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|| General information ||Name: Twistedstripes
Gender: Male
Age: 26 Moons
Clan: Shatterclan
Rank: Deputy (?)
|| Family information ||
Mother: Daisydew (dead)
Father: Lionfang (dead)
Kin: Petalpaw (sister, dead) Hollypelt (sister, dead) Darkkit (brother, dead)
Mate: None
Kits: None
Other family members: None that he knows of..
|| Personal information ||
Personality: Stubborn | Prideful | Arrogant + Young | Fighter | Clever |
Good skills: Fighting - Tracking - Lunging/leaping
Bad skills: Hunting - Swimming - Being seduced by beautiful she-cats
History: Pure Shatterclan cat through and through.
Likes: Pretty she-cats, winning, battle, helping clan, being in charge
Dislikes :
Fears: Being without a love, dying a unhonorable death,
|| Body features ||
Size: Average
Height: Average
Scent: Leafy smell; like a sharp herb scent
Lost limbs: None
Disabilities: None
Scars: Torn ear
Fur colors: Golden brown with dark brown (almost black) stripes. White.
Eye colors: Light, icey blue
|| Relationships ||
crush
love
mate
lust
hate
wants dead
dislike
discomfort
friend
best friend
family
respect
fear
mentor/apprentice
Acquaintance
|| Role play information ||
Role play example: (Gonna use random cats) "Intruders! How dare you cross into Shatterclan land with your filthy paws!" The golden tabby hissed, his ice blue eyes blazing a cold blue fire as he stepped forward the two rouges, Brownfoot and Gingerpaw behind him. His long and thin black claws were flexed and buried into the ground. "Twistedstripes, calm down,"Brownfoot meowed to the angered deputy, who merely ignored him. Twistedstripes crouched low to the ground, his tail lashing and fur bristeled. The two rouges were cowering besides a large boulder with wide eyes, and the deputy could see their fear as clear as daylight. And that pleased him.
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Comments: 69
Isn't he supposed to be with Maple? If so, why is it written «none» in the mate place o-o
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yeah, but i just didnt update it xD im sorry
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It's okay ^^ I was just abit afraid ^^
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He's a really cool character! I love his name too. Perhaps two of our characters could RP some time? Unless, oh, is he in a group?
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thanks! (: and yes, sorry, hes in a rp group :c
but i can rp with Crykat and Percy ^^ like OC rping or something.i love to rp :3
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Y'welcome. 8D Ah, okay, that's fine~
Oh, that'd be great! I can RP with my fursona, Kemi, and my mascot Kuchika. C: If you want to, I mean.
Like, if you have time. Only if you want to.
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yeah, i have time ^^ i dont have school on Monday, and it seems my weekend might be clear, although im not sure. c: but im sure we can rp sometime
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Okay, great! Whenever you want, send me a note, or I can send you one?
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I don't mind. C3 I'm usually bad at starting RPs out.
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I am currently busy with this character, sorry! ;w;
But we can rp any other time, as long as Twistedstripes is open
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Maplecloud stepped forward Shatteredclan's territory, unsure about herself. She was from Tornclan and she assumes it but she was disliking how they threatened other clans and even her! It was enough, plus the new clan that was formed was making her curious... She mke the final step she has to make to be in the other clan's territory. She won't walk to search for the camp; She doesn't know where it is plus she doesn't want to be seen as an enemy which only wants to battle. She'll wait for any patrol or any cats who come near to brought her to their camp. She was very impatient for this to happen. Her tail was waving happily and the air as she was leaving her natal clan. A smile came up into her face as she saw a cat getting near to her. From far away, it was blazing like a tiger because of the sun. ''Wow....'',she thought to herself.
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Twistedstripes was padding through the forest and scanned the area through gleaming ice blue eyes. With their clan without a second in command cat, they were vulnerable. Or at least to him, they were. He let out a annoyed sigh before blinking. Something wasn't right; he could sense it. Another cat must be near by...he thought to himself before narrowing his eyes, and made sure to continue on with quiet pawsteps.
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Maplecloud purred as he came near by her. Without a move she let out a smile. «I'm Maplecloud from Tornclan. Please, don't kill me. I'm not a spy. I'm just... disgusted by how my clan acted with an apprentice... Then, I heard of your clan and I was being curious about it. I finally take the decision to leave my clan and come to yours. Please, would you be nice and take me to your clan?»,she asks calmly.
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He turned his head sharply, realizing just then that the she-cat was near by. The fur on the back of his neck rose as the scent of Tornclan brushed against his face, making a faint growl come from his throat. Twistedstripes narrowed his icy blue eyes once she was finished telling him her story, and debated whether or not to trust her. After a few moments, he gruffly meowed,"Alright...I suppose you could have a chance with Lionstar."He leaned in slightly to examine her facial expressions his face emotionless, before pulling back and turning around."Let's go, Maplecloud. It would be best if you should keep up the pace,"he muttered before quickly padding forward and in the direction of the camp.
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She keep up the pace easily. She was accustomed with speed. «Thank you. Can I have your name?»,she mews softly.
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He kept his gaze forward as he answered,"Twistedstripes." The tabby continued on, but took interest in the she-cat. Any information he could get out of her would benefit Shatteredclan. And Lionstar might even consider him a better role..."So, Maplecloud, tell me something. What's...happening..between Tornclan and Raggedclan, hm? " The tom glanced back over his shoulder, blue eyes hinting his curiosity. "I mean, it must have been terrible, for you to leave your own clan because of it.."
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«It was not terrible.. Oh no! I saw apprentice and even everybody trying to kill a kit! It's terrible out there! It's disgusting... Raggedclan and Tornclan are battling because their ways to act are not the same. Tornclan just want vengance and Raggedclan are defending themselves. I've been to the battle against them and I didn't want to see any other blood spills out there... It's so... disgusting! That's why I came here... To start a new life.»,she finally finishes with a soft purr.
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Twistedstripes listened to her words thoughtfully, and his ice blue eyes gleamed . How perfect. "What a brave thing for you to do, Maplecloud,"he purred roughly, and he flicked his tail across her shoulder teasingly. "I'm sure Lionstar would accept you as a brave and strong she-cat of Shatteredclan."
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«Thank you Twistedstripes, you're such a wonderful tom!»,she purrs while smiling.
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The sly tom smirked , his ice blue eyes bright. "But of course, dear Maplecloud,"he purred once more before turning back as they neared the camp. He sniffed the air. No sign of the great Shatteredclan leader."Hmm..I suppose Lionstar isn't here at the moment,"he meowed, giving her a small shrug.
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She nods. «I understand. I'll wait until he'll be there!»,she purrs. «Is there anything we can do until he comes back?»
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(Do you have a Shatteredclan cat? owo or maybe someone could join us..) Twistedstripes stayed silent for a moment before answering,"I...am not very sure. I guess you could just stay and enjoy yourself here."
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( Maplecloud will join your clan! :3 )
«Okay! You are such a nice cat Twistedstripes!»,she purrs.
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(yeah i know but like a different character xD) The tabby flashed her a crooked grin, eyes bright. "Haha, thanks. You're not so bad yourself, Maplecloud. "
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(Why this question? Hehe xD )
«Thank you!»,she purrs, blushing a little.
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(|D) He chuckled a bit, himself embarrassed. "Erm..of course,"he mewed.
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( Well, I'll maybe ask for 2 more slots for characters because I already have 4 chars ^^ )
She purrs louder, she was really enjoying his presence. Maybe a little bit too much?
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(okay! : D ) Okay, now this was starting to get a bit awkward for him. But awkward in a good way..right? Twistedstripes couldn't get that single thought out of his mind, and he frowned slightly to himself. Feeling hot under his fur, he flicked his tail at the fresh-kill pile. "Wanna share something? I'm sure you're hungry,"he mewed, voice cracking a bit at the end.
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She nods, she was hungry. She could eat a fox! «Sure! You completely read my mind!»,she purrs, feeling a little bit hot inside. Just sharing something!
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He smiled at her once more, blushing slightly. Hopefully, she didn't notice his voice crack. "Then what are we doing standing around? Let's go eat!"He meowed happily before nodding at the direction of the pile. He trotted over to the pile and grabbed the biggest fish there was. After all, she said she was hungry, right? Twistedstripes smiled before turning back to her, eyes bright.
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When she saw the fish's size, her eyes widly opened and she could make them glittered. She purrs louder as she padded toward the tom. «Thank you very much!»,she purrs softly.
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He dipped his head at her before pawing the fish in her direction."She-cats first,"he purred.
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She takes a bite on the fish and purrs louder. Without noticing, she gets nearer to Twistedstripes and brushes her fur against him as she pawed the fish to him. She blushes as she saw what she have done. «Sorry!»,she whispers with a big surprise look in her face. She returns back where she was and turns her head away from him. «Tom's turn...»,she mews.
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Twistedstripes froze, a wave of heat coming over him and causing for his cheeks to flush red. "U-Uh-Uh,"he stuttered, his paws shuffling in the sand, and stared at his paws. "T-Thanks,"he mewed and bent down to take a small bite. Did she do what he thought she did?
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Like if she reads his mind, she whispers: «Sorry I... It was like a reflex...I-I... Sorry it won't happen again... I-It just that I feel so happy around you.... And c-comfortable...»
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He stopped, his muzzle just barely a claw length away from the fish, glancing at her through the corner of her eye. He sat back up straight, having a distant look, before leaning in and touching her forehead with his muzzle, as if in reassurance. "It's okay,"he murmured."
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She was feeling really hot inside and the feeling was pretty intense. Maplecloud looks at him and nods with a purr. She smiles and closes her eyes. «Okay, if you say so!»,she mews softly.
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Twistedstripes watched her before offering her a smile, and taking a step back. "Good,"was all he that came out of his mouth, and he took a small bite of the fish.
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«I-I'm sorry! This thing embarasses you, am I right?»,she whispers, blushing hard.
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He stopped, his muzzle still buried in the fish, but his ice blue eyes were staring up at the she-cat."No. I do not feel embarrassed. Why should I?"He murmured, although his voice seemed to be in a soft coo.
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«Well... Your tone of voice was making me feel like this...»,she whispers, turning her face away.
(Who support TwistedXMaple? o3o Woot!!! >3< )
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Twistedstripes blinked, a bit surprised by her response, and lifted his head up and away from the half eaten fish. "I..I apologize, then.."he mewed, his blue eyes round.
(woot woot! xD im going to draw this scene owo)
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She faces him and blushes more, not hiding it. «What are you feeling when you're around me?»,she asks, not even looking away, asking this without any crack in her voice.
(Yay~ x3 I must draw them! x3 )
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The tabby tom felt his body become numb, and it was as if his own paws were frozen to the ground like ice. He felt hot under his pelt, and scrambled to find the right words. "Uh..I-I.."he stammered, but closed his mouth, shyly looking at his paws. What is wrong with me?! He thought to himself, and his ears flattened.
(i am gonna draw this scene, when she asks him this ^^)
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( Haha! It will be nice! I'm looking forward to see how it will turn out! x3 )
The she-cat sighs and blushes. «Since you can't told me, I'll told you my feelings. When I first saw you on the sunlight, I think that you were a beautiful tom and I was right! You are not only beautiful on the appearence though! You're an amazing tom Twistedstripes and... I-I think that I-I love you...»,she mews softly, barely looknig at him when she told him that she was loving him.
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( ^w^ im sketching it right now~ and wow, such a fast love xD) Immediately, Twistedstripes felt a heavy hot feeling on his face, and the feeling made his paws feel numb and his insides squirm. Was this really happening? "R-R..Really?"He stuttered, and a faint light of hope shone in his light blue eyes.
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