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Minty- hallot asunder collab 2
Published: 2002-04-03 09:55:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 26210; Favourites: 509; Downloads: 2833
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hallot asunder collab #2I think this one turned out better..
hallot's poem is amazing as usual..
eh.. my drawing is alright.. still not worth the time I spent on it!! I did have a greenish and redish color to it like hallot did in his version of the pic but this one looked better without it..
AND HE WILL NOT SUBMIT HIS DAMN HIM!!
anyway, PLEASE COMMENT!! BOTH THE PIC AND THE POEM!!
here's the full poem:
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Like mint you burn my eyes
The scent of pleasure
Plain, but treasured
You are like a foreign object
a playful blade
The hardcore music
We all play...
Open lies but closed obsessions
truth makes all the people sad
taken from your honest hope
a playful mom a playful dad...
Like mint you make me Vomit
Premium malt beverage
Black pepper makes me dizzy
and promotes violance
induces rage
Open but closed doors
unique but closed minds
I am saddened, my you work
I am saddened for no reason.
Like mint you make soft voices
Voices in my head
make me do what needs be
make me right and wrong
depends on what you meant
but never lend a hand
open up the store of blackness
sell your soul to rock and roll
pay for your bannishment
pay, go to hell
Like mint you make me vomit...
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Comments: 235
Very nice, I like ur style....keep up the good graphix
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~XopoX~
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As I told you before, I dont repeat myself!
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Quite the work. The border kicks so much ass.
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You! Get some Potential! http://potential.pitas.com
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De-lite-ful! Caught my eye and I couldn't resist.
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Very exquisite with the fine detail. beautiful. I'm adding it to my favourite.
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damn man, thats fucken SICK!!
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5t3iggy
.:I decided i want you now i know...i need:.
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cool. Very gothic
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What is this life if full of care
We have no time to stand and stare
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Would have missed this but for the well earned DD. Superb combination of drawing and poetry. Not my type normally but this is one that obviously stands out from the crowd. Credit to both deviants.
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Mmm..time for some adverts: https://stotty.deviantart.com/gallery
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excellent.....
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agoni alias mercyful http://mercyful.da.ru
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What the motherfuck?! This is BRILLIANT! Going into favs and you're going on my devwatch!
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you dont need eyes to see
you need vision
cyber|crash
abstract thought - visualised --> http://www.cybercrash.be
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man that is just aewsome. definetly adding to my favs. Man everything about this peice just rocks. really wicked inking here man.
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Holy shit!
Everything is perfect! the poem..... the pic.... all!
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Regards,
Madava
thk
[:Beauty Resides Only in the Eye of the Beholder:]
© 2002 The Hex Kalibur
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Impressive. Well made image. Nice writing.
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Two roads diverged in a wood, and I-
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference.
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LOVE IT!!! very original.
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i do not impress.
i EXpress.
~eikasia
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http://www.geocities.com/buztarduh
(!)click link to [im]perfect(!)
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Dang it, this is great stuff. Reminds me of the old school VERTIGO comics back when D.C. actually still released books with eccentric substance and not just fluff.
Love the contrast of the poem and its design, and yet the symmetry of both when one reaches the end!
LOVELY LOVELY WORK!
My congratulations on the award
and my thanks for sharing it!
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tobie
Learn to love
and live to love
and learn to love living
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Me likes it when my eyes see well made art that took time and effort and many skillz to compleat
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I love the poem, it flows so beautifully. The drawing also r0xors... ^_^ Nice colloberation.
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incredilicious.
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-deem || http://www.angelfire.com/ca3/deemaunik - http://www.livejournal.com/users/deem
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I love the delicate elf and the miserable (?) woman put together that way, and the subtle colors thrown in. I'm not a big fan of poetry and don't read much of it, so I shouldn't judge that. But this is really great. Added to my favorites.
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this is a very well thought out piece...i like it alot
congrats on DD.....goin to my favs.
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wow..no matter how you cut it, the poem and the picture work perfectly...
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wow, the image is... *takes a deep breath*, is...*another breath*
is...
WOW
*Love Deviation*
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so awesome, i love the poem, it works so well with your art....adding it to favs n_n
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Nice drawing style, keep up the skillz, later!
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Zrystalik 05: DARKNESS BP02 http://blastafuzix.jermexpress.com
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OMFG!!!! hallot got a DD! sweetness man! deserves it to...
this is frigging awesome... you must already have a 101 comments like this already, but god damn i love this... major kick ass!
/me wishes devart would go faster so i can add this to faves faster
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Fucking awsome job!, great, I love the drawing and poem, it all goes together as well, great job, both of you.
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Whoa.. reminds me of the necronomicon!
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beware.eraw eb
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This is going in my favs. This is awesome. The poem complements the pic perfectly. But I love the pic. Keep up the good work
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dman i hte to be the last one to comment...anyway the poem is juste beautiful i like everything(even if i couldn't understand everything...because i'm french)and it meant something to be i could almost understand what you meant...and the pic is so nice and you are good and drawing and i think was worth the time (even if i don't know how much time you spend on it)...well anyway your a god to art...
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paradox...existing in every mind...
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Extreme work man! +Fav+
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Proffasee :: Seeing The Future
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http://www.digitallypoetic.com
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woooodang that is nice
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.: efining eality :.
.: reed ember :.
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hmm, the drawing, although not in my taste is good - i can see how it woukd have taken a while - theres a lot of detail in there. The thing i like about art is that its impossible to judge - well thats the way i see it anyway; i cant judge any piece because everyone is unique. This one, though i dont like the style, is certainly gonna be added to my favourites because u deserve it lol. Keep up the work and try your hand at some more subtle stuff - i think you'd do a cool job. The poem i cant read to well cos of the shadow but it seems quite unique from what i can tell. You both did good guys.
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work
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that pic is absolutely awesome so beautiful in so many ways i say "wow" when i first laid eyes on it
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click it & enjoy - http://12.24.88.28/rebecca
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wow! Amazing work! Congrats on the DD too, I think FangedFem said it best, so I'll leave her to the talking.
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thats fuckin awesome
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we all die, the only question is with how much pain...
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nice work to both of you.. just the right amount of dementia
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./pwca
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hallott: hi, thanks for the kind comment on my work, your poem is great, i love the imagery and the way the subject of addictive relationships fuses with the sort of indecisive zigzagging flow of the poem.
the pic is great as well, i like how the elf-girl and the thing that looks like a large eyeball (which i assume represent the two entities in the poem) mesh together only in the twisting, weblike facades they project, but not in thier actual selves.
It fits well together, great work by both!
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asunder, please... take a nap! Give the rest of us a chance to catch our breath! I cant keep up with the billion amazing deviations you submit every day. heh
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the pic mirrors the poem very well which makes this collab success.
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