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bshuffett — Disconsolate
Published: 2010-05-06 19:48:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 1605; Favourites: 68; Downloads: 10
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A forgoneconclusion to
what we might
have been;
what now holds
you and I
transfixed.
I am vexed,
and through this
deafening silence
I simply cannot
hear my own
heart breaking.
-Brian Shuffett
May 6th, 2010
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Comments: 84
Your pieces are setting a very conistant pace these days Brian
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No problem Brian my friend.
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You're welcome! I've read a lot of your work and this is one of my favorites. Its simple yet profound.
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The message is so powerful in this even though it's a short piece... I'm speechless with how beautiful it is
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pretty sad, dude. i pheel for you.
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If I could rewind time I'd go back to my own birth and drop myself as a baby, just to see what would happen to me in the future.
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It sounds so plaintive. Sort of lost. You've always given your poetry a "strong voice". A developed style where you can actually hear or feel the tone.
I can't physically hug you but- 
I understand.
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A piece by you that everyone would be able to relate.
Strong.
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I feel this way all the time. Great to find relating words.
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