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batmanonrobin — You let men lay on you
Published: 2009-02-17 22:02:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 900; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 5
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Don't give me that bullshit aboutbeing a goddess, you let men lay on you.
your teeth are falling out, one by one. don't swallow the fluoride.
don't swallow the anesthetics. you gave him both of your kidneys.
you are dying with bruises on your shoulders and you are dying
without a spine and you are dying.
he buried your mouth in the gutter, he threw your bowels
in the streets and the dogs fought over them. you told me
you just wanted to die with a little dignity. This is not honor;
a pitbull chewing on your large intestine.
The dogs are howling while you let men lay on you.
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I'm getting some very strange imagery from this; I can guarantee that I would get it from nowhere else.
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Good thing? I hope so.
thank you.
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Yes of course very good thing. ^^ You're welcome.
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i have never meet a goddess.
i never want to meet a goddess.
i want to meet a rat with a tail
made of pinecones, i want to
meet a fur blanket made of silly string.
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I have never met a
goddess either, but I pass
someone who thinks they are
everytime I walk down the street.
thanks for the comment
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i read this first in your little interview
and i fell in love with you
all
over
again
yayy
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awwwhh
i luv you pretty face!
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"you are dying with bruises on your shoulders and you are dying without a spine and you are dying."
that's probably one of my favourite lines of poetry, ever.
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thankyou. that is definitely
the height of it. <333333
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Interesting work, no less. Have to admit it was rather creative.
As for your statement in reply to Twilight,
love isnt exactly altered by how beautiful it looks:
More of the meaning that the look represents as.
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thank you.
as for your reply, I guess it can go for somethings, maybe, but hardly anyone loves for personality alone. personality and a car, maybe, but never personality alone. haha i'm just to cynical for that.
thanks for the comment!
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considered...in what way? haha
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oh, nicely done. if I had a camera, I'd snap a kodack picture of this to cherish for always. LOVE the imagery. Excellent job.
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that would be messy.
thank you,
people are strange
for loving such ugly things.
haha but thank you really.
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you make me happy with your weird imagery and unconventional thought progression. that sounded kind of pretentious.
BUT WHATEVER
the alternative message would be:
this is the happiest i have ever felt after reading a poem in which a pitbull chews someone's intestines
the end
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Oh, that is fantastic,
really I love hearing things like this.
How ARE you, by the way?
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how am i? i am. that's as far as that goes. maybe someday something you write will flip my writing switch back on.
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