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Description So, you can be one of the unsuspecting towns people, the giant or giantess alien who captured them all, or you can be a younger sibling of the alien wanting to play with the towns people. The reasons for capturing the town could be because of a science experiment, because the alien wants a town full of pets, or whatever other reason you can think of. The aliens can look completely human or any other type of creature you can imagine.
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TheDiamondSheepArt [2014-01-29 18:52:21 +0000 UTC]

(I am one of the citizens that live in the town. The Alien species are called Kaempe. And they are around 1,500 ft. Tall making humans around 1/10th of an inch to Kaempe. [If thats too small, let me know and you can change the Kaempe size to another height] I'll let you start.)

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TheDiamondSheepArt In reply to TheDiamondSheepArt [2014-01-29 18:53:45 +0000 UTC]

(And by the way, the town is very small, and is only just a few neighborhoods is that okay for you?)

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TheDiamondSheepArt In reply to TheDiamondSheepArt [2014-01-29 19:10:15 +0000 UTC]

(One last thing I forgot, describing the Citizen I'm going to be


His name is Jack, he is 15 years old he has brown hair and hazel eyes. He is excellent at science and technology, so he might discover that he is in a dome even with all the camo the aliens did. I would suggest the alien doing the science project and after he is done, he makes the town his pets. But you don't have to. )

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Nightmare-Bomber [2014-01-22 13:48:32 +0000 UTC]

As the town reappeared on a large desk, I stood over it laughing. "Hi citizens of Earth! I'm Nightmare Bomber, and you've been invited here for a very special event! I'm making you my new toys. We're going to play a lot of games, and if you win then you'll be allowed to go free. If you lose, you become my playthings forever, and the rest of your planet will be mine too!" My voice was cute and childish, but I didn't flinch a bit in my words, it was very clear that I wasn't joking. "Now what should we play first?" I asked teasingly as I leaned over the town.

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Zeezee68 [2013-12-25 13:02:08 +0000 UTC]

#1 my and my friends were playing xbox to got her. My friend Jacob, got curios and looked out side. "Guys, you'd better come here quick!" Β "Holy balls!" Β " WTF IS THIS MADNESS?!?"

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bruce607 In reply to Zeezee68 [2014-01-09 20:30:09 +0000 UTC]

(There's one major problem. You're not able to see the dome around the town. On the inside, the dome is broadcasting what would seem like an ordinary day outside of the town. So, it would appear that nothing is wrong.)

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Zeezee68 In reply to bruce607 [2014-03-13 08:29:55 +0000 UTC]

(I can unjust to the ) "gotcha" says Jacob with a smile. " You stopped me form playing Β battlefield for nothing?!" I yell angrily. -_- Liam's face < XDΒ 

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TotalPokemon [2013-12-03 14:47:52 +0000 UTC]

*I was the 8 year old sister of the head scientist. All the aliens looked exactly like nekos*


"Big sis... I wanna pet..."

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bruce607 In reply to TotalPokemon [2013-12-12 02:25:13 +0000 UTC]

Your big sister, Francine, is sitting at her desk with some strange dome on the desktop. Francine doesn't even turn around to look at you and makes a shooing motion with her hand. "Go away, (enter your character's name here). Ask Mom or Dad." Your big sister is clearly annoyed with you because you should be asking Mom or Dad for a pet. She doesn't have the power of money to give you one. She has her own problems with school.

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TotalPokemon In reply to bruce607 [2013-12-12 02:26:41 +0000 UTC]

*Frowns*


"But can't I just have one?"

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bruce607 In reply to TotalPokemon [2013-12-12 02:30:11 +0000 UTC]

"I don't have any pets to give you. You have to ask Mom or Dad to buy you one. Just go away, (insert your character's name here)."


(You didn't tell me your character's name yet. It's important to know if my character is your character's sister.)

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TotalPokemon In reply to bruce607 [2013-12-12 02:31:08 +0000 UTC]

(just call her Ivory)


"but I want one of those humans..."

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bruce607 In reply to TotalPokemon [2013-12-12 02:37:19 +0000 UTC]

"These humans are for research, Ivory. They're not pets. You can't have one."

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TotalPokemon In reply to bruce607 [2013-12-12 02:39:53 +0000 UTC]

"Why not?"

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bruce607 In reply to TotalPokemon [2013-12-12 02:43:34 +0000 UTC]

"Because they're for a SCHOOL project. You wouldn't understand. It's college stuff. Just go away."

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TotalPokemon In reply to bruce607 [2013-12-12 02:44:26 +0000 UTC]

*I pout*


"Not until I get one..."

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bruce607 In reply to TotalPokemon [2013-12-12 02:54:03 +0000 UTC]

"These humans are a tiny civilization. They are people, not pets. I need to observe their society without them knowing. They still think they're on their own planet at the moment. If I just take one out, they'll know I'm here and my project is ruined. I'd get an F."

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TotalPokemon In reply to bruce607 [2013-12-12 02:55:25 +0000 UTC]

"Maybe act like you're a goddess? Think about it... You always did love being pampered..."

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bruce607 In reply to TotalPokemon [2013-12-12 03:00:20 +0000 UTC]

She blushes and turns around to look at you. She has no idea how her eight year old sister knows about that. "I can't. It would mean failing the class by getting an F on a major project worth 70% of my grade! Just leave, Ivory."

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TotalPokemon In reply to bruce607 [2013-12-12 03:02:05 +0000 UTC]

*Eyes tear up*


"I HATE YOU!"


*I run out. I always was over dramatic...*

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bruce607 In reply to TotalPokemon [2013-12-12 03:46:48 +0000 UTC]

Francine just rolls her eyes and gets back to her observations without any of the humans realizing where they truly are!

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TotalPokemon In reply to bruce607 [2013-12-12 12:55:46 +0000 UTC]

*I run into my room, and burry my face in a pillow*

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Baby-Pandu [2013-07-29 03:54:49 +0000 UTC]

*citizen of the town*

It was after the town went missing on earth. I was walking alone on the edge of town, i didnt have any friends so i was sulking as i walked. i tryed to walk out of town but hit something hard and fall to the ground."what the hell?..." i mutted and rub my soar rear as i stand up.

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bruce607 In reply to Baby-Pandu [2013-09-02 16:43:49 +0000 UTC]

It appears you have run into nothing, yet you definitely felt it. Little do you know, you and the town are no longer on Earth, but on the table in a giant alien's room! A dome is over the town which produces a video on the inside of the natural surrounds of the town. While on the other side, the alien can look inside the town as if the dome were made of glass!Β 

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Baby-Pandu In reply to bruce607 [2013-09-02 16:47:14 +0000 UTC]

I got to my feet and walked back to only about a foot away from the dome. i held my hand out and touched the solid surface of the dome.

"what the hell?...."i muttered under my breath. i knelt down to the ground and traced my hand down to where the dome met the earth. the ground was seeming to go down in a ditch then stopped when the dome started. "what is this?..."

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drew2319 [2013-07-18 16:13:35 +0000 UTC]

(Male citizen, 16 yrs old. Um. Could the alien be a race of {Giant, intelligent} dogs?)

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bruce607 In reply to drew2319 [2013-07-26 23:46:18 +0000 UTC]

(Now when you saw "dogs", do you mean you want the giant alien to be an anthro dog, inu, or some other type of canine creature. And what gender do you want the alien to be?)

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drew2319 In reply to bruce607 [2013-07-26 23:47:19 +0000 UTC]

(Straight male dog?)

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bruce607 In reply to drew2319 [2013-07-26 23:56:31 +0000 UTC]

(Not an anthro dog or an inu? But how would the dog be able to do things when he has no hands?)

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drew2319 In reply to bruce607 [2013-07-27 00:04:57 +0000 UTC]

(Psychic?)

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Tiny-Zane [2013-07-05 14:40:16 +0000 UTC]

(I would like to be a citizen and could the aliens be Canine females that are young adults?)
*I walk around my house, having a day off from work, I already finished cleaning and everything. I turn the tv on to try to cure my boredom*
ugh there's nothing good on!

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bruce607 In reply to Tiny-Zane [2013-07-14 15:17:19 +0000 UTC]

(When you say female Canine, do you mean an inu or an anthro canine and what species of canine for that matter?)

It's not that there is nothing one you like; there is nothing on literally. All you get is static. Yet, everything on the TV indicates that there is nothing wrong.

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Tiny-Zane In reply to bruce607 [2013-07-21 02:04:41 +0000 UTC]

(Anthro and timber wolf)

*I groan and pick up my phone but there is static in that as well* UGH even the phone's dead! *I get up and walk outside*

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Nikki-Karin [2013-07-04 13:11:28 +0000 UTC]

I appear human, though far prettier then a male of the species. My big brother has captured a small town for some research project, but that's so boring. I want to have some fun with them. He's always trying to keep me away from his little aliens, I don't get it. Ok, so I did eat all of them that one time, but I'm way more mature and sensible now, I just know I'm ready. So big bro or not, I'm playing with this town, looking in over the edge of it.

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bruce607 In reply to Nikki-Karin [2013-07-14 15:15:02 +0000 UTC]

The town is on you older brothers table in his room at about waist high. This allows you to look down at the entire town from a bird's eye view. A dome surrounds the entire town. The dome acts like a one-way mirror where you can see through it as if it's not even there, but on the inside, it creates an image around the entire town. From inside the dome, it looks like just a normal day for them. It's as if the dome isn't there at all to them, unless they bump into the thing. But by now, it seems like some of the tiny creatures have discovered something is wrong. Every time a vehicle of anything electronic goes near the dome, it stops working. There is a pile up of dead vehicles on each of the towns exits. Quite a few people look panicked while others have no idea anything is going on. Your older brother remembers the last time you played with his research subjects; so, he put some security around the town. You need a password in order to open up the dome!

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Dragonfan007 [2013-07-03 00:06:29 +0000 UTC]

( I'm a citizen of the town. Male)

Ben: man, I can't believe the day I've been having.

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bruce607 In reply to Dragonfan007 [2013-07-07 14:28:52 +0000 UTC]

(And what kind of day has Ben been having?)

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Dragonfan007 In reply to bruce607 [2013-07-10 23:11:11 +0000 UTC]

( depressed day. His girlfriend cheated on him)


Ben: why Mel? Why did you cheat on me? I thought you loved me.

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bruce607 In reply to Dragonfan007 [2013-07-11 16:18:44 +0000 UTC]

(Um... Is he talking to this "Mel" or is he talking to himself. I can't tell.)

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Dragonfan007 In reply to bruce607 [2013-07-11 16:19:24 +0000 UTC]

( his girlfriend was Mel)

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bruce607 In reply to Dragonfan007 [2013-07-11 16:27:54 +0000 UTC]

(I understand that, but I'm asking if he's talking to her now or if he's talking to himself. You really didn't give any set up to his position, where he is in the town, who he's with, if he's talking to someone. By just giving me a line of dialogue from him, it's hard to figure out what's going on.)

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Dragonfan007 In reply to bruce607 [2013-07-11 16:32:44 +0000 UTC]

( he was talking to himself. Sorry. He is by himself.)

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bruce607 In reply to Dragonfan007 [2013-07-11 16:33:49 +0000 UTC]

(Is he in his home? Or in some public place while he's talking to himself?)

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Dragonfan007 In reply to bruce607 [2013-07-11 16:37:41 +0000 UTC]

( he's walking around his neighborhood )

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Dragonfan007 In reply to bruce607 [2013-07-07 14:43:04 +0000 UTC]

( bad day. Girlfriend dumped him )

Ben: why did she dump me? I don't get it,

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yugifan30 [2013-07-01 09:39:54 +0000 UTC]

*yawns walking through the tow before I get to the edge of town going towards where the wall of the bubble would be*

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bruce607 In reply to yugifan30 [2013-07-14 14:59:19 +0000 UTC]

(Is there a reason why you're walking out of town?)

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yugifan30 In reply to bruce607 [2013-07-15 04:38:28 +0000 UTC]

(ummmm just as a morning jog)

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Filanwizard [2013-07-01 06:37:30 +0000 UTC]

(Hmm citizen of the town, mature content is fine, non fatal vorish things are fine too if you want, Giant male elf scientist doing some research.)

Alex looked at his watch and pondered why the usual daily shipment had not arrived at his house, He had been planning on using the parts for an experiment of his own. For the man was an inventor and could swear he was on the cusp of cracking the solution needed for a compact high output fusion reactor. Most of the town considered him the local mad scientist, And as such it was good he lived near the edge of town. The location also let him take deliveries of things the sheriff would not always allow through town, But it was strange not long after he noticed his delivery was late the ground shook and he knew something was up as the area had no seismic history. His first move was to look outside and yet everything seemed normal, Though he expected a call any time now with someone blaming him for shaking the town. But while he waited for that or for a the sheriff to swing by he started to review the data from some of the science toys he had on loan from the USGS, And nothing... The shake was only a 4.0 and that was no different than what one got from a big explosion and yet there had been none. Rapidly concerning though was he noticed the internet had gone out yet he still had power and still had his telephone dialtone and his cable modem showed as online. His next thought was to dust off some old radio hardware and see if he could get anything on the CB or HAM radio. "I have no clue what is going on here, Seriously its like the town has been cut off but no evidence of being cut off."

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bruce607 In reply to Filanwizard [2013-07-07 14:27:35 +0000 UTC]

(So, you want my character to be a giant male elf, right?)

It turns out that Alex's deduction is quite right, but it's bigger than he realizes. The entire small town has been encased in an invisible dome. Well, not technically invisible. It acts like a one-way mirror of sorts. On the outside, someone can look through the dome with clarity. But on the inside of the dome, the dome itself is broadcasting would would seem like a normal day of the environment around the little town. From the outside of the dome, it's owner can control everything. What the people see "outside" the dome and down to the actually weather patterns inside the dome. The dome allows air flow while other certain things that ensures that the conditions under the dome continues to have good air can pass through the shield.
The small "earthquake" is actually the result of the entire town disappearing from Earth and being set down on a table. The table is just large enough for the town limits and in the bedroom of a massive alien being! The table is level with the being's waist, allowing it to peer into the dome from above. But it has other means of seeing what the populace is doing inside; he has multiple little drones scattered throughout the town. The drones have a cloaking device and can even pass through objects like ghosts. They hover soundlessly. The alien can see what his drones are seeing through several monitors and can measure multiple different things with them. These drones are perfect for his research. Yes, the whole reason this town has been kidnapped by an alien is just a little research project and nothing more!

While Alex is thinking about getting a radio, a family that was just passing through the town starts heading for the road just outside of his house. What the family doesn't know is that there is a sort of field before the dome wall that would stop anything electronic from working plus any vehicles. That wall, no one could crash into the wall. The field causes the car to die just in front of Alex's home. The man starts hitting the wheel and cursing, despite his wife and two young children in the car with him.

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