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ResidoLancin [2006-12-05 13:56:30 +0000 UTC]

I'm totaly inexpert about drawings, but.... are you in this drawing, right?

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vietkatthroughlense [2006-08-18 17:37:27 +0000 UTC]

hmmm...what i would suggest is to study the human anatomy...light effects on shadows and highlights...the light on the wall can be very crucial for it determines the perspective and perception of the viewer...for the anatomy...i think everything is abit off...like the hand is too big...the hip is abit too big as well...human body also uses to create an illusion of perspective...so w/ the right angle and anatomy you can achieve that...

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protocoldoug [2006-04-05 17:58:08 +0000 UTC]

This immediately reminded me of Edward Hopper [link] (one of my personal favorite artists).... I kind of think that he did a lot of figures in interiors is what reminds me of it.

I think what's working pretty well for you is your draftsmanship. The figure has good proportions. Another thing that you're doing an excellent job with is focusing on the elements inside of the positive space (the figure). A lot of people tend to work on really hard contours on figures (myself included), you know the lines where the positive space meets the negative space -- you have done a great job working inside of those to set the figure out from the negative space behind it.

If it were mine, I might consider going back and making the floor and walls around the figure darker, especially on the floor below where she is sitting, and on that corner just behind her back. If you can create just a little bit more contrast between the floor and her forward most foot, and a little less contrast between her butt/shirt and the floor, i think it's really going to make your already good draftsmanship have much deeper space

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