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And they all lived happily ever after until the Shredder came and acted like a douche 8D
Splinter has grown from this experience, learnt some things about himself and has come to terms with who he is and what sort of life he is now living. And he's realised that he's actually fine with that change is hard, it always is, but sometimes it's a blessing in disguise.

I hope every-one enjoyed my little story. I thought it'd be interesting to write something to show Splinter's transition from orphaned rat into loving father.

I really want to thank every-one who left comments and feedback on these pages, you guys are the best
As I said on the first page, for a while I was going to abandon this story because I didn't think any-one would like it. I'm so happy that some of you enjoyed it as much as you did. You encouraged me to keep going and finish it. Perhaps one day I'll do another short story if I feel the urge to.
As for those who've come late I hope you've enjoyed the story as well
I've never done a comic like this, so I'm really grateful for every-one's support. thank you so much!

Raphie is safe, the family is together again, and Splinter has made peace within himself. It's time for some well deserved sleep in the warm nest

TMNT (c) Mirage
TMNT font (c) Mirage or Lionsgate or Maple
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Comments: 191

C-Puff In reply to ??? [2009-07-21 19:45:02 +0000 UTC]

The scene Idea I have features them as their teenaged form, and I have another idea that would take place around aged 10 or so. XD I dunno what I'd do for a front cover to be honest. I think the story is too short to really deserve one.
anyway, thanks again for the support and feedback

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Arwing In reply to C-Puff [2009-07-23 23:14:07 +0000 UTC]

So still young huh? It would be interesting though I tend to like them as present selves. Still it'll be interesting to see. The story maybe short but it had a lot of emotinal impact to many. You really should do a cover, like TMNT Origins: fatherhood or something like that. At any rate your very welcome. Like I said, if you need help or support of whatever thats what i am here for.

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Silverpaw15 [2009-07-19 22:52:45 +0000 UTC]

Awwww....^_^

So cute! Thank you so much for making this. I hope you'll make more in the future.

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C-Puff In reply to Silverpaw15 [2009-07-19 23:50:40 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much X3 and thanks for reading it all

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Lily-Pond-Maiden In reply to ??? [2009-07-19 22:00:34 +0000 UTC]

I love not only the amazing end to your already amazing story, but the first sentence in your comments is so true! you did an out of this world job on this comic! congrats!!

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C-Puff In reply to Lily-Pond-Maiden [2009-07-19 22:42:17 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much X3 and thank you for reading the whole thing

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Lily-Pond-Maiden In reply to C-Puff [2009-07-20 00:44:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for drawing the whole thing!! <3

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halfshell2 [2009-07-19 19:15:34 +0000 UTC]

AWWWWWWW THIS IS SOOOOOO SWEET! I LOVE IT SO MUCH!

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C-Puff In reply to halfshell2 [2009-07-19 19:16:53 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much X3 and thanks for reading

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GemiDonnie In reply to ??? [2009-07-19 18:23:25 +0000 UTC]

So cute

It is a very good view on what Splinter felt during that time; and you are very good at drawing tears :3

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C-Puff In reply to GemiDonnie [2009-07-19 19:18:52 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much X3 and thank you for reading everything

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GemiDonnie In reply to C-Puff [2009-07-19 19:23:23 +0000 UTC]

Of could I not read everything? It would be a shame to just leave midway O__o

And yo are welcome ^^

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KSTaki In reply to ??? [2009-07-19 14:32:50 +0000 UTC]

Raph is so cute being piggyback by Splinter! Hey Leo was waiting for them to come home his face is really cool! Group hug!!! hey it the coffee can! I like how he express them to more than turtle he pick up but his children now

The last panel is really adorable the family sleeping comfortable together and great narrator ending for Splinter. Of his journey and what he learn from it wonderful! Thanks for the comic

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C-Puff In reply to KSTaki [2009-07-19 19:22:08 +0000 UTC]

XD Yup! that's little Leo waiting by the entrance.
and thank you so very much for all the comments and for reading the whole thing

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KSTaki In reply to C-Puff [2009-07-20 09:54:03 +0000 UTC]

No problem it was really great I love the comic

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moody67 In reply to ??? [2009-07-19 13:04:07 +0000 UTC]

Awww so cuute, I loved it from begining to end

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C-Puff In reply to moody67 [2009-07-19 19:19:16 +0000 UTC]

thanks and thanks for reading it all

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Jordancatgirl7 In reply to ??? [2009-07-19 03:54:31 +0000 UTC]

I really hope you do more comics because this was just the sweetest thing ever! Seriously, you have to be the first person who has ever done a comic devoted to Splinter. The fact that Raph got a piggy back ride from him overloaded my cute senses. Also, how ecstatic Mikey is at seeing Raph, just utter win!~

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C-Puff In reply to Jordancatgirl7 [2009-07-19 04:12:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much X'3 and thank you for sticking with the story~ If I ever have an idea for a short story again I won't hesitate to draw it next time
XDD I loved it in the episode "Tales of Leo" How everytime Splinter and Leo started moving again in the sewers Splinter would sling him onto his back despite Leo having a perfectly good pair of legs himself XDD Splinter loved carrying his children around when they were little and he was still able to, I wanted to use this in this comic.
And of course Raph and Mikey are best friends 4evars XDDD something I just love to bits

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Shell-Mel [2009-07-19 03:17:30 +0000 UTC]

This is the sweetest story I have ever read about Splinter and accepting the turtles as sons!

Thank you so much for not abandoning it!!

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C-Puff In reply to Shell-Mel [2009-07-19 03:19:12 +0000 UTC]

I'm so glad you enjoyed it X'3 thank you so much for reading~!

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Shell-Mel In reply to C-Puff [2009-07-19 03:36:28 +0000 UTC]

No problems. Thank for drawing!

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HM24 In reply to ??? [2009-07-19 03:13:23 +0000 UTC]

A fitting end to a great story. Way to go C-Puff I really love the big group hug in the end! Well done

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C-Puff In reply to HM24 [2009-07-19 03:16:24 +0000 UTC]

thank you so very much X'3 and thank you for all the feedback and for sticking with the story

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tatsu-namida In reply to ??? [2009-07-19 02:48:24 +0000 UTC]

It was good! ^_^
*sporks tiny Shredder plushie* ...i don't want the cuteness to end, so if i spork and end shredder now, it doesn't have to!

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C-Puff In reply to tatsu-namida [2009-07-19 02:59:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much X3
XDD Too bad the Shredder has a habit of not dying.

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tatsu-namida In reply to C-Puff [2009-07-19 18:15:51 +0000 UTC]

Aw crap...sort of forgot about him coming back from the dead sixty billion times.

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Phantom-Griffin In reply to ??? [2009-07-19 02:03:54 +0000 UTC]

That was such a cute story! Thanks for sharing it ^_^

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C-Puff In reply to Phantom-Griffin [2009-07-19 02:05:03 +0000 UTC]

thank you X'3 and thanks for reading

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MachiasBanshee In reply to ??? [2009-07-19 01:56:38 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely wonderful... I loved every bit of it. When I saw the first page, I knew this was something to keep an eye on... The emotions shown in Splinter's body language plucked at my heart strings when he thought Raphael was dead.

The last two panels just say it all... what a wonderful new little family.


~Machias

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C-Puff In reply to MachiasBanshee [2009-07-19 02:03:16 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much X'3 I'm so happy you enjoyed reading it so much, and thank you for sticking with it

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myXwoundedXsoul In reply to ??? [2009-07-19 01:44:12 +0000 UTC]

awwwww....*dies from the cute*

Very nice comic.

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C-Puff In reply to myXwoundedXsoul [2009-07-19 01:47:31 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much X3 and thanks for reading

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Donnysgirl In reply to ??? [2009-07-19 01:33:03 +0000 UTC]

YAY! It's over! Great comic. Loved every minute of it. ^.^

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C-Puff In reply to Donnysgirl [2009-07-19 01:43:15 +0000 UTC]

thank you so very much X'3 and thank you for reading it~

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samphantom In reply to ??? [2009-07-19 01:27:59 +0000 UTC]

awwww so sweet x3.
awesome comic

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C-Puff In reply to samphantom [2009-07-19 01:29:14 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much

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TheMindOfAnArtist In reply to ??? [2009-07-19 00:29:32 +0000 UTC]

This was the most beautiful comic I have ever read...made me cry with joy :3

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C-Puff In reply to TheMindOfAnArtist [2009-07-19 01:18:04 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much X'3 I'm so happy you enjoyed it

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TheMindOfAnArtist In reply to C-Puff [2009-07-19 01:29:22 +0000 UTC]

It was just so awesome :3

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