HOME | DD
asunder โ
Minty- hallot asunder collab 2
Published: 2002-04-03 09:55:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 26210; Favourites: 509; Downloads: 2833
Redirect to original
Description
hallot asunder collab #2I think this one turned out better..
hallot's poem is amazing as usual..
eh.. my drawing is alright.. still not worth the time I spent on it!! I did have a greenish and redish color to it like hallot did in his version of the pic but this one looked better without it..
AND HE WILL NOT SUBMIT HIS DAMN HIM!!
anyway, PLEASE COMMENT!! BOTH THE PIC AND THE POEM!!
here's the full poem:
---------------------------------------- ----
Like mint you burn my eyes
The scent of pleasure
Plain, but treasured
You are like a foreign object
a playful blade
The hardcore music
We all play...
Open lies but closed obsessions
truth makes all the people sad
taken from your honest hope
a playful mom a playful dad...
Like mint you make me Vomit
Premium malt beverage
Black pepper makes me dizzy
and promotes violance
induces rage
Open but closed doors
unique but closed minds
I am saddened, my you work
I am saddened for no reason.
Like mint you make soft voices
Voices in my head
make me do what needs be
make me right and wrong
depends on what you meant
but never lend a hand
open up the store of blackness
sell your soul to rock and roll
pay for your bannishment
pay, go to hell
Like mint you make me vomit...
---------------------------------------- ------------------
Related content
Comments: 235
this is a masterpiece. the dark mood of the poem fits the illustration like a glove. bravo!!! i love the film around the edges too. brilliant
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
damn, every piece you make amazes me more than the last
ive got three of your pieces on my faves , this ones gonna be added
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
wow...really incredible, i loved it!!! ^^
i love this kind of art...
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
why do i always seem the be the last person to find this stuff...ok im not really a big fan of poetry on deviant because most of it is crap, it really is. but god, i really like this poem its so..i dont know, differant, which makes it good. fantastic job on the poem and on the picture. i hope after 177 comments i dont get discarded in the rest.
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
Very well done. I particularly like the way that the central figures are very dark against a pale background, but without losing the definition and attention to detail in the drawings. Furthermore, I know this is a very difficult style to pull off convincingly, but it is definitely done well here. My only complaint, and this IS nitpicking, is that the area at the very bottom just right of center seems a bit empty.
kudos
dustmephit
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
I tend to dislike seeing a few hundred comments, all reading "holy crap" and not being of much actual help to the artist...
That being said..
Holy crap.
-----
..::[dspayre]::..
[amlaitstosnpwieries]
. [ a l w a y s ] . ( w i l l ) / [ n e v e r ] . ( e n d ) .
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
i'm still trying to make most of it out, but i found most of the body, the faces, and wings, and i like them. good job.
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
This one goes to favs
:y :
-----
[ Sharp as a razor and deadly as blade ]
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
this is gorgeous .... wow...i wish...nevermind -but wow.............!!
-----
:: THE SYSTEM FUCKED ME LIKE A SLEEPING VIRGIN::
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
the pic and poetry compliment each other very well
is the woman winged?
it looks like she is.
whee!
pritty work!
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
everyone said what I wanted to say... I love the scetch it is free and uninhibited and with the words...W0W!!!
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
realy nice peac of work... love the composition... nice drawings... the texturing... very nice.. fav+
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
Yummor!
-----
ยปยป cokine
ยท the eqate project
ยท #eq8 on EFNet
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
Oh! Over my eyes something crashed! Why we cant desappear?
-----
lol
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
looks really great!
-----
.oยฐ(get your personal chrizz, NOW!)
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
Wow... beautiful. The poem is a bit hard to read, but worth the effort to work through it. The drawing... excellent. Congrats to both of you!
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
wow.. really great design
-----
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
. : : : K3RN3L . P4N!C : : : .
. . . . . Made in Chile . . . . .
[link]
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
OMG...Clearly one of the best Deviations i've ever seen! what did you use to make it?
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
I love the picture, it's awesome. The poem is very good too, kind of lyric-like, but in a good way.
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
Oh my god, that's spectacular. Great abstractions and atmosphere.
-----
[link]
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
What else can I say that others havent already. EXCELLENT work, has to be a favorite.
-----
WWW.insiteswebdesign.com
WWW.insiteswebdesign.com
WWW.insiteswebdesign.com
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
I'm like going to have a whole Favorite section with just your stuff O.o;;
-----
Devin
Owner of Blinded Fury | http://blinded-fury.net/
Owner of Plague X | http://blinded-fury.net/plague-x/
Owner of Suicide X | http://blinded-fury.net/suicide-x/
Owner of Blood Designs | http://blinded-fury.net/blood-designs/
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
HOLY SHIT!
so much damn detail!!
& the poem is so damn cool
another goddamn fav
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
the drawing is nice
-----
::the new state of design::
are you ready? https://tdawg.deviantart.com
+
=
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
ummm... no words.
-----
ยฐยฐยฐTwo people are needed to make a good piece of art: the artist and someone else to hit him on the head with a hammer when the piece is finished.ยฐยฐยฐ
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
thats fucking bad ass right there, i wish i could draw that good..
-----
---------
~Azrael
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
O SHIT !!!!!!!!!!!!! MAN THIS IS AMAZING I EVER SAW ANYTHING LIKE THIS BEFORE
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK !!!
FUSION
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
woooooooooooooww baddddddddaaaassss
-----
for full contact http://www.meskalin5.de/ikoma/
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
this is fantastic love the picture it is just so great, not that you need to be told that look up there there are plenty more comments to tell you that, i just wanted to say how great it is too!! hehe come see me although my work is nowhere near as phenomenal as this i am gonna toddle off see his poetry! bye x
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
this makes me wish that I was into poetry...
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
Amazing... beautiful... err.. what is this called.. ah.. both of em...
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
your drawing is gore-gous. i am infinitely jealous. & mint makes me vomit, too. but THIS does not. amazement here.
-----
.the state of emergency, how beautiful.
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
This is very nice, wonderful words, and beautiful drawing.
-----
~moka
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
| Next =>