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Well, the art has improved a little bit, as it seems to go with this story. The Ed's situation however, has not.
One page left in this sequence. Let's see if the Eds manage to make it. Of course, if they do, how will it be? And if I'm cruel enough to destroy the Eds, where does that leave this story? What purpose would it even serve? *shrugs*
Also ouch... Double D certainly is harmed. Don't worry if you can't read all the text. Some of it's meant to be clear, some not so much, and some not at all. Besides, the visuals should give enough hints to pretty much say this: Double D is blaming himself for his friends plummeting to their doom because he was never athletic enough to pull them up.
I guess my last note regards the mechanics of this Portal & Eds cross over. I had to change the physics engine in this story because if you know Ed Edd n' Eddy, then you know it pushes the boundaries of the laws of physics. If you know Portal, then you know it has many physics similar to our own. I had to go to a... middle ground on this one. As a result, impossible exaggerations of the Eds have been somewhat neutralized. For example, Double D is still weak, but not as much as in the show. Still... he wasn't strong enough to pull up both boys. Ed meanwhile, is still strong enough to hold 100 pounds in one hand, but not enough to oh say.... rip apart a side walk or lift a house.
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Q_Q Oh my... I think my heart just broke.
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Seeing this late. =.=
Um....I'm not sure what to say about it except I really love the colour scheme. The last panel is my favourite because I love the hard lights and shadows.
But I'll be honest: I'm actually far more interested in your Bright and Brilliant so you'll have to forgive my lack of proper critique with PortalED at the moment. I suppose I'm just more fascinated with my friend's original projects and not so much their fan stuff. For instance, A Roxanne Story and PortalED are both charming in their own way, but.... well I am more interested in seeing more B&B and AVE.
That's not meant to be a rude statement, I'm just sort of uninterested in fanfiction right now. I've seen so many EEnE fancomics now that I really am coming up short with proper feedback. Plus, I know enough about the Eds and their development, I'd like to get to know your original characters more.
Whereas most people want to see more Eddward from you, I rather am exhausted seeing him. B&B was refreshing because it was new material and so I am more inclined following Princess Kayleen, The Dark Marauder and King Edward's story.
I hope that doesn't offend in the slightest, and if it did, I do apologize. *bows*
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Well the coloring is one of my favorite parts, and I was worried about that last panel when it went from sketch mode to digital mode. I guess in the end it all worked out.
Nah nah, I'm glad you like B&B more. As I said recently, after I uploaded that PD comic cover, I was going to swap back to B&B.
Actually PD swaps between GLaDOS and all Eds. Double D yes, first, but Eddy follows him in chapter 2 and Ed in chapter 3 and so on. They sometimes swap orders too.
Don't forget Flint Diackt! *hugs her Flint tightly* He's the INTJ of the bunch!
Flint:...Danielle... *tries to gently remove her*
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OK...I was worried for a minute, sometimes I'm too honest and unintentionally hurt people. So if you know, I offend, just let me know, and I'll mentally slap myself with a wet noodle.
In other news... I''m....actually....well....KayleenismybiasedfavouritethereIsaiditdon'thateme. *hides from tomatoes being thrown at her head*
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I can understand why you'd unintentionally hurt people with your T type nature. My mom has the same problem with my highly emotionally sensitive father. But don't worry, I'm a-okay >w<
D: Oh that reminds me, I had a flurry of weird dreams last night. One of them was about you. I think that's the first time you were ever present in one of my dreams.
XD *chuckles* Once again, mom would agree with you. She's Kayleen and Dark Marauder tied biased.
I'm King Edward and Flint Diackt tied biased.
ALL THE MAIN FOUR HAVE PEOPLE LIKING THEM
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Cool. XD
I can barely read what Rolf is saying tho.
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"No good at stuffing sausages head in sock Ed boy?"
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Ah. OK. Thanks!
(It's just cuz the text was so dark and didn't pop out so much like the others. Maybe a lighter blue would have been more readable.)
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Yeah, we get it Double-D. You lack in upper body strength.
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I must break him so he can find strength.
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Well hopefully he can find it to aid his quick wit in the next page. Otherwise they're goners.
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SUDDENLY!
Ed Edd n' Eddy, Portal/Portal2, Minecraft cross over!
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It was only a matter of time until Minecraft showed up.
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After that we get the Stanly Parable, MLP, Slender, and Batman the Animated Series.
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What about Misfits and Clarence?
I'm already writing a fic with the Eds and MLP, I call it Equestria Eds.
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Don't know one and not really interested in the other.
XD Ah heheheh I've thought about that so much. Tee hee.
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Also working on one with Code Lyoko, though it's more the idea of it, they never meet the characters from that show.
Yep, it has the Eds and the kids (no Kankers) somehow ending up in Equestria, and it's never explained. Just so much potential, the Eds' fourth wall breaking on par with Pinkie's, Eddy hating the world and everything in it, the ideas of which pony each character would be...I'm such a geek XD
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Ahhh I remember that show. Though I loved it much more when I was younger than when I grew up sadly.
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I've watched it again recently, and I think I like it more now. The only thing that really bothers me is the Yumi/Ulrich thing, I mean Christ, the two like each other a whole lot yet they don't want to get together. I freaking hate that cliche.
Though for my Equestria Eds, should I really include the other kids or should it just be the Eds?
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Think about this.
1. What helps the story best of all.
2.What helps this story about these characters meeting ponies feel like my story so I can care?
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Hmm...
Well for one, the "story" is supposed to be more episodic, small stories contained in an overarching plot, kinda like Friendship is Magic in a way. The overarching plot being the characters trying to find a way home while adjusting to temporary life in Equestria.
For two, one half of the entire idea is having these characters meet the ponies and try to think of how they'd react. I personally find it fun coming up with these scenarios and I find almost all of the EEnE characters (Not the Kankers, they're hardly even characters at times) to be very colorful and diverse. It'd be just as interesting to see how Kevin would race with Scootaloo as it'd be for Ed to sing a song with Pinkie Pie.
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Your forgetting TF2, the binding of Isaac and Bioshock. Together, it all becomes...
"OW! THE EDGE!"
Coming soon to a hell-hole near the 666th highway.
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^-^' Problem is I'm going on cross over stuff I know/like.
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Well! Can't say that it can't be done. I'm interested...
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XD Ahh but in the end I think I'll just stick with the Portal Eds cross over only. Really that's what this is written as.
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You gonna use the cliche of that the hero will gain the strength when they need it most?
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Hmmm that's a thought. I might, I might not. I might use something else, I might let them perish. We'll see in good time.
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You won't allow them to perish. They are the reason for the story, right? If you kill them off then I say you have about 3-4 pages after until you end it. Unless, of course, you have another plan for the story
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*nod nod* Ahh but nothing is certain except the story I wrote. Trust me, this has been planed out for quite some time. I'm not making it as I go.
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*planned
Alright then, I trust you
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XD I still need your spelling correction.
Thank you.
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How does Ed do it anyways...? Pick up a house...I hope no one was inside.
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Cliche Cartoon Antics as Double D once put it.
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Imagine what he could do as a baby...
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In the one episode where they keep having flashbacks (not sure what the name is), toddler Ed Lifts a house and smashes Edd over the head with it to make him forget that they'd flashbacked.
So, yeah, Ed was strong even when he was really little XD
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Well I'm not quite sure what he could do as a baby, but I know at an extremely young age he could eat a television set.
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...maybe that's how he ended up strange.
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