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BCRich40 β Improving Skills - Part 17
Published: 2012-12-07 14:17:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 48143; Favourites: 387; Downloads: 621
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I got a lot to say about this part. I don't even know where to began.I'm a bit disappointed. I waited so long this part, but it turned out worse than I wanted. Some of the panels look fine, and some of them look horrible! I had serious problems with Dash's expressions. I just didn't get them right, until it was too late. I have too much to say!
At least I learned something. A lot actually, and that's the point of the whole series! I know what I'm doing wrong, and I know how to make things better. There's a few things that I don't get yet, but I just need more time to learn... So you don't need to point out visually "wrong" things. I'm aware of them already.
There's always something you could point out though...
There's probably a tons of grammar mistakes, so please point them out. I'll fix them soon as possible. I ask you to send corrections in note form for me, so there won't be a huge wall of text in comment section. You can point out small things like typos in comments though. And please, remember to tell me why the sentences are wrong. It helps me to improve my English skills.
Enjoy!
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And that's why I'm never drinking around my gay friend
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Why you be bi or omni(I hope that's how you spell it...)?
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Rainbow's face in that last panel, is a gem.
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Dull book horse? Intelligent is the new sexy, you ... you empty-brained athlete pony! :-P *raspberry*
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Hey! I resemble that remark.
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*Raspberry intensifies*
*Raspberries in italian*
*out of breath out of breath*
*Pants in french*
*Resumes raspberry, in spanish*
*Coughs in english*
*flies away, in german*
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comic is really weird just missingΒ undead mutant cyborgs that eatΒ the brain through the eye socket
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Your Skills Are Actually Improving!
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Twilight, be thankful that your sexual orientation is the ONLY thing you're confused about. Too much cider, and it could've ended even worse.
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How much worse?
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The way you draw wet-maned Dash is simply the best!Β
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Don't worry Twilight, soon you're going to have a similar problem of your body betraying you.
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Some of us are at some time. Like some of you!
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your drawing has improved greatly since part 1 
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The last panel speaks to me on a spiritual level.
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Women get 10x more attractive with their hair down. Bonus points if it's wet. It never fails and I don't know why women just wear their hair down all the time.
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Dat flank in panel 7 is...
SEEEEEEEEEENNSAAATIONAL. OW
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I like the fact that Dash takes 3 panels for her wing-boner to settle down lol
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the ponies: dayum good style, like it
background: awesome water, only the shore is a bit to straight^^
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So I take it Lyra already washed up and she's drying off?
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XDDD I love the *pomf* thingy, it's just so cool
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I planned on doing this all in one go, but I'll stop here and say that this part is probably one of my favorites because you decided to try reflective surfaces with the water. It came out quite nicely in my opinion :3
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The story & relationships are awesome-episode worthy even!
This is from a guy who's not into shipping much!
How much more is left-I hope lots!
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Listen to me. YOUR COMIC IS JUST FINE! You are a HECK a lot better than a LOT of novice artists out there. Keep this up, you're doing great!
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Take note, Twilight. One day, probably soon, you will be glad you already know that the Dash especially likes you with a wet mane.
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How are you confused, Twilight? You are literally a walking bisexual flag. Β Β
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