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Description Trigger Warning: Incest and sexual themes.

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All he could hear was the rush of the river beside them, as he stared down at his leader, lying helpless right there while his brother stood over him, his claws unsheathed while he waited patiently for his brother to decide. "It's me or him, Brambleclaw," his brother breathed out, his eyes full of malice and dark amusement as the broad-shoulder tom lunged forward.

"Hawkfrost ... " Brambleclaw gurgled, swallowing the horror that rose in his throat as he tried again. "Hawkfrost, don't do this," he managed, after a moment, placing his paw atop of his brother's. The blue-eyed tom smirked at the ThunderClanner, a smug look on his face. The sun bled into the sky as it began it's slow descent beyond the horizon, painting the world in a vast array of colors.

"I knew it, you couldn't do it, you never could," the other brown tabby barked out, a brief look of disgust crossing his face as he slowly shook his head, dismissing the ThunderClanner's paw off of his own and unhooking his thorn sharp claws from the leader's back, who hissed in pain. Hawkfrost wrenched his paw back before kicking the ginger leader, which earned him a groan of guttural pain, causing Goldenflower's son to flinch.

"We could have ruled together, brother. Nobody could have stopped us; nobody to defeat us; nobody to tell us what's what." His brother's voice was almost as cold as the moon looked as it glistened overhead, painting the blood that spread across the ground with threads of silver. "Unstoppable, just you and me."

"No," Brambleclaw swallowed, his amber eyes hardening as he ground the words out. Hawkfrost looked disappointed for a moment and mildly surprised before giving a roll of his shoulders. He let his eyes raise to the other muscular tom's face with a smirk playing across his features, making him look demented. "Leave, Hawkfrost. And never come back, or next time, I swear ... I'll kill you." His voice wavered at the last bit but he raised his head, challenging the RiverClanner to his threat.

"Ooh, really, brother? Do you think you could actually live up to that promise?" His brother cackled, moving away from the dark ginger leader who seemed to sag into the grass that was stained with his blood, looking utterly defeated, despite Brambleclaw unable to actually see the ThunderClan leader's face. He was startled out of his thoughts by a tail that slithered between his legs and he let out a soft gasp of surprise and flinching, as if hit. "Hmm, looks like you don't want me to go." Brambleclaw's breath caught each time that his brother stroked with his tail, his vision fogging over, swaying subconsciously towards the touch.

He closed his amber eyes, gulping down air as the scent of fish and blood filled his nostrils as his brother practically sat on him, with the way he was curling around him. The brown tabby's eyes went unfocused and let out a growl of complaint when his brother's warmth left him, the cool night air making him shiver despite his shaggy fur. "Hawkfrost," he ground out, trying to focus on his brother before shaking his head, trying to rid himself of the shivers of pleasure before he felt a set of paws ease him onto the ground and a weight settled along his back. Brambleclaw submitted as Hawkfrost purred above him, letting clouds dot his vision and fog his mind, preparing himself for what was to come when a cough rose from his ginger leader who lay facedown in the ground. He was still alive and awake.

They both froze before the blue-eyed tom sighed and dismounted his brother -much to his displeasure- and eyed him warily. "I'll leave, but that doesn't mean I won't be back," he promised before streaking away, and Brambleclaw watched him until his tail disappeared into the shadows before turning to his head. As he unlocked him from the trap, he purposefully avoided his leader's gaze.

"..I'm not going to ask," Firestar murmured after a moment, blinking at him with a mix of emotions swirling in his green eyes, the air around them feeling awkward as he adjusted his injured limbs so that it didn't hurt him as much when they headed back to camp. "And you will not tell me. We will never speak of that again."

All that Brambleclaw could do was nod in agreement.
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Comments: 44

LazerTheEpicWolf [2015-12-13 17:03:22 +0000 UTC]

Firestar: WTF?

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LazerTheEpicWolf [2015-12-13 17:03:12 +0000 UTC]

Poor Firestar...... haveing to see that.... XD

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camilionkd In reply to LazerTheEpicWolf [2015-12-17 04:41:04 +0000 UTC]

See it ... hear it ... yikes, I'd be traumatized for life. He's probably just hoping that it won't happen again.

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TigerCub2004 [2015-07-10 03:43:53 +0000 UTC]

i haven't read this yet.... THEY. ARE. BROTHERS. ..............okay, done. time to read it.




just read it. OMG

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camilionkd In reply to TigerCub2004 [2015-07-10 05:44:34 +0000 UTC]

Yep, they definitely are brothers. They're actually a popular ship, and people seem to ship them alot. *shrugs*

Is that a good or bad "omg"?

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TigerCub2004 In reply to camilionkd [2015-07-10 18:48:58 +0000 UTC]

idk, i just don't ship them, i don't support homecrest.

i love your writing, but for this one thing it was a bad omg

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camilionkd In reply to TigerCub2004 [2015-07-14 20:47:44 +0000 UTC]

Ah... Homecrest? Was that autocorrect or did you really mean to type that?

Eh, some people do. This was a request, anyways.

Thank you. Ah, right, well, some people just don't like this ship.

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TigerCub2004 In reply to camilionkd [2015-07-22 00:23:02 +0000 UTC]

oh, sorry, i read the description too fast and thought it said homecrest XD. but yeah, i just dont support itΒ  Β 

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camilionkd In reply to TigerCub2004 [2015-07-22 02:34:53 +0000 UTC]

Oh, that's fine.
Eh, you don't have to.

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gdpr-35366737 [2015-05-16 12:40:28 +0000 UTC]

Tigercest <3

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camilionkd In reply to gdpr-35366737 [2015-05-16 21:05:38 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm, I think Tigercest would imply Tigerstar/heartxhimself, though? ;0

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Werwer101 [2015-02-21 00:13:06 +0000 UTC]

I don't think FireStar will ever looking at BrambleClaw the same way again .-.

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camilionkd In reply to Werwer101 [2015-02-21 01:57:51 +0000 UTC]

Firestar is internally scarred for life; he has seen a side of Brambleclaw he hasn't wished to see. xD

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Werwer101 In reply to camilionkd [2015-02-21 02:14:30 +0000 UTC]

Lol, IKR! I feel bad for FireStar... He should've not been able to see that

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camilionkd In reply to Werwer101 [2015-02-24 04:36:11 +0000 UTC]

Yeah! Firestar does not appreciate that. Expecially so close to him.
Although, he's one to talk considering that he also did it with a tom, albiet not his brother. So. He's probably more freaked out over the fact that it was so close to his face.

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Werwer101 In reply to camilionkd [2015-02-28 00:42:26 +0000 UTC]

Gosh, he's probably traumitized! Not because he almost was strangled and almost had all lives taken from him, but because he almost watched a brother-brother mating ;3;

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camilionkd In reply to Werwer101 [2015-02-28 01:54:29 +0000 UTC]

Yeah! Most definitely! He'll need a couple trips to the psychologist (medicine cat) to help cope with that, I bet.

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Werwer101 In reply to camilionkd [2015-03-13 11:28:46 +0000 UTC]

I agree... ;3; I think he was glad to die and not be around BrambleClaw XD

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camilionkd In reply to Werwer101 [2015-03-13 20:05:47 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, and not be constantly reminded by what happened that day. xD

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Werwer101 In reply to camilionkd [2015-03-14 20:18:35 +0000 UTC]

.... I would purposely run out in the street if I were FireStar .3.

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camilionkd In reply to Werwer101 [2015-03-14 20:20:40 +0000 UTC]

Hm. Might be a painful death but hopefully it'd be a quick one.

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Werwer101 In reply to camilionkd [2015-03-14 20:30:55 +0000 UTC]

Yeah..... *Yolo face*

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camilionkd In reply to Werwer101 [2015-03-14 21:59:22 +0000 UTC]

Its not yolo if you're given nine lives.

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Werwer101 In reply to camilionkd [2015-03-14 22:01:47 +0000 UTC]

Yolnt!

((you only live nine times)) :3

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camilionkd In reply to Werwer101 [2015-03-15 07:20:03 +0000 UTC]

Yep. That works.

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Werwer101 In reply to camilionkd [2015-03-15 13:30:16 +0000 UTC]

Yes, it totally does work. Yes it totally does.

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The-Roaming-Spirit [2014-03-26 00:19:30 +0000 UTC]

Awwkwarrrddd~ XD

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camilionkd In reply to The-Roaming-Spirit [2014-03-26 01:49:39 +0000 UTC]

And so, they barely could look at each other because they keep remembering that unfortunate incident.

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Huntainers [2014-03-24 13:31:47 +0000 UTC]

My OTfrickinP. I'd read a lemon about them if you ever posted it, definitely. But this was so well written, and I loved Firestar's little bit at the end.

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camilionkd In reply to Huntainers [2014-03-24 21:50:21 +0000 UTC]

Glad you enjoyed it. Not my best work, not my longest, but glad that some enjoy this!
Aha, I actually read once that writing lemons could help improve your writing skills? I don't know if that's true, but I was definitely considering it.
Firestar didn't seem to upset about it, either, though. Hmm.

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Huntainers In reply to camilionkd [2014-03-24 21:56:38 +0000 UTC]

Lemons are extremely fun to write And even if it's not long, it's still good!

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camilionkd In reply to Huntainers [2014-03-25 01:11:37 +0000 UTC]

Oh, are they really? Well, I might do one then ... sometime. Don't know which pairing to use for it then, though.
Do you have any tips for a possible lemon writer?

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Huntainers In reply to camilionkd [2014-03-25 14:25:47 +0000 UTC]

I would just suggest remembering cats anatomy, and trying to incorporate what the characters are feeling when they're going through it. A good lemon does focus on the emotions and the feelings more than just what's happening.

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camilionkd In reply to Huntainers [2014-03-26 02:06:40 +0000 UTC]

Right, I know quite a bit about the anatomy, I suppose. But apparently the toms have barbs? Talk about painful.. I think I understand quite a bit of it, and even looked up some other tips to help with writing one (a lemon, not a warriors lemon fic as I couldn't find other tips on that).
I know that most lemons express the need to get laid, but yes, I think that lemons with a plot is definitely a better choice -- or at least one where the characters are believable and the emotional bits in there, too.
Ah, sorry, I rambled a bit.
Thanks for the tips.

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Orange-Flamethrower [2014-03-24 12:51:50 +0000 UTC]

...................... so close

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camilionkd In reply to Orange-Flamethrower [2014-03-24 21:47:45 +0000 UTC]

So close until Firestar ruined it.

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Orange-Flamethrower In reply to camilionkd [2014-03-24 22:14:56 +0000 UTC]

damn it FirestarΒ  Β 

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camilionkd In reply to Orange-Flamethrower [2014-03-25 00:59:03 +0000 UTC]

Whoa, whoa, whoa. You wanted them to continue?

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Orange-Flamethrower In reply to camilionkd [2014-03-25 01:01:28 +0000 UTC]

...................................... um noo? MAYBEΒ  Β 

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camilionkd In reply to Orange-Flamethrower [2014-03-25 01:14:16 +0000 UTC]

If I knew how to properly write a lemon, I totally would.

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Orange-Flamethrower In reply to camilionkd [2014-03-25 01:15:29 +0000 UTC]

OMFG THAT WOULD BE AWESOME

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camilionkd In reply to Orange-Flamethrower [2014-03-25 01:28:30 +0000 UTC]

I asked for tips from someone who also approved of BrambleHawk. So maybe you get to see it if I ever write it.

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Orange-Flamethrower In reply to camilionkd [2014-03-25 01:32:33 +0000 UTC]

YAY!!!!

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camilionkd In reply to Orange-Flamethrower [2014-03-25 01:34:12 +0000 UTC]

Cx

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