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Atrixfromice — Nature's Guardian Ch.1 - Pg. 3
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Published: 2017-12-14 05:09:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 577; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 0
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Hey howdy folks ? Hope you're doing well!
It's late and I'm tired so I have not much to say 
And I know this comic doesn't really appeal to people...at least doesn't seem like that in this moment...
But I would like to stick with my goal of posting a comic page every week, and I hope with time someone can find it interesting, so here's another page of the first chapter
Some curious data about this is that before on the pilot version, the secon pannel was different. I changed it and added the eye cos I thought it would explain better that the guy was looking at the scroll/pergamin.
I was in doubt if calling it "pergamin" or not in this case...so I went with "scroll" to be safe.
What do you think? It is better? Is it understandable that the guy is observing the scroll?
I would like to know your opinions! They are always welcome! 
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J'aime bien comment tu as fait la réflection dans l'oeil.
Je suis curieux comment l'histoire va continuer
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Merci beaucoup! C'est trés motivant de l'entendre!
Puis je suis contente parce que l'historie continuerá en tant que il y a des gens qu'aiment le lire! ^^
E puis merci de me parler en français, comme toujours c'est une surprise très agréable!
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Took me a minute but yeah, I did get the eye/scroll connection.
The shelf and the items on it in the last panel are a nice touch; they add a bit of interest to the scene without distracting the reader from the characters.
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Wowie thanks a lot pal!
Your comment encourages me a lot to continue!
And it was fun to draw that part of the scenery on the last pannel, I thought it was kind of empty that's why I did it. Glad you appreciate it!
Oh and also thanks for the core membership! It was a very nice surprise!
If you have any idea for a drawing I can do for you let me know
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Always a pleasure, m'lady.
A drawing would be great, when you have the time; unless I misread your journal, I think you're a little busy at present. 
It's 10 degrees here this morning. It's moments like this when I really miss Arizona. 
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Thanks a lot! And thanks for trusting on my imagination for this! That's very nice of you!
hope the inspiration strikes soon
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