:13 +0000 UTC]
ummm... no words.
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azraeldarkmagic [2002-04-12 20:37:40 +0000 UTC]
thats fucking bad ass right there, i wish i could draw that good..
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fusion [2002-04-12 02:08:35 +0000 UTC]
O SHIT !!!!!!!!!!!!! MAN THIS IS AMAZING I EVER SAW ANYTHING LIKE THIS BEFORE
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK !!!
FUSION
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aciddesignz [2002-04-11 12:49:21 +0000 UTC]
woooooooooooooww baddddddddaaaassss
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angelaobscura [2002-04-10 17:12:08 +0000 UTC]
this is fantastic love the picture it is just so great, not that you need to be told that look up there there are plenty more comments to tell you that, i just wanted to say how great it is too!! hehe come see me although my work is nowhere near as phenomenal as this i am gonna toddle off see his poetry! bye x
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danimation2001 [2002-04-07 05:32:34 +0000 UTC]
this makes me wish that I was into poetry...
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devils [2002-04-06 08:09:07 +0000 UTC]
Amazing... beautiful... err.. what is this called.. ah.. both of em...
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glitterdecay [2002-04-06 07:32:15 +0000 UTC]
your drawing is gore-gous. i am infinitely jealous. & mint makes me vomit, too. but THIS does not. amazement here.
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.the state of emergency, how beautiful.
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moka [2002-04-06 07:19:41 +0000 UTC]
This is very nice, wonderful words, and beautiful drawing.
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~moka
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