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I APOLOGIZE IF THIS OFFENDS ANYONEWHELP I had this idea in my head, and decided to put it on paper!
I'm a terrible person for this
I just thought in my head that Seiko (from Corpse Party) and Sayori (from Doki Doki Literature Club!) had a LOT in common! And yes, I initially only drew them together for that one obvious reason, but then I started to realize that they have more in common than that as well!
-For starters, both of their names start with "S"
-They're both super friendly, and put others before themselves. And they always want others to be happy.
-They both like (love) someone they both know they can never have (for Seiko it's Naomi, for Sayori it's the player)
-And lastly (this one kinda ties in with the "obvious" reason) they're both the first to die in both of their games
I'm kinda wondering in my head if Dan Salvato based Sayori off of Seiko
Or maybe I'm just looking too deep into it haha
Well, here's the process (processes) of it: sta.sh/01ur9n8li0hn , sta.sh/01chwbp02za0 , sta.sh/079qx6dkboz
(I had a difficult time deciding on a background to use and what effects to use.)
I also did a speed paint of this drawing, and you can watch it here: www.youtube.com/watch?v=QbIpKM…
I hope you all like it!
Sayori-(c)-Doki Doki Literature Club!-Dan Salvato
Seiko Shinohara-(c)-Corpse Party-Makoto Kedōin & Team GrisGris
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*looks at this*
*flashbacks to Corpse Party*
Oh my gosh, you're right! Ah, poor girls.
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Lol
I know right?
I feel so bad for them both. They didn't deserve their fates TT^TT
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Hello! I'm from Project Comment!
I don't know too much about the anime style, but i think you did pretty well on this one! the line work is good and the quality of the drawing is what i'd say is above average.
As thus us anime, there's not very much i can comment on, as the anatomy is good, and the face is of course in the anime style, which you did good on!
The only thing i'd have to comment on is the lighting and shading. the lighting is a bit weird, with the glares and flares, which i think don't really fit in with the drawing. but otherwise, good job!
4.5/5
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no problem! I liked the drawing!
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Hi,i'm from
The concept is really nice,i wish i could have this kind of creative thoughts :3
However some things could be improved,just like:
Red and black are aggressive colors,so puting this colors in the background of such passive characters just doesn't fit.I would suggest a pink and white gradient instead and even add some lil sparkles could make this looks cuter.
The lines in their hair are completely messed up,correct me if i'm wrong,but i guess is cause you put the colors in the same layer as the lines or you just don't know how to shade hair properly.a way to fix it is to study a lil bit more how shadows works on hair and search for better ways to shadow stuff.
Try not using that light effect unless the sun or something really shine appears in the image,otherwise it looks way too artificial.
Their eyes are way too far from the ears, i know this is part of the anime style but still.
I can see where their nose starts but i can't see where it ends and i also can't see their lips.
And last,Sayori's bow seems to be floating like is not connected to their hair.
hope it helped :3
I'm sorry if I wrote something wrong, English is not my first language
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Hello, I am commenting on behalf of project comment.
On some improvements regarding the work.
first, I have an issue with the hair shine that you put in Seiko. I believe that the flare in her hair that as a sign of shining is something exaggerated. I would suggest shading her hair to lighter tones approaching the light source.
Second is their head, their chins should complete the line in which it would show the borders of the head more. the incomplete line makes it look like their head is as one as the neck rather shown as a seperate part.
third is their philtrum(between the nose and mouth). the philtrum should be visible and shown as a subtle curve downwards from the nose then upwards towards the mouth. I think correcting this would make their faces much more accurate.
Lastly is their accesories. Sayori's ribbon looks fine in terms of perspective, but seiko's ribbon looks abit facing front to the viewers, and also the perspective of the ribbon is not accurate. you can use the marble(?), from the ribbon like circle at first, then make it into an ellipse and shift the other ribbon based on how flat the ellipse became from a circle, that way it is easier to determing how they would face based on the ribbon of seiko.
Overall, try shading hair manually, I dont suggest relying on tools, try to fix some anatomy of the character, and perspective practice(this one is abit tricky, and mastering it is a very hard thing to do.), I hope this helps!
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hmm, corpse party eh? i heard that dan salvato never played vns so, it's probably unlikely that he based sayori off of seiko xD
but..gj on the fanart! it's really nice ovob
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Thank you!
Yeah, a lot of people compare DDLC to Undertale as well, and apparently Dan has no idea what Undertale is. So that's probably true XD
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I was wondering is this had a Corpse Arty character. Watch out Nico! More Corpsee Party for you to regress (please stop)
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Well after the Logan Paul incident, I wasn't sure if doing fan-art for 2 girls that were hung would be a great idea.
But it's probably not too bad. Just in case this really does offend someone, I hope they know I didn't mean any harm.
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I don't think people would get offended, they're fictional characters not real people.
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That's true, but sometimes people are sensitive about things that are fictional
(Sometimes even I get upset with something fictional. I know it isn't real, but sometimes it does still bother me.)
But I put that there just in case.
I'm sure no one will actually get offended, though.
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It’s the Yuri!
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Uhh, I don't think this is yuri
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They should really hang out.No, I'm not stopping anytime soon.
Interesting idea though. I wouldn't know about Corpse Party, since it makes me a bit queasy.
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XD
Thanks. Haha, Corpse Party isn't too bad.
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The little girl with her head cleaved off isn’t at least stomach lurching?
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Oh it's definitely disturbing. I will admit to that. And I feel bad for the majority of people that were killed, but I guess what I was tryna say is that it's not really "scary" or anything.
But now that I think about it, I can certainly see how it'd make you queasy.
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Yeah, not scary, just bleaugh.
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