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Hi there folks!
Who wants to see my rough doodles? ....probably no one! But still I'd like to post this one, it's the final part of a scene of my story with these characters. Of course this is a rough story board I made by mouse (I finished it on saturday, Feb 19) for my own amusement, for 3 reasons; one to exercise the muscles that make me to draw with the mouse, 2 because I didn't wanted to forget this scene when I had the idea at the beggining of February, and 3 because I would love that you guys can know my characters faikel and atrix and also you can tell me if this is good story board. Part 1 is here [link]
I made it to don't forget the ideas that come to my mind from time to time. So, doesn't matter if the drawings aren't very well drawn ( it was really a merit cos I draw this by hand with the mouse, and it was a bit difficult indeed! ) just please tell me if you like the expressions and if the scene it's understandable at the first sight or if it needs more panels or you understand it like this, I'd apreciate your opinion!
And of course if you like this , I'll do the comic for real later ...well, when I can have enough time to do it...
Sorry, I'd like to write something more in this description, but now I'm working, I've got a problem and headache!

Description
Hi there folks!
Who wants to see my rough doodles? ....probably no one! But still I'd like to post this one, it's the final part of a scene of my story with these characters. Of course this is a rough story board I made by mouse (I finished it on saturday, Feb 19) for my own amusement, for 3 reasons; one to exercise the muscles that make me to draw with the mouse, 2 because I didn't wanted to forget this scene when I had the idea at the beggining of February, and 3 because I would love that you guys can know my characters faikel and atrix and also you can tell me if this is good story board. Part 1 is here [link]
I made it to don't forget the ideas that come to my mind from time to time. So, doesn't matter if the drawings aren't very well drawn ( it was really a merit cos I draw this by hand with the mouse, and it was a bit difficult indeed! ) just please tell me if you like the expressions and if the scene it's understandable at the first sight or if it needs more panels or you understand it like this, I'd apreciate your opinion!
And of course if you like this , I'll do the comic for real later ...well, when I can have enough time to do it...
Sorry, I'd like to write something more in this description, but now I'm working, I've got a problem and headache!