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Published: 2012-03-10 07:29:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 5247; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 13
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I'm not sure why, but I felt like making this error message since I've seen other people doing it lately.So, here's my first atempt at this error message thingy
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(Would it be possible if we could switch roles. I prefer being the tiny rather than the giant? And if so, could you be a female?)
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(I can do that.)
The massive female human stares at you with wide, blue eyes of shock and awe. She just can't believe that there is a tiny person on her desk right in front of her alarm clock. Not wanting you to run away, she quickly cups her hand over you, like a large fleshy tent around you! Keeping her hand over you, she carefully gets out of bed and gets down on her knees to be closer at your level, though you would only be level with her neck on the desk top.
She hopes that you have not disappeared under her hand, because it would mean you were only a figment of her imagination, a remnant of a dream. She very slowly lifted her hand so that the side of it is still against the desktop and her hand still forms a wall behind you. She gazes down at you in amazement. "Wow," she gasps. "You really are real."Β
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I stare at the giantess in absolute shock. Is this really real? In awe of her beauty and her terrifying size, I cannot force my body to move. It isn't until her hand cups over me and darkness surrounds me that I snap out of my trance. I completely panic under her hand. I run around and pound with my tiny fists against her soft warm skin. I even try to lift her hand off me, but nothing works.
I collapse and curl up. This is only a dream, I think. I'm only dreaming.
I clench my eyes shut until they hurt and open them, but I'm still underneath her giant hand. I shut them tight again and can hear the mattress creaking loudly. I open them, but I'm not in my bed, just under her giant hand! I shut my eyes again, thinking that the third time's the charm. But when I open my eyes, I see the giant face of the woman!
I scramble backwards. My back collides with the soft skin of her wall of a hand! I shiver because this is no dream; it's not even a nightmare. This is the horrifying reality! I'm at the complete mercy of this giant woman and I can do absolutely nothing about it!
Hearing her excited gasp only frightens me more and makes me worried about what she has planned for me. I turn my head away, covering my face with my arms. "Please, have mercy, giantess. I don't want to die!" I cry out.
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(Can I switch to tiny woman and the person who is turning the alarm off is male?)
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(Sure, we can switch.)
The human stares at you for a while with wide blue eyes. He just can't believe them. He must be still dreaming. His hesitation gives you the opportunity to do something.
(By the way, if you're interested, I'm making an interactive-like story about the Alarm Clock Error. I'll write chapters with choices at the end of them and people get to vote on what choices they'd like to see. The voting for the first chapter ends at midnight tonight.)
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I was shaking when he first looked at me. I thought: What he's going to do with me?Β
(Okay)
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The giant blinks a few times, thinking that you're just a dream or an halucination and than you'd disappear with one of his blinks, but you never disappear. She's real! There's a real tiny woman in my room! he thinks before cupping his hand over you and trapping you.
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I back up way from the cup but trip on the wire and said "NO! Please!"
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(He cups his hand over you, it's not an actual cup.)
You scream too late for him to hear it, because the cupped hand is already over you. What you say is only muffled by the giant hand that surrounds you like a tent.
While keeping his hand over you, he carefully gets out if bed and kneels down on the floor in front of the desk. He thinks he might have been dreaming of just seeing things when he saw you. He very slowly tilts his hand till it's on its side, forming a wall of flesh behind you. He gasps when his wide blue eyes spots you. "Are... Are you real?" He whispers.
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(Sorry my mind slipped)
I look at him with wide eyes and said. "Yes. I am real. And I don't even know how I got here." ! was hoping he could hear me.
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[Switch]
Joey flinched. Was that... uh-oh. That noise. It might wake the human up. He had to act fast.
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(Yes. You can switch. Would you like the human to be male or female? And by the way, the human is already awake and looking right at you. The human did turn off the alarm already, after all.)
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(let's just think that had happened by the time you commented.)
Joey gave a loud squeal. Acting fast, he pulled out a long pin from its sheath and waved it around threateningly.
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When she sees the pin being pulled out, she immediately pulls her hand off the alarm clock. She's not afraid of the small pin, she just doesn't want to be pricked by it first thing in the morning. "Hey, calm down little guy, I'm not going to hurt you," the human says while raising one hand with her palm facing Joey.
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(dont worry, i put up a ridiculously late reply too)
"O-oh yeah? Cause I have a pin and I know how to use it too."
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(Yes, you can, but I have to know beforehand. Are you going to be playing as a tiny neko?)
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(No, just a tiny human.)
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(Ok. Just making sure.)
The alarm stops it's blaring beeps as loud as a fully amped rock concert to your tiny ears. You feel a rush of air from the giant hand coming down on the alarm clock to shut it off. The human spots you due to the red glow of the digital numbers. He stares at you with wide blue eyes, finding it hard to believe he's seeing a tiny girl on his desk! His hesitation gives you the oppertunity to do something.
(By the way, I'm working on an interactive-like story of this error. Each chapter ends in choices that the readers get to vote on. If you're interested, the voting for the first "chapter" ends at midnight.)
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I stared at the giant hand in the air, stunned and frozen. Seeing that the owner of the hand was also like this, I slowly began to back away. I was ready to break into a sprint.
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As soon as the giant guy sees you backing up, he's snapped out of his shock and blocks you path with his hand. He sets it on his side, forming a giant fleshy wall behind you. He doesn't want you to leave just yet, especially when he still has no idea if he's still dreaming or not. You're just too amazing of a sight to see. "Please, don't go," the giant male begs more than demands. "Are you real?"
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I let out a small squeaky yelp when he moves his hand to behind me. I had backed into it. I immediately pushed myself away a couple inches. I stared at the giant unsure if I should try another escape. Realizing he would be to fast I gulped, "Y-yes, I-I'm real." I stepped away from his hand more.
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The giant gasps when he feels you bump up against the palm of his hand. She really is real! I have a tiny woman on my desk! "Then where did you come from and why are you on my desk?"
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"I-I'm not sure how I got here, not even sure where here is." I rub my arms, "As for where I came from, well, Missouri."
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*gently cups my hand around it* don't want the cat to get youΒ
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(Would you like the tiny to be a female or a male?)
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(Could we do a role switch so I'm the tiny guy, and you're the giantess?)
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(Sure, that can be arranged.)Β
Lindsey is in utter shock at first, her hand never leaving the alarm clock. She just can't believe her eyes, yet there is a tiny guy on her desk. Not wanting you to run away, she moves her hand off the alarm clock and cups it over your body. She then slowly slides herself out of bed, her hand never lifting off you, until she's on her knees in front of the desk.
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*The last thing I remember I was out for a walk, and blacked out from a sudden head pain, so while I'm out, I have NO idea what's going on*
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Ever so slowly, Lindsey tilts her hand away and peeks underneath. She does it slowly to keep you from running, because she doesn't know you're actually knocked out. When she sees that you're just lying there on your back, she lifts her hand away and discovers you're not even awake. Curious to see if you're real or just her imagination, she gently places her finger on your chest. She feels you and your heart beat, and your breathing! She pulls her hand away with a shriek of surprise.
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Lindsey leans in closer and whispers, "Hello? Are you awake, little guy?" Her chin us now on the edge if the desk.
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*Slowly, and painfully opens eyes*
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"Where did you come from? What are you?"
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*I jolt up, and a surge of pain rushes through me. Even though it REALLY hurts, I start backing away*
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She simply raises her hand and sets it down behind you so that your back backs into her soft, warm palm. "Please, don't be afraid," she whispers in a begging tone. "I won't hurt you, I swear. I just want to know what you are and how why you're in my desk."
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*As I back into her hand another rush of pain hits me. My voice is very scratchy, and all I manage is.*
"I-I-I-I d-d-d-don't kn-kn-know..."
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"You don't know how you got here?" she asks, tilting her head in confusion. "Then what's the last thing you remember?"
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"Pain? But do you remember anything before the pain? Do you remember where you were and what you were doing?"
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"Do you at least remember your name?"
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"My name is Lindsey. I promise that I'll do everything in my power to try and help you, Jacob."
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