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Minty- hallot asunder collab 2
Published: 2002-04-03 09:55:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 26212; Favourites: 509; Downloads: 2833
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hallot asunder collab #2I think this one turned out better..
hallot's poem is amazing as usual..
eh.. my drawing is alright.. still not worth the time I spent on it!! I did have a greenish and redish color to it like hallot did in his version of the pic but this one looked better without it..
AND HE WILL NOT SUBMIT HIS DAMN HIM!!
anyway, PLEASE COMMENT!! BOTH THE PIC AND THE POEM!!
here's the full poem:
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Like mint you burn my eyes
The scent of pleasure
Plain, but treasured
You are like a foreign object
a playful blade
The hardcore music
We all play...
Open lies but closed obsessions
truth makes all the people sad
taken from your honest hope
a playful mom a playful dad...
Like mint you make me Vomit
Premium malt beverage
Black pepper makes me dizzy
and promotes violance
induces rage
Open but closed doors
unique but closed minds
I am saddened, my you work
I am saddened for no reason.
Like mint you make soft voices
Voices in my head
make me do what needs be
make me right and wrong
depends on what you meant
but never lend a hand
open up the store of blackness
sell your soul to rock and roll
pay for your bannishment
pay, go to hell
Like mint you make me vomit...
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WOW! most impressive
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May the Force be with you!
Jedeye.com http://jedeye.com
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This is better than best!
I can't take it.......mind blew up!
Goo poem too!
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Awesome drawing!
Simply great.
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thats bomb! i love hallots poems and the art in this piece is awsome!!! great work *favs*
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Life Is But Another Way To Torture ones Soul, But A Soul Would Not Exist Without Life
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yay! slipknotfont!
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*periods, hyphens, slashes, HTML and other such oddities*
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madness i like it
disturbing in a nice way
2thumbsup!
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really cool work man! i like the colors. mmm! i take it.
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> mikkeh.trance.nu
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oh my very very freakin nice...welcome to my favz
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looks pretty suave. did you sketch that? keep up the good work. peace
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wow, just nice, very nice
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:: Scotty 2 Hotty ::
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surrealism at it's finest. art and poetry explodes into beatiful shards of chaotic beauty. it just blows me away. makes me shiver.
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Well, I like the image a lot. Very cool & grungey and that's an awesome drawing. Didn't care much for the poem, however.
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I know nothing of god...or the devil. I have never seen a vision, nor learned a secret that will damn or save my soul.
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wow, this really is a truely stunning colab...excellent work and congrats on DD you two
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told you badly this owned yesterday, you go gurl
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A S Y L U M 1 3
http://www.asylum13.tk
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Great collab hallot is currently my newest fav to watch wo0 and the artwork of this rocks ty both for sharing and congrats on a DD well earned
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its about time asunder got a DD. youve been one of my favorite artists for a while now, and im glad your finally getting the reckognition you deserve.
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-[ someday is sooner than you think ]-
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well deserved of DD
both the picture and poem are excellent on their own, but they way they combine is perfection. it would be interesting to see more collabs from u 2
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congrats.
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Not a poet, but.... Great job!
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awesome!!!!! ...
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Really good
love the poem.. and of course the film in the back is good too
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man...this has to be a DD...the drawing is awesome, and the poem is just as good...i love it....good work you guys!
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can you please not stick your in your
cos it will smell of
and make you
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Ooooh, its luuurvly! I love the poem but the art is my fave, its so dark and gothic, nice!
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If I pass out, please catch me...
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Very very good, both the artwork and the poem. I wish to see more collabs often.
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woah that is cool. the poem fits the piece wonderfully whether it as planned or not! very nice poem and pic
+ favs
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mh, what can I say that havent been said before.. everyone seams to like it. and im definality one of those.. awsome work
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damn artistic. fantastic. superb. need to mention more?
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damn this ones ver good i like the detail i think ill start(try) to draw in the next time but first 3dmax
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the true rulage of somebody can only be experienced by hitting a box thats inside his head while riding the wheelz of steel on the way to hell
( if somebody understands this :: plz note me cuZ i dont )
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whoa cool man. so dark, eerie, grungey and detailed. i love it.
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Both the poem and art is beautiful, that's all that needs to be said.
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looks for the LOVE DEVIATION button.. shit there isn't one yet.. This is absolutely amazing.. the drawing and the poem on their own would garner a residence in my favs.. This collaboration, out of all my favs, this is my absolute favorite..stupendous work both of you.. this picture so compliments the poem.. dark and errie, but full of truth.. LOVE THIS!
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she has been everybody elses girl, maybe one day she will be her own
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A simply superb collab!!! kickass image + fanfuckintastic words = phenomenal submission Bravo to you both~
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--Gandhi
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My god your art kicks ass! Nice collab with the poem
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wow hallot, you got yourself in the big league now
the poem is great, esp the phrase 'like mint you make me vomit". the drawing looks really cool, nice details in there +favs
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Impressive work. Refreshing originality as well.
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Awesome work! Nice collab.... keep it upand take care
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yeah this is really great, the drawing and the poem...but there are some common spelling errors in there, just might want to fix that...nice work!
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dear god how amazing this is... your talent is unquestionable
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A S Y L U M 1 3
http://www.asylum13.tk
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I love the drawing the most, but I must admit that the poem is also good. Quality work !
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Hell is for children !
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Those details in the drawing make me wanna cry!
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yeah, I love art poetry, this is fantastic work!
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