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batangbatuganHow To Exaggerate

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Description UPDATE: I've realized that this'll help more people if I place it under Tutorials, so there. Thanks to all the deviants who suggested it ^___^ I also moved "WHA-PAK" and Sam: Threefolds to the tutorials section as well.
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A lot of aspiring comic artists seem to focus only on style, and not much on storytelling and characterization. Being a comic book artist not only requires the ablilty to draw, but also, the ability to tell a story. And to be able to tell a story visually, you have to be able to give life to the characters- make them look more animated and energized on the page.

One way to do it is through exaggeration. You can give life and energy to the most simplest and boringest situations, and you can apply this to any style. See above and compare the actions on the left with those on the right. I think you'll agree that it's really not that difficult. And I'm not exaggerating!

This was actually part of my lecture during last week's seminar, but I don't think the audience was able to see these clearly so I'm posting it here for your convenience. ^__^ Hope this helps folks!
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falingard In reply to ??? [2006-10-18 19:30:30 +0000 UTC]

Well, I don't recall the exact quote, or who said it, but it was more about the field of animation than just drawing, but you've proved it applies there as well

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daekazu In reply to ??? [2006-10-18 14:12:42 +0000 UTC]

Wow- SO awesome!
Fantastic drawing. I all!

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DJWill In reply to ??? [2006-10-18 14:10:11 +0000 UTC]

Great Tutorial friend i hope see soon the draw of W.I.T.C.H.!

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batangbatugan In reply to DJWill [2006-10-18 18:22:47 +0000 UTC]

Ey! looking forward to that, too

Thank you!

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Kaxen6 In reply to ??? [2006-10-18 13:46:50 +0000 UTC]

Awesome.


..on a mildly random note, the angry boss is hot.

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okoco In reply to ??? [2006-10-18 13:05:25 +0000 UTC]

wow this is good

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AreeElf In reply to ??? [2006-10-18 13:02:52 +0000 UTC]

Very effective demo. Thanks will keep those points in mind

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inu-sushi In reply to ??? [2006-10-18 12:57:22 +0000 UTC]

I'll have to use some techniques. I'm really bad at drawing action. XD

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Faustino-Mori In reply to ??? [2006-10-18 12:55:51 +0000 UTC]

tama tama.... salamat sa payo idol... sayang d ako nkpunta last week... galing mo tlga..

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batangbatugan In reply to Faustino-Mori [2006-10-18 18:22:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! that's oki, at least sana may natutunan ka dito, at magamit mo rin

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MeGoSa In reply to ??? [2006-10-18 12:19:03 +0000 UTC]

Hey mastah Wilson this should be in the tutorial section!!! very very helpful! Thanks for this ^^

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batangbatugan In reply to MeGoSa [2006-10-18 18:21:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Well, this ain't exactly a tutorial(there isn't even a step by step) just a comparison, sort of. But the important thing is that it's just as informative(hopefully ^^ )

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MeGoSa In reply to batangbatugan [2006-10-18 20:55:13 +0000 UTC]

Nah I've seen lots of submissions of this type in the tutorial section. It will be more helpful to put this there because deviants usually go there to learn and this is something that will help them too I usually see this stuff in the miscellaneous section.

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CapnFlynn In reply to ??? [2006-10-18 12:07:24 +0000 UTC]

Ah, that's fantastic! Say, that prof looks a lot like Doc Ido...?

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batangbatugan In reply to CapnFlynn [2006-10-18 18:18:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, well that's because he is. And that makes the lovely late lass is Gally/Alita

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amao2006 In reply to ??? [2006-10-18 11:28:22 +0000 UTC]

wow i luv dis

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vanic In reply to ??? [2006-10-18 11:27:43 +0000 UTC]

lol awesome

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Shuanishu In reply to ??? [2006-10-18 11:23:38 +0000 UTC]

Ahaha! That is wonderful!

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alt0134 In reply to ??? [2006-10-18 11:11:54 +0000 UTC]

woah. cool.

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Liokaiser In reply to ??? [2006-10-18 10:18:40 +0000 UTC]

I have to say this, the woman in the bottom two makes me think of the Baroness and she's chewing out Destro for forgetting their anniversary (or there kid's Birthday and yes they have a kid now, just our US Government kidnapped it)

the rest is done up well too.

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batangbatugan In reply to Liokaiser [2006-10-18 18:16:06 +0000 UTC]

Haha ey come to think of it you're right
No wonder she's cranky. Poor Destro.

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ayuICHI In reply to ??? [2006-10-18 10:16:59 +0000 UTC]

Yay, awesome, so faving. :]

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chardreyes In reply to ??? [2006-10-18 10:03:17 +0000 UTC]

Couldn't agree more sa lesson mo,very helpful indeed although sometimes it's also good to know the left side illustrations well before going to exaggerate them,kasi most of the comic artist I see today sometimes draw super exaggerated scenes when the scene just tends the character to be very normal lng naman.

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batangbatugan In reply to chardreyes [2006-10-18 18:13:42 +0000 UTC]

well exaggeration is just one way to do it. There are other ways of course, like the left side illos which are basically using "body language"(hope I can tackle them later, too.)

There is such a thing as overexaggeration of course, but I find most of the stuff(esp in indie artists) lack energy and that "umph!" so I decided to start off with exaggeration.

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chardreyes In reply to batangbatugan [2006-10-19 10:21:26 +0000 UTC]

I agree sa iyo. I hope I can fulfill my journey as well to be a very good comic/manga artist like you! (^-^) Medyo I'm not drawing anymore for the past 4 months because of a very busy schedule & cguro na burn out na ako of improving...I hope I can get inspiration again & that spark na to draw again.
Anyways, your lessons are always a big help! Thanks again!

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batangbatugan In reply to chardreyes [2006-10-20 07:10:18 +0000 UTC]

Well, as long as you keep the passion for art burning, I'm sure you will man

Thanks as well!

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mistakendestiny In reply to ??? [2006-10-18 09:40:30 +0000 UTC]

wow. i love your art, especially the girl that's obviously late! awesome story telling, but also great style! ^_^

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batangbatugan In reply to mistakendestiny [2006-10-18 17:58:51 +0000 UTC]

thank you ^_^ That girl is cute

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Cloud33 In reply to ??? [2006-10-18 09:33:08 +0000 UTC]

Dude ad ass you should make a book like the how to draw manga books cause ur awesome.btw the one with cloud n sephiroth is funny. x3

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batangbatugan In reply to Cloud33 [2006-10-18 17:58:12 +0000 UTC]

I would surely try ^^ thanks!

I don't know why people find the cloud and seph part funny, but I have no problems with that

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Carrie-Kube In reply to ??? [2006-10-18 09:09:40 +0000 UTC]

Great lessons. You know, the woman in the bottom example looks a little like Integra from the Helsing anime.

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batangbatugan In reply to Carrie-Kube [2006-10-18 17:55:20 +0000 UTC]

Well she is, actually. x3 I was supposed to include chibi alucard(with tie) pressing down on the elevator but decided it was too silly.

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ReservoirSuli In reply to ??? [2006-10-18 08:57:19 +0000 UTC]

taking notes...taking notes

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G3isha In reply to ??? [2006-10-18 08:03:07 +0000 UTC]

HAHAHA!!!
This is awesome!
Very entertaining to read and its educational!

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edtadeo In reply to ??? [2006-10-18 07:59:17 +0000 UTC]

Uy! Bawal ituro ang mga sikreto natin sa comics! Hehehehe!

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batangbatugan In reply to edtadeo [2006-10-18 17:51:30 +0000 UTC]

Sikreto ba yan? Just helping out how to think differently, is all

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darkeyez07 In reply to ??? [2006-10-18 07:55:18 +0000 UTC]

great!!! your a graet teacher!

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animetedskier In reply to ??? [2006-10-18 07:28:50 +0000 UTC]

I spy... a doctor Ido from battle angel (Gunnm). Great lesson and information, somthing I really should be working on to improve the quality of my work. Thanks for the info.

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batangbatugan In reply to animetedskier [2006-10-18 17:50:28 +0000 UTC]

Nice eye, you should be able to recognize the other characters then. X3

Glad to be of help, thanks!

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animetedskier In reply to batangbatugan [2006-10-19 03:48:24 +0000 UTC]

well he was the only charachter that hadn't been mentioned by other posts ... but...

1st. Cloud, sephiroth and in the BG, Tifa
2nd. o'l octopus lips, Gally (Alita) and Ido
3rd. Integral Wingates Hellsing

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batangbatugan In reply to animetedskier [2006-10-19 05:08:47 +0000 UTC]

Haha, ya got 'em

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ThriceBorn In reply to batangbatugan [2006-10-19 06:56:57 +0000 UTC]

...that is Alita isn't it?! Hot damn, I recognised Ido and the others straight off the bat, but I didn't recognise her in that uniform. I guess it's cuz I'm not used to her looking that cute....but that aside, good work my friend. Very informative.

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batangbatugan In reply to ThriceBorn [2006-10-19 16:38:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^^ perhaps it's because I didn't draw her signature octopus lips expression

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ThriceBorn In reply to batangbatugan [2006-10-20 22:20:55 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I noticed that. Just remember it next time, eh? She wouldn't be Alita without those lips.

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animetedskier In reply to batangbatugan [2006-10-19 06:52:09 +0000 UTC]

Woot!

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Delurianne In reply to ??? [2006-10-18 07:16:01 +0000 UTC]

that thing on cloud's arm is a "bishie-effect" ribbon... you tie it on bishies when their clothes are too loose so that you can see how slim they really are...and when things get out of hand, it can be used by sephi to tie cloud (to the bedstand) by the wrists.

Sephiroth still looks like he's gonna kiss cloud.

Love the "Integral" character.

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Aceoba In reply to Delurianne [2007-06-13 02:08:21 +0000 UTC]

no its not. the ribbon is a refrence from Advent Children. All the "team" wear the ribbon in memory of Aeris.

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kiva-rockwell In reply to Aceoba [2009-07-03 02:27:15 +0000 UTC]

Stupid yaoi fangirl... making a memoir into a yaoi band. >>;

hmmph
Thank you for the correction. I always wanted to know what that was for real, too.<3

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batangbatugan In reply to Delurianne [2006-10-18 07:51:54 +0000 UTC]


ooooookaaayyy... (I could've settled for the slim part but then you mentioned "bedstand" uwaaagggh )

Ay overexaggeration na si Seph pag ganon X<

wehehe in my orig doodle there's a chibi alucard hastily pressing the down button on the elevator.

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Delurianne In reply to batangbatugan [2006-10-18 14:20:50 +0000 UTC]

aren't they fighting about who's uke? they are. it can't be anything else.
the ribbon will help, it will.



ARRUUUKKARRRDOOOO!!

very easy to imagine.

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