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OvercomeIt is a moment without metaphor,
without the elegance of ambiguity.
What happens does not signify anything,
does not borrow the body of what it is
to create the soul of what it is;
it does not lend itself out to betoken
other things. These are seconds
without such generosity.
It is not a moment of young onions
grown tender for the harvest, or persimmons
frosted over by the sugars of age. There are
no solemn rail cars rusting into poignancy.
There is only a young black man
who is only a young black man
bullied by the sting of insult and indignity
too great, his proud mouth burnt by wrath
as he careens down the sidewalk
toward bedlam.
There is only a loose-tongued white man
who is only a loose-tongued white man,
older and leaning heavily on a cane as he turns,
a bag of something in his free hand, fretfully
silent now as he looks into the face
his epithets have spoken to life –
one ugliness begets another.
Cups of coffee leave the parking lot
behind me, where presumably all this began
in ways I don’t know, and my breath catches,
because there is also me,
green light in my eyes,
already turning left toward home
when I see the first hand flash out
and I reach for my phone –
there is also me, trying to tell the operator
about two men grown bitter as the dirty tang
of onions, aging under the sugars of spite,
each rusting on the rails of what's begun.
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Comments: 110
b1gfan In reply to ??? [2008-10-17 05:59:37 +0000 UTC]
Thank you William I appreciate the feedback a plenty
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Unaccompanied-me In reply to ??? [2008-10-17 05:20:27 +0000 UTC]
You really beautifully wrapped up the simultaneous simplicity and complexity of this incident... very powerful. Approached well. Excellent craftsmanship!
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b1gfan In reply to Unaccompanied-me [2008-10-17 06:01:00 +0000 UTC]
Thank you Thom - it is a very complex and confusing thing to be the witness to something you're totally "misplaced" to prevent. But writing help
thank you for the
my friend.
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Unaccompanied-me In reply to b1gfan [2008-10-17 21:13:51 +0000 UTC]
I had an experience like that yesterday... it's odd. You feel like the probability of you being there at that instant is so small... until you realize that you just witnessed it. It's sort of unsettling.
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b1gfan In reply to Unaccompanied-me [2008-10-18 00:02:34 +0000 UTC]
It absolutely is - it is part a of the world that you know is there but you put it out of your head to keep living. Then it explodes in front of you and you're stuck "processing" what accident and circumstance just made you a witness to. And a participant as well in some ways - because there is always "you" in the mix. I am glad you remained unhurt Thom
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Unaccompanied-me In reply to b1gfan [2008-10-18 05:59:09 +0000 UTC]
Well it certainly wasn't dangerous... but it was eye-opening and deeply affecting in a way. Something like it starts you thinking about things, about everything, really. I'm actually going to write some prose about it shortly. I obtained too much inspiration not to write it down.
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GwenavhyeurAnastasia [2008-10-17 04:49:15 +0000 UTC]
I wasn't quite sure what you were getting at in the beginning. It was a surprise to my tired mind, and I think it mad the sad truth more beautiful.
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b1gfan In reply to GwenavhyeurAnastasia [2008-10-17 04:54:34 +0000 UTC]
Thank you K.L.
I'm most glad that it offered something more than just the sadness
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GwenavhyeurAnastasia In reply to b1gfan [2008-10-17 04:57:33 +0000 UTC]
Tis my pleasure, dear.
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